Well for me I notice(d) the warning about the xx/other; I just don't like them. It's harder for me to read if they have been together. And sometimes the reason I won't start a fic. Reading a WIP doesn't allow you to know how the story ends ;-)
~ I'm sad for them that they have to part here for a year. Spike doesn't even remember the dream much. I like the thought the woman had: Every girl, every woman deserves the memory of a loving first time That was a memory Buffy didn't have in that life. Otherwise: Love the spuffyness in the chapter.

Author's Response: more spuffyness to come, but other things first:) thanks for the review. I really look forward to getting yours