“Leave before I puke on you. Because I so will.” That is most definitely one of the best lines I've ever read. Too brilliant. It made me review out of sheer amazingness. Btw, I've run into you on various sites over the years and always enjoyed your stuff. Sorry to read about all these flame problems you seem to have. Quite lame. You're definitely one of my favorites.

You go girl! Put him in his place, kick him to the curb and make it pay for it! Love it! Moving on to the next chapter!

That was great! :) Off to next chapter ;)

Excellent!!! As always, excellent!
And ch. 1 was HOT.
Oh, YEAH, don't quite a few of us wish we could give what for right back at those lyin', cheatin' bastards as well as you portrayed Buffy's revenge (and don't we wish it was just as sweet for us as it was for her!)
Years ago I had one of those no good cheatin' scoundrels (wait, scoundrel sounds too yummy, need to think of something else...)...and I did get a little bit of my own back, and thrown at him too. It can feel sweet to just reclaim a little of your own back...and it can feel sweet too, LOL...
...and I'm still with my Mr. Sweet Revenge too, 16 yrs later, this Nov., BTW.
Thanx so much for the good read, and looking forward to more.
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
fyreburned@yahoo.com

Tough Buffy and Riley bashing - loved it.

That was so not what I expected the second chapter to be. You always surprise me by taking your stories in a different direction to how I imagine.

More soon please.

What a wildly entertaining start to this erotic story. Spike and Buffy's initial encounter was sensuous and steamy, and Spike tossing her out before completion adds mystery to the anonymous encounter. Buffy's well and truly smitten, and I loved her strong, negative reaction to Riley's philandering.

You painted a vivid picture of a marriage doomed to failure here: "Looking back on it now, Buffy realized she never should’ve married Riley Finn. She’d known that even then, even when she was standing at the altar with him. But she’d wanted so desperately to have some stability back in her life. After getting dumped by the man she was sure she’d be with forever and losing her mother to cancer, she’d been desperate to start over and build a life. Riley had seemed so…stable. Perhaps a bit boring, definitely lacking in passion, but stable.

She knew now, however, that it had never been love."

As always, excellent character voices and vivid, believable situations. I'm looking forward to more of this.

Even though this was supposed to be a serious chapter, I was laughing. As always lookin' forward to the next installment.

Hell yeah I'm on board. Wow, what an encounter indeed and good riddence to Riley - ass that he is. Hopefully he won't make an appearence again unless it for humiliation, giggles. Can't wait to see if Spike will be a vampire in this one. Got a niggling feeling there's a lot going on with him and he may have asked her to leave for her own good. Brilliant job so far sweety. Can't wait to read more.

LOVED THIS CHAPTER!! LOL IM SO GLAD THAT SHE TOLD RILEY OFF AND PLAYED IT OFF LIKE SHE DID!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i wonder who sent her the pics, it would be so funny if spike had taken and sent them to her. i really hope that they see each other again soon and work things out. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

I for one am definitely glad you're back from your writing break. I hope it was restful/relaxing for you. Of course, if you take breaks and then come back with these results, I'm all for you taking breaks on a regular basis.

For some reason, I'd been expecting her to be married to Angel. Don't know why. So I was a little surprised when it was Riley she came home to. I loved the bit about her taking his credit card to the spa while he gets out. It will be interesting to find out who sent the pictures, and how she'll meet up with Spike again,

Awesome update! Go Buffy! She showed that two timing bastard! I'm still way curious as to why Spike threw her out...

And i don't think anyone could ever forget about you!

I really hope you keep going with this, I am loving it. I like a bitchy Buffy once in a while!