(My daughter is a vampire. She is going to the cemetery to sleep the day away in a crypt with her vampire lover.)--I'd imagine that would take some getting used to. Gotta love Joyce in this fic. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Yep, it probably will.:)

Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks.

Or you just have to write a summary if only a few words are missing (I see that sometimes here...).
Two:
Spike's poor mouth, running away with him again. Now he said something he regrets, said he would leave. Hard to tell if that got Buffy thinking.... if she'll let him go and let Angel play the protector.
Three:
Angel did outran his own arguments.. first he wanted to go because he is needed in L.A., then he wants to stay when Spike goes because at once he isn't needed? Buffy is right, he's only jealous. Still good to read Buffy convinced Spike to stay :)

Author's Response: I thought about that - it wouldn't haven taken much. I was only short a few words, I think. Next time it happens. I don't very often have chapters that short, so it' s not a big deal.