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Reviewer: vamptasticA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2004 - 03:04 pm Title: First Sights

Oooo I liked it. Very original. But the format? there was a format? I didn't even notice. *shrugs* wierd. But hey that's me ;) Can't wait for more. And you got Oz in there ...WEEEEeee...Oh and can't wait for more :D

Author's Response: Gotta luv oz :)

Reviewer: Lady Anne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2004 - 02:02 pm Title: First Sights

Interesting start - I like the setup. The script format is a little hard to read though, I liked the more traditional story flow towards the end better. I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I will try to change the format to make the story flow better :)

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