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Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2007 - 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 7

Woah, didn't expect Buffy to be his step mother! I thought sister for sure...sneaky minx! Hmmm Tara getting chumy with Willow. And your hand washing reminded me of the movie the 13th Warrior where they were all spitting and snotting into the communal bowl. I so needed you in my early Europe Lit Class. Great update!

Author's Response: glad I caught you out with the twist:) My kids have a wonderful time in Eng. Lit and history, they are doing Beowolf soon and the teacher is alredy nervous and threatening to let my 12 year old take the class:) thanks for the review

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2007 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 7

Nice chap. I imagine whose wife Buffy is.

Author's Response: go on do tell who you think:) more soon and thanks for the review

Author's Response: go on do tell who you think:) more soon and thanks for the review

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2007 - 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 7

Lovely update! You described it so well, it felt like I was there :) Well done, sweetie! :)

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed. more soon

Reviewer: MrsP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2007 - 10:32 am Title: Chapter 7

Enjoying this very much so far.

My personal preference is not normally for the AU all human stories but I thought that I'd give this one a read because the time period intrigued me - so different from anything I've seen before.

The story is fascinating; you obviously know loads about this era. The little seemingly casual references that you throw in are great, I really liked William & Tara's shock at seeing the women's hair for example. Something so simple and which is taken so much for granted these days but which back then would have created such a different impression.

And you can spell and use grammar! I know it might not mean much to some people, but it's a real pet hate of mine. I've started to read other stories from new authors and just had to stop because the errors are so numerous and glaring that it spoils the story for me.

Looking forward to reading more soon.



Author's Response: thank you so much for your kind review. My spell and punctuation are atrotious, atrosious, dreadful, luckily my wonderful beta tames the punctuation monster who insists on eating every comma and full stop it can find! Hence people can actually read my writing. Hope you enjoy the rest. This is my favourite period in history.

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2007 - 03:49 am Title: Chapter 7

A lovely description of the families greeting each other and enjoying meal time. Hmm, if Buffy is Connor's stepmother does that mean she's married to someone else? Will have to wait to find out!!

Author's Response: more soon In fact my Beta is sorting the next chapterer out as i type. thanks for the compliment. glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2007 - 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 7

His Mother, oh sorry his stepmother , that makes more sense , so who's the father and please don't make it
Giles that's just iccky.

Author's Response: don't worry its not Giles:) glad you enjoyed, and it seems to be a relationship no-one was expecting

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2007 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 7

(Forgot to add: Saved the review to post now.)
Home at last (well for Connor and his men). Being in the hall sounds nicer (more comfortable) than being on the ship (but we'll see). Prisoners of honors? That sounds good (not too dangerous.
You had me worried for a bit when you (Connor) said Buffy was him mother.
Connor shooting dark looks at Tara and Willow? Fun :) That he got for teasing Willow. *gg*
~ Till next part :)

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed. it must be nice to be home after a long voyage. more soon and thanks for the review

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