Date: 02/02/2008 - 06:57 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
wow, powerful chapter. loved it. only hope Buffy is OK with the way the demon woke her up.
looking forward to next chapter
Date: 02/02/2008 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Addie, luv, your chapters are always worth the wait. No apologies needed.
Satindoll
Date: 02/02/2008 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
I hope Buffy's okay. That was kinda rough and there were tears. Love them though!!!!! I can't wait for more!!!
Date: 02/02/2008 - 06:49 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
this history puts more interesting eache time, and your still even have our attention, but I request to you that you are not delayed again, pleaseee!!!!
everything seems to say that Spike is very happy at this moment, but I have the impression that Buffy does not feel equal
Date: 02/02/2008 - 06:20 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Get out while you can Buffy...
he's still a killer...
and when he loses control you will be dead..
Date: 02/02/2008 - 05:41 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
I love how, in this chapter, you've sharply contrasted squishy loving Spike with cold blooded killer Spike. Buffy reveals herself as either completely in denial or totally naive with this:
"Past that, she didn’t really see how being involved with Spike would be any different than dating someone who wasn’t a vampire. It was like dating someone with a medical condition that restricted certain activities – not really a big deal at all."
I think it's really important that you reminded us again of how - right now - Spike is still a ruthless killer. His tenderness and consideration are specific to Buffy - not a sign that underneath it all, he's just a big teddy bear who's been looking for a reason to stop killing people. Your scenes with Buffy and Spike lull us into that same complacent state that Buffy's in - he's so thoughtful, so sexy, what could possibly go wrong, etc. Spike's brutality with his latest victim is like a splash of cold water in the face; and if we're taken aback by it, I can only imagine how Buffy will take it.
Not only do you still have me, I think I'm more interested than ever!
Date: 02/02/2008 - 05:24 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Role playing, huh. Wonder what Buffy will come up with.
Date: 02/02/2008 - 04:46 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Very good, can't wait to see how Buffy reacts to him killing.
Date: 02/02/2008 - 02:46 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
I was thrilled to see you updated!! Yummy chapter:)
Date: 02/02/2008 - 02:43 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Really pleased to see an update. A very good one at that and obviously I am still reading. Spike feeding was a bit of a shocker because I really thought that he would try and stop but clearly he is still a "snarling beast" and not only is a killing but he is still taking blood from Buffy herself. Can't wait to find out where you are going to take me with this one and I hope your block has gone.
Date: 02/02/2008 - 02:33 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Yeah you still got me ,but, damn Addie i'm still kinda shocked after reading this chapter. What he did to that girl , where is this gonna go , when she finds out ,she'll leave ,i think i would also.
I'm not complaining ,I really like this fic i just wasn't expecting what I read , maybe i should have waited to review instead right after reading. Update again soon please and am enjoying
TMN also great fic.
Date: 02/02/2008 - 02:30 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Oh, you still have me hooked, and I bet I'm far from being the only one!!!
Can't wait for the next update, I was bouncing like a basket-ball the moment I saw you'd updated!
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