Date: 09/16/2007 - 01:30 pm Title: Do You Understand These Rights?
Read Joyride , but this one is very funny, just don't understand why your bringing "Capt Cardboard" in from the otherside of the world ( hate him) . I'm rally enjoying this,it's different.
Date: 09/16/2007 - 12:58 pm Title: Do You Understand These Rights?
cute!
Date: 09/16/2007 - 11:40 am Title: Do You Understand These Rights?
I wonder how they will deal with Spikes sun allergy or there might not need to be a trail for him.
Author's Response: See, that's the thing, Spike's allergy will be presented a little later on. But since you asked...he doesn't have it anymore.
Date: 09/16/2007 - 07:34 am Title: Do You Understand These Rights?
Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one. Also is this like a totally different season where Joyce, Anya, and Cordy never died? and did Chosen happen?
Author's Response: Yes, this is a totally different season where Joyce, Anya and Cordy don't die. And yes, Chosen did happen. Everythings a bit AU with bits and pieces from other episodes.
Date: 09/16/2007 - 02:00 am Title: Do You Understand These Rights?
I thought it was a great start, but just one little thing. Each person speaking is a new paragraph.