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Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2007 - 09:30 pm Title: where am i now

OK, yeah, I gotta agree with Zoe on that one...(it's Xander) and she needs to go get her man...unless you left it purposely that way...in that case, you need to make it a one chapter story. Otherwise, we'll be confused as hell.

Ta!

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2007 - 09:27 pm Title: where am i now

Hey Steve, it's Carrie :D

Very interesting fic, sounds as if you are speaking from possibly recent experience. Wanting and pushing away seems to always be the way of things sometimes. Very good for your first fic, can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve next! And if I know Zoe, she'll market you like there's no tomorrow! Ta luv.

Oh, and should you feel obligated to review my fic (cough, cough...Omniscient....cough, cough, ahem) feel free to do so! (giggles)

Author's Response: cheers for that Carrie, and yeah the whole "X" thing, bit of a prob. suppose i have a little baggage lol, but yeah wil try and right somemore, and yes I have started to read Omniscient so will let you know what i think very soon!!so be warned hehe bye for now, steve

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2007 - 02:12 pm Title: where am i now

Opps... Xander* lol!

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2007 - 02:10 pm Title: where am i now

Umm, well... firstly! (you know I love you right so don't pout) Xnader is spelt with an 'X' not a 'Z' and and...... You can't put up a one shot that finishes like that!!!! you are so going to get smacked upside the head when you come over later! You so can't leave it there!!!!!!! Buffy has to go get her man! lol ok, for first chap this is good... but but there needs to be another chap or five! please write some more! xxx

Author's Response: just to let you know that i have posted another chapter to the story. Might not flow quite well, but meh. anyways give it a read sometime and let me know what you think, bear in mind it was done off the bat and no forward thinknig wotsoever

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