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YAY! There's more!

Niamh

After reading your comments regarding the review that stayed with you, I made it a point to read the reviews that had been left. It made me realize that I’ve taken for granted the time and talent writers put into creating the fiction that has given me so much pleasure.

I read an inordinate amount, books and online fan fiction and while I have favorite authors sometimes even a favorite author can write a dud or more often than not write a plot that I don’t understand or enjoy or a plot that is unique but the grammar and/or spelling is such that I spend more time attempting to correct it than read it. When that happens, either I put the book down or I stop reading it online. What I would never do is assume that I could have written it better or leave a review that berates an author that has put so much time and effort into writing a story. I don’t have that given talent or imagination to put words to paper but I truly appreciate those that do.

What I most appreciate about fan fiction is when a story takes a character that I truly detest and writes him or her in such a way that I end of liking the character, which for me is a pleasure. Then there are the stories that reiterates the negative feelings that I have for the character, I enjoy those even more.

Specifically regarding the Origin stories, I have enjoyed them immensely. I prefer long stories and you have provided that in spades. I find the characterization and pacing wonderful. Please try to release whatever negative feelings that the reviewer engendered and continue with your wonderful writing. Reviewers are entitled to their opinions but until they put themselves on the line (as you and other authors have done) with well thought out stories and puts it out there for others to read and critique then they are just whistling in the wind.

My humble opinion only.

oh, you are so wonderful!!!

Thank your muse for me for encouraging you to write.

sounds like things could get very interesting very quickly. Already you have so many questions I can't wait for you to answer.

Keep it coming :)

Always glad to see more of this verse. I do enjoy the characters.

Wonderful!!! So glad your muse wanted you start immediately; starting off with giving Faith freedom, Jenner better be paying. And getting rid of Xander for Anya a stroke of greatness, she truly deserves more than just sex she is worthy of love. A waddling Buffy must be sight to actually see, Cordy was bad enough when she was pregnant. Thanks for beginning do you have a feel for how many chapters this will be and does Kris their daughter have anymore stories we should look for?

Ohhhh! Faith is quitting her job so to say. I didn't expect Faith to be the one on the table. Sounds as if they did it on purpose to get another girl called.
Connor feels the 'sins of the fathers'. He may be Angel's and Darla's by blood but he is Buffy's and Spike's by heart.
Xander still didn't change his ways.. sadly but right, Anya won't come first for him rather Buffy or Willow. No way to treat your girlfriend/wife.
Wonder if Willow changed.
Loved to see the new story :)

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i only recently found the first two Origin books and did nothing bu read them until I had finished two of the most amazing pieces of fiction I've ever had the pleasure of reading. I was beyond thrilled to see a new chapter up today and I eagerly await more!!

You are a goddess!!! I, personaly , am ending my moping around, because my favorit story didn't end.

You've started the sequel already! Thank you! Great resolution of the Xander/Anya relationship. I'm so glad taht she threw him out of her life. She is a much better match for Giles. Great story, looking forward to more. I'm really interested in seeing why they had to 'kill' Faith.

i always thought that Anya and giles could be good together i think her knowledge could have helped alot if she had been with anyone but Zander..great new chapter.look forward to more...N