Date: 03/21/2008 - 04:09 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Talking about immortality and just what each expects from a future together seems to be right around the corner. The relationship is so fresh and raw, it makes sense that it's daunting to be talking in those terms already.
Date: 02/23/2008 - 09:21 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Well, it's not easy...
Date: 02/22/2008 - 05:48 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
There are so many directions this story could go, and I would enjoy all of them. Looking forward to what happens next. Amazing chapter.
Date: 02/21/2008 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Buffy noticed that Spike was running from her; she just guessed the wrong reason. She's indeed totally wrong.
But the conflict is already there.
I wonder how they'll work that out.
Date: 02/21/2008 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Yup, I kinda saw the RL vs immortality issues coming - and better sooner rather than later. I feel for Buffy, I really do and Spike's love for her truly stands out in this chapter. Bravo, loved it.
Date: 02/21/2008 - 03:54 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Amazing chapters; amazing story! Really. I love how you’ve reeled me right in. I’m rooting for our couple big time!! I love the dialogue between the two and also how you’re giving us so much insight into their thoughts and what’s going on in their heads. They want so desperately to be together, FOREVER, and I hope there’s a way for that to happen. Buffy is so addicted to what Spike does to her and how he makes her feel and I so totally get that. The way you write him makes me need to cool off in major ways. And we’re seeing how Spike really feels and what he wants. I do get a bit tired of hearing him say how he’s been with so many other women, even though it’s in a way to make her feel better about herself. I wonder if we’re ever going to see any jealousy on Buffy’s part.
I have to wonder, though, how Buffy is going to take it when somehow, inevitably, she finds out, whether it’s by herself seeing it firsthand or whether she hears a news story or something of that nature, finds out what Spike is truly doing before he initiates the rough sex she’s come to be addicted to. How he gets hot for her by ruthlessly killing. How would Buffy have handled things had she seen how he killed that girl in the alley? When she gets slammed right in the face with the true reality of what Spike is? I can’t see her being so okay with things as she is right now. You’ve written a Buffy who is introspective and kind so she’s going to have problems with him getting so hot for her by tearing into another girls throat and tossing her in a dumpster. How will she and Spike reconcile that. For me, that’s the last obstacle. I so want Buffy and Spike to find a way to be together just like she said in that tub. There’s got to be a way. I can’t wait to see what comes next. You’re truly writing a great story.
Date: 02/21/2008 - 12:34 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Does make you wonder how this will all turn out.
Date: 02/20/2008 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Oh wow that was amazing!!! I really love this story. U rock!!
Date: 02/20/2008 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Very mushy! But then again I had a crap day so the mush made me feel all better. Really, I was so glad to see a new chapter with this and despite the softer tone to it I really did like it. I also liked seeing what's going on in Spike's head. What a dilemma for both of them. Can't wait for more.
Date: 02/20/2008 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Yay, another chapter!!! And another very interesting development as well. Spike thinking seriously about turning her, Buffy sort of thinking about being turned...oh I so can't wait to see where these two end up! And I loved Buffy's adorable line: "I hurt myself having sex." I could hear her pout! Excellent job, and looking forward to more!
Date: 02/20/2008 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
so, so sweet. :) I personally love stories where S gets human more, than stories where B gets turned. but your's is still promising. but how do you figure B reconciling herself with the killing? will S stop? will she, when turned? or are you making them killers? i'm afraid I'm slightly orthodox on the moral scale. I hope you'll make it a good story for me too. well, i'm going to read it anyway. please, update soon.
Date: 02/20/2008 - 02:31 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
I was just thinking the fabulous tub hadn't been mentioned in a while. :D
I'm really loving the 'realism' of Buffy being sore - even though it does put a damper on the sexin'. Just more food for thought about their relationship.
Am enjoying greatly. I will now wait patiently for more.
Thanks!
Date: 02/20/2008 - 12:13 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Well there's a new reason to call in sick!!! Fab update - as ever.
Date: 02/20/2008 - 10:55 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Oh I hope they can talk everything out.
Date: 02/20/2008 - 07:04 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
First of all *pouts and sulks* I want not to be able to go to work cuz of too much sex too!! *stomps foot* But that's sooo not your problem, lol
Loved this update, same as every single part of this story, awww'd a lot with both their inner thoughts and only hope you manage to wrap everything up perfectly in your own magical way!
Thank you for a great read,
Date: 02/20/2008 - 05:17 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
OHH I WISH THAT SHE KNEW WAT HE WAS THINKING ABOUT TURNING HER, THEN THEY WOULD KNOW HOW MUCH THEY WANT EACH OTHER!! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS U CAN, I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!! THANX
Date: 02/20/2008 - 04:11 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
hell of astory gets better and better thank for the great read
Date: 02/20/2008 - 03:14 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02/20/2008 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
awww what a sweet chapter. POOR BUFFY! (well, not too poor considering she has spike..:)
Date: 02/20/2008 - 02:47 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Awww, so sweet
Date: 02/20/2008 - 02:11 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Oh, so good! I love the way you've built up their relationship, and that you aren't shying away from the inherent difficulties. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 02/20/2008 - 02:00 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
aww, Spike is the best boyfriend. They don't know what the other is thinking. This was a sweet chapter.
Date: 02/20/2008 - 01:51 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Hmm...maybe there's another way?? A claim? I hope they do find their forever. They're adorable together!!! I was wondering how long Buffy would last for Spike's shag-a-thon. Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 02/20/2008 - 01:32 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Yep, they're going to come to a crossroads with the mortal/vampire thing....