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Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2007 - 01:45 pm Title: Grief

Poor Willaim, erm I mean Spike... but, Yeay for Buffy being there for him! Loved this chap hun, on to the next! xxx

Author's Response: Thank you, yes it's good she tracked him down. It's tough leaving a review every chapter when you know the next one is just sitting there isn't it? Must...not...click...next before commenting...argh. hehe. Thank you for doing it though :)

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2007 - 01:02 pm Title: Making Peace

HEHEHE Angel is jealous! and Buffy- wont happen again *snorts* oh hell yeah it will coz you wont be able to help yourself! lol good chappie hun !

weldone! xx

Author's Response: Yeah, it was hard to type that with a straight face. Thanks, Kat! :)

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2007 - 12:42 pm Title: All Bad-moody

Ohhh... Buffy buying a thankyou gift ... hmmm, and she's noticed the colour of her tutors eyes has she!

Angel's jealous, and umm, excuse me but how does Cordy know that Angel is not happy? does that mean she's been spending time with Buffy's boyfriend???

xxx Enjoying! xx

Author's Response: Yes, yes she has noticed his eyes.

Oh, you're just too smart :P Thank you for the comments :)

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2007 - 12:30 pm Title: A Little History

Another good chapter...

Hmm, Spike's uncle dissapeared around the same time his Dad died... curious?!!! or am I reaching???

On to the next! Brilliant by the way hun! xx

Author's Response: Can't say either way :) Thank you!

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2007 - 12:17 pm Title: Kiss Me Again

I have a feeling, that this fic is going to mirror parts of Wuthering Heights. I'm I right, is there going to be loads of angst and me shouting at Buffy later on???

grat chap now on to the next! xx

Author's Response: Well, it was supposed to have more tie-ins, but then I'm not sure what happened, it got away from me and other stuff happened, lol. Thanks for the review, Kat! :)

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2007 - 11:46 am Title: Introduction in a library

*Slaps herself upside the head* why WHY!!!! did it take me so long to start this fic?

*shakes head* I'm a bad person! lol Ok, you have me hooked *flees to read the next chapter* xx

Author's Response: 'Cause I can't write a summary to save my life and it sounded boring maybe? :) Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kat.

Reviewer: MOa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2007 - 09:52 am Title: Working Out?

great

Author's Response: Thank you! Thanks for reviewing :)

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Date: 08/01/2007 - 10:18 pm Title: Working Out?

Still enjoying this please continue :)

Author's Response: Thanks and thank you for commenting! :) I hope to update this weekend.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2007 - 09:55 pm Title: Working Out?

The men gathering around a vulnerable Buffy was scary. If she's going to be at the gym several more times, how is she going to protect herself? Will can't be responsible for her safety every time she leaves the building. The self defense lessons are an excellent way for some one on one time, but they're going to leave her in the gym twelve more times...

Will's attraction and confused emotions are making him gruffer than usual. Buffy's not a mind reader, and neither is he. They really just need to talk honestly with one another, but at that age it's difficult to sort strong emotions.

Will doesn't seem to be more than friends with Dru, but she's certainly got designs on him. I like how nutty you're writing her, it's very amusing. Thanks for another tight chapter.

Author's Response: Hmmm. You've just made me mentally add something to the next chapter, because of course, I glossed over the safety aspect with a "well, she's a high school kid, they do risky stuff sometimes" (which probably isn't fair to say, adults do so as well!) I remember going along with some fairly braindead plans sometimes in high school just because someone I liked would be present. But Buffy's not stupid. Thanks for bringing up the point.

Yeah, I had some of the most honest, heartfelt conversations I've ever had in my life at that age - but they were oddly always with my friends, never my boyfriends. In this case, neither one is sure of the other, so that makes it tough to broach any touchy subject.

Dru brings a snippet of Winston Churchill's famous line to my mind - "a riddle, wrapped in a mystery, inside an enigma; but perhaps there is a key". Ok, ok, so she's not that deep, certainly not in this story, but she is a ton of fun to write and her intentions at this point in the story are relatively murky other than the fact that she obviously likes William. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2007 - 09:39 pm Title: A Way To Be There

Buffy drifting apart from her friends is believable. It's hard to maintain a high level of enthusiasm for something you no longer are a part of, and her circle is all about the cheerleading and football. Her sense of satisfaction over Angel playing poorly fits right into the high school mindset. Nice and petty, but understandable.

I love that she's seeking Will out. She can't become his friend if they're out of one another's orbits. This was another entertaining chapter.

Author's Response: The Angel thing was petty, but yes I thought it was kinda human and normal. Not like she's wishing him something horrible, but if he drops the ball she's not going to be too upset!

Right, this story's stuck if Buffy and Will don't see each other at all because they don't have an extensive prior relationship or anything, just a budding attraction. So she has to go to the gym.

Thank you and thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2007 - 09:15 pm Title: Working Out?

Dru is starting to show her true colors. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: She is sort of snippy to Buffy in this chapter huh, hehe, but Buffy certainly wasn't nice either! :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2007 - 05:19 pm Title: Working Out?

Great update! Poor William and Buffy they both have feelings for each other but are scared to express them. Can't wait for her to start her self defense lessons with him.

