Reviews For A Change of Heart
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Reviewer: SpuffyRocks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 01:25 am Title: Part One

Great story... just a continuity point though - one moment Giles is talking to Willow on the phone about the body switch, and then you say that Giles is interrupted from his sentence as Faith walks in, and the story carries on from there, with Giles and Willow never hanging up. Giles also says to Buffy in Faiths body, moments later, that he spoke with Willow "this morning", when it was literally just a few seconds ago, and she could very well be still on the end of the phone line :P

Author's Response: *blushes* I so didn't notice that! Thank you for pointing it out, I may try to change it in the near future so it flows better.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2007 - 09:07 pm Title: Part One

Oh Spike noticed...
Now they have to find Faith. Maybe Spike had some luck doing so.

Author's Response: Well I always thought he would have after having studied her all her moves...

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2007 - 01:10 pm Title: Part One

wonderful first chapter, looking forward to the next. reading it now

Author's Response: Thanks, hope you like the second one too :)

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