Nice fantasy outfit although a little mature for 16! While I'm strangely fascinated with this upside down world you've created, I'm a little bit confused. I get that there is some kind of vampire/human alliance, but I don't get why it seems as though vampires are running the country. Mandatory blood donations from 16 year olds? Vampire news? Spike has a reality show? Then there's this whole hunting down the slayer as if she actually intends to try to slay vamps? I guess I just don't understand how in a world that readily accepts and feeds vamps they can't accept that just because a teenage girl is the slayer doesn't mean she wants to be or plans on acting like it. Don't misunderstand, I really like this story! It's very original, and I'm excited to see what's in store for our favorite twosome. I'm just a little confused and it makes it easier to focus on this great storyline as it unfolds if I don't have to spend time thinking about it. However, if you just haven't got to those parts in the story then I'm more than happy to wait!

Author's Response: I haven't gotten to those parts in the story yet... ;) Don't worry, I've got answers to your questions. I'm flattered that my story has gotten you to think really hard. I think that's a good sign? Thank you so much for reviewing!

The start looks promising=) looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm so glad that you like it so far!

i just read both chapters and really enjoyed the story so far! hope you will continue it!

Author's Response: I do plan on continuing this one. I'm glad that it has caught your interest! Thank you so much for the kind review!