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Reviewer: Freah Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2007 - 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 2

Spike almost seems like he has a soul in this one. I hated hated the rape scene, but mostly because I didn't want Angelus to have the satisfaction of it either. Gah. But well written :)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2007 - 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 2

huh, I wonder if Spike has a soul.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2007 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh what is Angelus going to do.

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2007 - 06:39 am Title: Chapter 2

Spike seems to have some sort of concsience after all. Interesting. Very well written chapter, it's a hard subject to write about but you did good. I will definitely keep reading, although I have to say I'm glad you said you're not gonna make Buffy a vampire, don't think I could keep reading if that was the case. Anyway, good update!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2007 - 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow! That was a very dark chapter... you really made me feel Buffy's terror, humilation, and pain. Good update.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2007 - 11:09 am Title: Chapter 2

Wow You surprised me , this isn't your usual story line it;s very good once you get past any thing to do with that gross fiend Angeleus ,,, That was horrid, I Hate that bastard , I know you'll have Spike help her ,but if there's going to be any more Angelus and Buffy scenes i'm going to have to skip chapters ,he's an animal and extremely gross. I have always enjoyed your stories.

Author's Response: Yeah, I know what you mean. I would never read anything like this, that's why I'm so surprised that I could actually write it. No worries, the last of the grossness between Buffy and Angelus is the beginning of the next chapter. I couldn't have that go on for too long. Thanks for reading=)

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wouldn't normally read stories of rape, but think you handled it well.It's obviously in context of the story and is continuing to set the scene for the rest of the fic. Well done.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow...Spike saved someone. That's a good thing right?

Poor Buffy. I hope she's not left with him for too long.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 2

Poor Buffy...
Spike didn't kill the woman? He save her but he couldn't save Buffy. But I hope he will *shudders thinking of Angelus*

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 2

No suprise, then. Disgusting rape, and the victim comes anyway, like always.(As if!)
Well, maybe next time.

Author's Response: I knew you would have a problem with it when I read your last review, but it doesn't really bother me. What rape isn't disgusting? And I warned about that, so it's not like it came as a shock. My story isn't like others out there, but if you don't wanna stick around to find out, it's no great loss to me.

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

This was a good chapter, I liked it ...It had all the fear of Buffy wrote into the rape...And Spikes displeasure at having to listen to Angelus try to break Buffy's spirit....I was glad at the end that Spike also let the girl go and feed off the biker guy instead...

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

i can understand why this chapter would have been hard, but i think you did a great job with it. you really showed the pain that buffy was going through. can't wait to see how spike is going to help her.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 2

wonderfully written. looking forward to next update. interesting that Spike didn't kill the woman, just the bad guy. does he have the soul?

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