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Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2008 - 06:33 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Hi again, I read it all in one go and it was so interesting to read that I actually read it under the table from my moblie, while pretending doing marking in class (I'm a teacher). I was pathetically addicted. The plot was very interesting, though I would have liked some things happening differently. But it's not my story and there wasn't anything too unrealistic. The other thing that bugged me (sorry for being so honest, but I believe in honesty more than flattery), was that some chapters had quite few misprints. They distracted me, but I was too addicted to stop reading. *grin* I loved that though you made S weak and broken at times, you patched him together again and still made him a hero. Thanks for that. Going for the 'Dangerous' now.

Author's Response: Hi Serinah!! Thank you so much for your review! Honesty is fine!! this was my first ever fic and i think I was learning as I went along!! As for the misprints if you have the time to drop me a message to let me know which chapters had some in I'll go and check - it has been beta'd but perhaps I haven't put the beta'd version up on here!! I thought I had. Glad it didn't put you off completely. And thank you so much for reviewing :) My best pal who I wrote CL for is a teacher and I emailed her a chapter a day to read at work!! LOL!!

Author's Response: Hi again!! Oops my bad! I haven't updated this site with the beta'd version! Will run through it as soon as I get the chance! thanks for pointing it out! :)

Reviewer: ETBat18 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2008 - 01:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Now see this isnt fair! I though I was going to get some rest but now I want to Read the second part!

Oh well, Dangerous will simply have to wait. I need at least 2 hours of sleep or im not going to be worth a bit of good. It is on the top list of things I need to do when I get up though!

You did an excelet job! Bravo!

Author's Response: thank you sooo much! sorry you got no sleep though! Tell your friends!! Tee hee! :) :)

Reviewer: S O S Bitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2007 - 08:47 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

wow, good twist

Loved the original and the sequel .


Looking forward to another fic - just as captivating [and a similar word count? =D ]

x

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. Glad you liked them, only been writing since Aug!! So still feels amazing when people say they like what i write! Cheers! :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2007 - 12:57 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight



Author's Response: I a review that is blank a good one or a bad one? LOL I'm taking it as a good one!!! :)

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2007 - 03:46 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Well, MMarsters, that was very enjoyable. That was a great idea to have him turn into a vampire temporarily to heal up. Although I prefer my Spike to have some power, even when human, I was still happy with this. Just enough angst. I'll start on your sequel now.

Author's Response: Thanks Carol! How'd you like your evil Spike?

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 11:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Escellent! Escellent! See you already have a sequel psted, so won't have to beg for one. Probably won't get to the sequel tonight. Again, enjoyed this story very much. Thanks for writing it.

Author's Response: Getting reviews like that make it all worthwhile. Let me know how you like the sequel.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 11:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

www.blood-desires.co.uk/ it's brand new but looks good.

Author's Response: Thanks will have a look!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 10:41 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Already gave u a pimp on Gillypod's Blood desires tagboard , oops , there I go pimping again.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I need all the friendly readers I can get!!! :)

Author's Response: How do I find said tagboard? Not ued to things like this!!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 09:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

OMG Mabel chapters 20-25 had me horrified ,chapters 26-27 had me sobbing for them and then, you concluded it in a pretty plausible way, AND THEN BAMM, you bring Dru into the picture, onto the sequel, I must say I'm glad I trusted you this fic is brilliant. YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER.

Author's Response: Thanks Jo it means alot, was really upset at people hating it!! Thanks for hanging on in there!! Posted 8 chaps of Dangerous it's sequel, now I need sleep!! Let me know what you think of that too!! Tell your buddies to read and review Fall of The Night!! Tee hee :)

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 07:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Loved it! Sequel, YES!
I KNEW it! I KNEW it!!!!!!! Drusilla was BOUND to show up! Granted, you did much later than sooner, as I'd thought, but what a cliffie!
And I somehow thought Helen would've insisted on going back w/Xander to've helped w/nursing Spike while so seriously injured.
And yep, I always see Giles, somehow medically trained, almost like a Dr. or more like a Psychiatrist, but gone w/working for the Council, so not in practice.
It would explain his ability to help talk w/everryone in crisis, his usual understanding, and in your story his ability to administer and have that class of drugs and injectible/IV drugs on hand, and know which to use.
Drusilla---what a can of worms there! She smell some family nearby? Come to fix her "childe/not childe"? Or see her grandbaby?
Wondering if Angel shanshued too, after all?
'S HE off trotting in some bog, somewhere?
Somehow I really thought it would've been Dru---either that she'd have known via vision; or TI hunted her down to have on hand or in league w/him...hoping to cause a loss of soul. perhaps like a "School Hard" Spike was to Buffy...Or that she'd have just been there, found her way at the right time to take her boy and fix him...didn't figure an anonymous practically a fledge to sire him, and unknown even if he was an Aurelian byblow or descendant! Figures via many years and Masters he could have some A. blood in him, Angel et al of the Fanged Four making many a minion (supposedly Spike abstaining from childer). Just wondering how it would affect Spike and his demon to have an anonymous donor---wouldn't the demon be different? I could see Spike with his ironclad will maintaining and slipping right back into being a Master Vamp, but wondering about the vamp/demon being a different chip off a different not so old not Aurelian block, and how that'd work.
Very interesting that Willow was his partner in crime in this....always the sneaky girl. Gotta watch the quiet ones...she's a rebel...Oh, heard that someplace before!
Loved it, again, and thanks so for an enjoyable, enjoyable read! Angst, suspense, lovin', spuffiness and a cliffie! all rolled into one. Excellent!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
fyreburned@yahoo.com

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! glad you liked it!! First five chaps of Dangerous are up. Vamp Spike in this is totally evil not like he was as we knew him, more Angelus type evil!! Tee hee! Will say there is no Angel in there!

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

sequal yes please. loved the story, thought the vamping and returning to human thing was a really clever twist
thanks for sharing

Author's Response: First two chapters of Dangerous now posted. Let me know what you think!! I had fun making vamp Spike scare Willow!! Thanks for kind comments much appreciated :)

Reviewer: jan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 04:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Thank you for writing this story and all the updates. I enjoyed it tremendously. Is this your first? On to the sequel... and don't be afraid of making it longer... with more detailed accounts of their daily lives.

Author's Response: Yep that's my first! Kinda hurt when was getting roasted as it's my baby!! Tee hee!! Had only read one fic before I wrote it. Sequel is already done! Called Dangerous and will be up soon. But will be starting another soon and the point about more details of their daily lives is a good one. Thanks. Got another little fic written but it's Giles/Spike more than Spuffy even though she's in it from start but can't post it here. Also got idea of having Thomas the sexy vamp from Dresden Files head to SunnyD to woo Buffy much to Spike's horror! Could be fun!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 04:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Well, you pulled it off, what a great, different story. I really loved it. I admit, I had some misgivings during the first few chapters, but now after reading it in its entirety, I now see why you had to do what you did. It was a great twist to have Spike vamped again to become human. I did not see that coming.
I really hope to see a sequel on this. You left it completely wide open with the appearance of Drusilla. You just know that is going to go over well.
Loved it. Hope you continue writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Wrote it before I knew of Spuffy Realm so was pretty well roasted for having Helen around for so long but it's just the way it developed! Sequel is already written so will start posting soon. It's called Dangerous!! Thanks for saying you loved it! Cheered me up no end!:)

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 11:42 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

I just read all of this and I loved it to death.

That's an ominous little post script to the hapy ending you left us with.

Author's Response: So glad you liked it!!! I have a sequel waiting if you're interested?

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