Date: 01/26/2014 - 03:57 pm Title: Secrets and Dilemas'.
You've not really gotten to a part where your story would differ a lot from cannon and this story is old enough that I don't expect it to be continued... not much to say, really, I was interested in how your idea would pan out, but will probably never know.
Date: 01/21/2013 - 06:41 am Title: Secrets and Dilemas'.
Hey x I no u haven't updated in a while x love to see what happens next xx thanks x Lilly x
Date: 09/24/2007 - 03:35 pm Title: Secrets and Dilemas'.
Get better! (Your cold). ~ Buffy didn't like what Spike said to her before. So when he tells her of Riley she won't like it either. Poor Spike's nose may be in danger ;-)
Author's Response: Hehe! Thats where I'm getting at, im gonna built up hate then love :S xx
Date: 09/24/2007 - 03:29 am Title: Secrets and Dilemas'.
That was interesting.
Author's Response: Hehe thanks Sandra, I didnt get enough time to ask you to beta it :S xxx Saves you work though!!xx
Date: 09/21/2007 - 01:50 pm Title: Must be tuesday. Or not.
Good start, looking forward to read more! :)
Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm gonna write two new chapts before posting though!
Date: 09/18/2007 - 03:32 pm Title: Must be tuesday. Or not.
What Pat meant was stuff like that: I broke this into sentences ... or I added the codes ...
That doesn't sound as if it belongs here. Sounds as if you posted the wrong version here, the one you've got back from your beta it seems to me. ~
I like the start of this one; looking forward where you will go with it (what comes next).
Author's Response: Its updated now, I'm soo sorry about that, I shouldnt of posted it whilst i have this terrible cold ! xx
Date: 09/18/2007 - 12:00 pm Title: Must be tuesday. Or not.
A good start. I would suggest taking out the little notes regarding your writing process that are in the text of the story though. They take the reader out of the story and make it a bit hard to read. Other than that, keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks, but what do you mean>?xx