Date: 08/06/2008 - 10:35 am Title: Chapter 11
I like the story! Forget those desperate losers who can't stand angst (just the smut to get them through the day ;) lol). I think you write very well, but you just need to look at grammar to improve your writing. It's not just errors I'm talking about, but if you read truly good writing, clever and correctly placed grammar sets a different mood and makes your writing unique. Well Done! Keep it up!
Date: 10/31/2007 - 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 11
Just started reading this fic and love it. Hope you update soon
Date: 10/31/2007 - 01:56 am Title: Chapter 11
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Execellent chapter.
Date: 10/30/2007 - 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 11
This is a great fic please don't let the bad reviews get you down. It doesn't matter what anyone "thinks" when your emotions are in control you can't be expected to make reasonable, rational decisions. Falling in love does not happen through rational thought processes and decision making. What a boring, dull world it would be if it did!!!
Date: 10/30/2007 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 11
I dont get why people are giving you a hard time i love this f ic and everything about it is perfect dont let people tell you otherwise! i know buffy is underage but as you said deaths make you mature fast trust me i know i'm 19 and have never gone through that adolescent stage because of 3 deaths that happened in my family and 1 teacher , that's not even my parents and i feel i'm stronger and more mature because of them! i love this fic dont stop writi ng because of some haters! lol. I just found this one today but i am sure i will become a loyal reader ! loved this chapter! please give me more! or us i mean! lol
Date: 10/30/2007 - 06:49 am Title: Chapter 11
he's got to get rid of Cecily!!! loved the update.
don't worry about bad reviews at least your story stirs passion.:)
looking forward to more
Date: 10/30/2007 - 03:29 am Title: Chapter 11
Love the reunion. I don't think Buffy'll be satisfied with this though. Can't wait for more!
Date: 10/30/2007 - 03:05 am Title: Chapter 11
very sweet! I do enjoy this story oh so much! can't wati for more