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Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2007 - 06:31 pm Title: Tossing and Turning

oh I don't know if i like this, but I was warned.

Author's Response: No, it's bad! But it'll be ok in the end, I promise, if you can make it through the next chapter.

Reviewer: wall_flower Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2007 - 03:08 pm Title: Tossing and Turning

Spike's trying to move on, while poor Buffy is tossing and turning all night. There has to be more to this whole Spike/Dru situation, however, since Spike claimed that it was Buffy's fault that their relationship ended. More more more! x

Author's Response: Oh yay, you picked up on that. Yes, there's more! :) Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2007 - 05:53 am Title: Tossing and Turning

No Spike that is a bad Spike! *Pops Spike on the nose*

I hope Buffy gets to fight that girl, and kick her butt!

Author's Response: Yes, bad Spike. Thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2007 - 05:27 am Title: Tossing and Turning

Love the story so far, but thought it was a bad place to leave it there as the thought of Spike moving on so quickly and thoroughly is a bit of a turn off.
If it was harmless with Dru, why wouldn´t he even try to explain it all? And if he really cheated, which we don´t know yet, and then moves on so quickly, the whole story is meaningless, because he´d be an extreme ass and not really in love with Buffy at all. Anyway, just having sex with the next girl who comes onto him is a very bad choice and I can´t see where this story can become spuffy if they move on so fast and Spike gets laid so quickly by someone else.


Author's Response: Thank you for the review. As I posted to ochit duzon, the reviewer before you, because I got a review, I was motivated to edit the last bit I have written. I just have to skim it through once again and post it. I don't want to leave it in a bad place, you're right. Well at least cliffhanger-wise (holy non-word there). But there really isn't any fluffy stuff in the next chapter either, This story kinda has lots of bad places along the way to a good place. Hopefully, the story isn't meaningless, we'll have to see. As for Spike being an extreme ass, I don't think he is, people make bad choices sometimes and hey, she doesn't want anything to do with him at this point, so he might be a little vulnerable to the bad choices at the moment. Did warn you about the Spike/Other though.. :)

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2007 - 05:07 am Title: Tossing and Turning

I like this story! Im very interested! Did Spike really cheat on Buffy? i hope you would be able to clear this issue in your next chapter. Looking forward to see if Spike will sleep with the girl or not!

Author's Response: Thank you! Yay, you're my first review. This is fun. I'm editing the next chapter now, since you posted this. Hopefully, it'll answer your questions (somewhat). After that, though, I'll have to write some more, because this is the last thing I had even roughly written out.

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