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Reviewer: u_r_bad Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 - 10:33 pm Title: Surprises

don't tease~!

argh!!

i've waited NINETEEN chapters for that kiss.

EVIL!!!

Author's Response: I'm sorry!!!! I'll try to do better next chapter. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 - 07:33 pm Title: Surprises

What a sweet chapter. I'm ready for more. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: PamS Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 - 06:56 pm Title: Surprises

Another chapter..

Need to go back and read about Uncle Ethan...but at least he showed up to help with Anne's medical problem.

And the kiss.. sweet.

Author's Response: He did. He was always going to show up but...originally, Anne died and he showed up after that. Then I realized part of the reason I had writer's block was because I didn't want to write about her death. So, she has a reprieve, for now anyway. Maybe it was cheesy to do it this way, but I couldn't get past the block so... Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Penny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 - 06:31 pm Title: Surprises

Always happy to see a new chapter from this story.

I really adore William in this story. I hope his mom is going to be ok. So, his uncle Ethan is doing something illegal. But at least he is getting better care for his mom.

But what made my Spuffy happy is that Buffy finally made the first move and kissed lovable William. William should be so happy that his girl wants him too.

Although, William is brave if he is going to teach Buffy how to drive. You have to laugh at Buffy and her driving skills.

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. Yeah, and William's witnessed those skills so somehow I think the driving lessons aren't going to happen, kiss or no kiss!Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 11:24 pm Title: Out to Lunch

Love how both Buffy and William both think they don't have a chance with the other. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Yes, both so unsure of themselves. Thanks very much for the review :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2008 - 10:37 am Title: Out to Lunch

Uh-huh.... Buffy was too slow to react when Dru asked William. Dawn is right, maybe Buffy should try to ask William. He's too shy.
Uncle Ethan? I hope that's a good thing he's there now.

Author's Response: Probably wasn't too much she could do after Dru asked. It was the before she could've changed. Oh well. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2008 - 12:31 am Title: Out to Lunch

Dawn is cute. And it would be a pretty short story if she was right.

Author's Response: Well, some would say it's dragging on too long as it is, I'm sure! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2008 - 03:17 am Title: Out to Lunch

Dawn is very very smart. Buffy and William makes things way too hard! LOL

Author's Response: But she flunked at spying this chapter. :) They do make things difficult don't they? Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Michelle D. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2008 - 02:45 am Title: Out to Lunch

I'm not sure if I have reviewed this story yet, but I have been following and enjoying it for a while. You do a great job with pacing and character development.

I'm always happy to see an update.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I really appreciate it. It's always nice to get feedback. I'm glad you're still reading despite my horrible update lags. :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2008 - 02:01 am Title: Out to Lunch

Enjoyed the update...

Poor Dawn.. worked so hard... clueless... sister indeed..



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're still reading. Yes, all that hard work for so little gain! She's a bit frustrated with Buffy at the moment. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2008 - 06:51 pm Title: Shopping with Dawn

I'm so glad you decided to update - too many stories are left unfinished. The story is excellent so far, keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you. I agree! There are so many stories I wish would be completed. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: notwhomever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2008 - 08:15 pm Title: Shopping with Dawn

glad to see an update, there are very, very few AUs I enjoy reading, the personalities of the characters tend to be altered beyond recognition in many, your vision of what each character would be like if strictly human rings true for me.
hope to see more soon

Author's Response: Thank you. What a great compliment. I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2008 - 01:14 pm Title: Shopping with Dawn

Well done :)

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2008 - 10:09 pm Title: Shopping with Dawn

This is such a great fic!
I've just found it, and I'm really enjoying it! Cant wait for another part! I love your portrayal of William.
Hope there's more soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it. I've just posted another chapter and I'm working on the next. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: djonie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2008 - 11:08 am Title: Shopping with Dawn

Love this story! I hope you'll update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2007 - 11:13 pm Title: Shopping with Dawn

The wheels are sure turning in Dawn's head! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Yes, she's a quick one. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2007 - 01:01 am Title: Shopping with Dawn

yah, more ! Dawn is good, evil bint!

Author's Response: Yes, she is! Though not as adept a spy as she thought...lol. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2007 - 12:53 am Title: Shopping with Dawn

Hee, good to see you back with this awesome story! Loved the chapter, loved this Dawn and her relationship with her sister. She's a mastermind. *giggles* Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I can't wait to read more of Art of Immortality too. I want to get all caught up. I love that story.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2007 - 11:12 pm Title: Shopping with Dawn

Good to see another update :)
Ah sneaky Dawn was successful *gg*. She caring for Buffy more than Buffy thinks. ~ Enjoyed the update and Dawn managing 'to buy' some time for Buffy and William.

Author's Response: She did pretty well, didn't she? I thought she recovered from being caught quite nicely. :) Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2007 - 09:00 am Title: Shopping with Dawn

Yaay! I'm so happy to see this story has been updated! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Maddy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2007 - 06:40 am Title: Shopping with Dawn

That was brilliant! I love Dawn in this. Good to see you back. :)

Author's Response: Thank you and thanks so much for reviewing. I appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: Pyro63 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2007 - 04:52 am Title: Shopping with Dawn

Ahh it's not messy it's awesome. So don't you worry about it. And yes you should feel horrible guilt for not updating, so don't do it again! *hint*hint* ;) So please, update soon. Can't wait to see how Drusilla reacts to them tagging along on their lunch 'date', b/c we all know that's how Dru wants it to be. And I wish that they would just say something already! Anyway, update soon, I can't wait to see what happens!

Author's Response: Thank you! I do! I do feel guilty! :) Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2007 - 02:57 am Title: Shopping with Dawn

Sly Dawn.. mission accomplished.

I was trying to decide .. wanted to send you an email myself. Nice fic. Hoping you will finish it.

You write well.. and it has been a long time. Tell the muse we do appreciate..

Enjoyed.

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope to finish it too. I'm fond of this story and don't want it to have the dreaded red x of incompletion next to it permanently! Thanks for commenting. :)

Reviewer: Amanda Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2007 - 10:18 pm Title: Clarity and Confusion

I don't even LIKE spuffy fiction much anymore but I would kill for an update of this fic.

Author's Response: Thanks very much. I'm glad you like the story so far. Your comment prompted the new chapter. I'll try to write more. :) Thanks for helping to banish the writer's block!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2007 - 07:43 pm Title: Clarity and Confusion

Well, you got rid of Parker and Dru is obviously into drugs too and both Buffy and Spike are not. I'm really enjoying this tale. Sorry to learn RL is sucky. Hope things calm down soon and you are able to update. Thanks for sharing, more please.

Author's Response: Wow, I didn't realize I had unanswered reviews. I really have been out of it. Thanks very much for commenting. I'm going to try to get back to this one soon.

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