I really like your story very much - like I said, I've read it before and have enjoyed it every time.

I do want to say this time around - that while I always enjoy a bit of Angel/Angelus "what a jerk" I think that your so frequent mocking of Angel takes away from the quality of your story. Every thing else so well that the contrast with Angel's "mocking" seems somehow out of sync with the rest of how you voice your characters. I understand that it's meant as adding humor to your story as well as showing the self-importance attitude but maybe a more balanced exploration of the character would add to the general quality of your wonderful story.

Oh that was to good, Angel is getting full of him self, but if they don't let Willow get into that much Magic it could alter Buffys time even more and cause he to never have been reserectted.