Reviews For Mate's Pain
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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2011 - 12:44 am Title: Chapter 21

You have great plot ideas, and are pretty good at dialogue, but you are "telling" instead of "showing" a lot of the "action."

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2007 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 21

Aww, Willow and Tara :) So sweet. So Buffy and Spike are looking for a house. Nice :)

Author's Response: well this is season 4 so yeah Willow and Tara are getting the start, sort of dropped hints chapter 4 or 5. Thanks.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2007 - 12:36 am Title: Chapter 21

Love it!!!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2007 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 21

Really great chapter! Loved it! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you.

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