Author's Response: Yes, they are. Self defense coming right up! Thanks so much for reviewing :)

Reviewer: janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2007 - 04:57 pm Title: Working Out?

ooooh somebody's jealous ;) i can't wait to see how this is gonna develop. more more more! (im greedy; indulge me :D )

Author's Response: Haha, no kidding. I'm hoping to have another chapter up this weekend. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2007 - 05:51 am Title: Working Out?

Loved the update! I'm glad William's taking Buffy to the bus stop, maybe they'll get a chance to talk some more. Please update again soon, I really love this story! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm hoping to update this weekend. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2007 - 02:09 am Title: Working Out?

great chapter!!!! i cant wait until the next update! when will that be? tonight? =] just kidding, but hopefully soon? youre an amazing writer btw.

Author's Response: Thank you! Er...no, it wasn't last night and um, not tonight either, been kind of busy at work (where I typically slack off and write in the really dull periods). I know what happens next, but I haven't written out my notes yet. Hopefully, I'll have another update this weekend. That's the plan, anyway. Thanks so much for the compliment and the review!

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2007 - 01:29 am Title: Working Out?

ah, poor Buffy, such a victim. But she has guts. I can't wait for Buffy and William to get comfortable with each other.

Author's Response: She's had a few bad experiences, yeah. It may take a little while for them to be comfortable again. William's still self conscious about that night at his house and preoccupied with his mother's situation, adding Buffy confusion to the mix is well...not relaxing lol. Buffy's feeling a little awkward and stalkerish too, she's stuck her neck out about as much as she's willing to at this point. So nobody's comfy just yet. Thanks so much for reviewing each chapter! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2007 - 09:39 pm Title: Working Out?

No girls restroom... Glad William was watching out.
Oh, cat fight with Dru. And poor Dru and her Daddy Dearest.

More alone time with William as her personal trainer.

Enjoying.

Author's Response: Yeah, no women's locker room, anyway. Re: the catfight, there was no screeching and hair pulling, just an oh so civilized (minus the barking) exchange of words hehe. More William time for Buffy can't be bad. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2007 - 09:27 pm Title: Working Out?

Boo Dru. But maybe someone will come along and explain to Spike that she's jealous. That should throw a monkey wrench into the whole 'she just wants me for my brains" thing he's go going.

Author's Response: Yes, Dru's still in the picture for now. Well, Buffy didn't ask him anything school related this time, but she does want him to teach her something else so... Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Penny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2007 - 09:26 pm Title: Working Out?

Another great chapter.

William teaching Buffy self defense. Should be great.

I had to laugh at both Buffy and Dru. Lookout, cat fight over sweet William. haha... They both want him and William just seems to be thinking of keeping busy to not think of his mother.

I don't know what is going on with Dru and her father. But I kind of feel bad for Dru if her dad is mean to her for no reason.

Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hehe, you hit that on the head.

Well, I'm sure Dru's father has some reasons. Dru can be frustrating and unpredictable. Who knows what she's done in the past? So whether his reasons are good, I don't know. But he did basically pick money over her feelings in this case.

Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2007 - 09:21 pm Title: Working Out?

please get rid of drusilla

Author's Response: I'm sorry, I can't just yet. :( Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2007 - 01:32 pm Title: A Way To Be There

I'm so used to Buffy being the overtly thick one, I almost forget that Spike's just as quick to sink into denial as she is.

Author's Response: Yeah, I think he's kind of thinking defensively, he really can't open himself up for any more hurt at this stage and I don't think it's even crossed his mind that she might be actually interested in him as anything other than a tutor. Remember, she did imply/say that in that conversation with Dawn that he was witness to. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2007 - 12:58 pm Title: Daddy

I love the affectionate and squabbling sibling relationship you're building between Dawn and Buffy. Hank setting Buffy up on a date with Parker is worrisome. At least you have her feeling uneasy about the snake.

Buffy's attempts to be friends with William are heartfelt, but he really does have a lot on his plate right now. I hope he softens toward her soon, it's sad to have her groveling after him like a kicked puppy.

Author's Response: Thanks, yes Dawn will take her jabs when the opportunity presents, what self respecting younger sister wouldn't, but she does love her sister.

Buffy's a little at loose ends at the moment. Her friends are all busy with cheerleading and football and she can't participate and anyway, that's a little awkward because of the whole Angel/Cordy thing. She still hasn't made any big steps in public, since the hallway argument, but because of her relative isolation and she knows how horrible William is feeling, she's being more persistent than she might have been otherwise. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2007 - 10:32 pm Title: A Way To Be There

William still doesn't get it but I give Buffy points for trying yet again! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Yes, she's trying! Thanks, and thank you for reviewing :)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2007 - 06:13 pm Title: A Way To Be There

Poor clueless William...though I suppose he would run the other way if Buffy did ask for his friendship. I like Buffy's persistance.

Author's Response: She's trying. She has a bit of added incentive too, since her friends are busy with after school stuff that she can't do at the moment. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)

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Date: 07/28/2007 - 07:46 am Title: A Way To Be There

Good thing that Angel (or Riley) don't press charges against William.
Oh clever! Buffy found a way to see William at all. We have to wait how it will turn out (Buffy's plan).

Author's Response: Yes, that would be the last thing William needs. I wouldn't call what Buffy's doing as elaborate as a "plan" LOL. Dawn would probably say it was her idea anyway :) Thanks so much for reviewing!

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