I hate to say this but I have real issues with this chapter... if you are going to describe in some detail something you've never been through the least you can do is do some research about it... like the fact that a second month ultrasound is done transvaginally, has very little diagnostics value, you can't see limbs in it (this would be an embryonic, not a fetal, ultrasound, the baby would be only a few milimiters long) and hearbeat is not detectable just yet. On the other hand I did love chapter one, my fear here is that this seems to be about to go the PWP route and you seem to have forgotten all charactes but Buffy and Spike here.

Author's Response: Picky, picky ;-) (Actually, I have been through it and I have the daughter to prove it.)