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Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 07:43 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

very powerful chapter! I'm anxious to see if spike is right about it being a bad idea and about how buffy will react when she wakes up. i really love the story! thanks for a great chapter :o)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 07:42 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Whoa.......they did it....

Reviewer: maggie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 07:39 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

awesome loved it i just wish you hadnt stop when you did cant wait to read more soon i hope thank you for the great read wonderful story maggie

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 07:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Amazing, heartbreaking, loving, romantic, sad.....all the above which means one thing.....brilliant writing. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Fantastic story line and writing. You have such a grip on the characters and their inner thoughts/feelings and the way you describe them is mesmerizing!

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 07:20 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

I don't think there are words I can write that would do this chapter justice... How incredibly heartbreaking :'(

Reviewer: Julia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 06:33 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Oh god... how sad! Hmm... actually not sad because they will be together forever... but the way you wrote about it all.... it was pretty sad. You wrote so much William in this chapter... its scarry :).
Now I will cross my fingers that Buffy will not change into a mean thing and will still love Spike. Because when not... than thats not fair.

Great work.... and I'm glad you write this story

Reviewer: janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 06:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

oh my gosh...she's dead!! :( i don't know whether to be happy or sad :(
still a wonderful chapter! thanks for writing this.

Reviewer: lalalala20012 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 06:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Oh my lord. i have to say i been following this story from beginning and I love it. I just felt so heartbreaking when Spike did that to her. Oh wowies. Keep up the good work,

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 05:44 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

OMG THIS CHAPTER WAS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!! THERE ARENT GOOD ENOUGH WORDS TO DESCRIBE THIS CHAPTER!! i LOVE this story and am SOOOO happy that u updated. this story is one of my all time favorites and personally i have never read such a touching, beautiful, heartbreaking yet magnificent turning in any other story. this was the best part of a story u have ever written and it shows how really talented u are. i almost cried, i could feel both spike and buffys emotions and to do that to a reading just shows how amazing u are. ne ways i hope that everything works out and that she still loved him when she wakes up. also i hope that she doesnt regret it and that they end up happy and together forever. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE( i cant say it enough) update as soon as u can, im DYING to read wat happens next between them. THANK U SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH, U KICK SOOOO MUCH ASS!!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 05:42 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

I was right, I knew he would turn her and you didn't let me down ;) Beautifully written, very strong and moving chapter! I loved it, but I hope this won't change her too much... / Ariadne

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 05:41 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

I for one love this story and like you were brave enough to go this way. When I think many other authors might have had Spike say no to Buffy. I'm a fan of Spuffy as a couple. I wouldn't mind reading them together and them still killing humans. I always wanted to read a story where both Spike and Buffy were vampires but still eat people. It is something different. I just hope that for some reason Buffy doesn't have a soul. I hope she isn't too different but I imagine that she would have to change somewhat.

I felt for Spike in this chapter more than Buffy. Yes, she was giving up her life for him. But just the thought of killing the person you love and turning them into a creature of darkness. Must be harder than words can describe. I had tears in my eyes from reading that. And that takes a lot to do.

I love how this story is so different. I know this story isn't finished yet. But I know this story is going to one of all time favorite Spuffy stories for being so different. Your story "Need" is one of my favorites as well. I love shy William and take charge Buffy.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 05:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Wow - I never thought that he's actually go through with it..I just hope that Buffy isn't too changed from the person that she was or Spike is going to wish he'd never turned her.

Reviewer: Vanilla Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Oh, wow, I could just feel how much it hurt him to do that to her. Poor Spike, so afraid of what he might lose. Poor Buffy! Beautifully, wonderfully written.

Reviewer: kimbclar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Very powerful chapter. The inevitable is hardly ever enjoyable but unfortunately we have to face it. I think you did a good job of showing that. I'm not exactly sure how things are going to turn out for Spike and Buffy but I'm hoping for the best. I really do like evil vamp Buffy who loves Spike.

Reviewer: Tanit Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 05:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Can't say it wasn't painful to read, but it was more Spike's struggle that was hard to read than Buffy being turned. I do hope his fears prove unfounded in Buffy's case.

Very well written chapter. I very much enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 05:17 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

I didn't think Spike would do it. This story has taken on a whole new level. I can't wait to see where this is going.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 05:17 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

It is my birthday today and I think you made it a lot better seeing as this is the chapter before last and I trust you to make the next a Spuffy ending (cuz she's gonna still be herself, right? *bats eyelashes*)

LOVED it,
xxx

Reviewer: liza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

well, i wish i would have known about this before i started reading, i don't like stories where buffy gets turned, i usually avoid character death ones, so i was hoping he wouldn't go through with it. now buffy is going to be a killer, i'm not sure how i feel about this anymore.

Reviewer: rose_bud_50 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 05:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

i'm really depressed. I always have a hard time with stories in which buffy turns into a vampire.

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