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Reviewer: Pamela Green Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2008 - 05:06 pm Title: chapter 17

I'm supposed to be ironing, but I can't stop reading this - what a marvellous story. I feel as though I am in the middle of this world, experiencing all that they are going through. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: so glad the world has been brought to life. glad you are enjoying...and you could always wear the clothes unironed...thanks for the review

Reviewer: djonie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2008 - 08:48 am Title: chapter 17

Good chapter! Love the story so far!

Author's Response: many thanks, and thanks for the review

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2008 - 12:54 am Title: chapter 17

I like the description of the clothing they have on and are putting on. Nice detail.

Author's Response: many thanks, I'm trying not to lecture, but want to make it come alive

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 - 09:50 pm Title: chapter 17

Great William/Faith interaction, it's good to see Faith looking out for Buffy and getting her strength back. I also like how Buffy is always so honest with William. There are no simmering misunderstandings between those two and I love that. :D Learning more about Buffy is always interesting too. Loved William's closing thoughts, he really has grown so much since he left the monastery. Wonderful update!

Author's Response: and He'll grow more. thanks for the review

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 - 09:50 pm Title: chapter 17

The others reaction to Buffy's cooking was funny :) Faith too.
Enjoyed the update, William going through the motions. Maybe he won't be so jealous now :)

Author's Response: thanks for the review. i wanted to show William as very insecure, not sure of his place with Buffy's people

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 - 05:17 pm Title: chapter 17

It's so heartbreaking to see how the situation is weighing on William, even knowing he has Buffy's love, he's torn between his love for her and for his mother. Unsure of his place while he remains with Buffy and the others. *sighs* Such a beautiful tale you're weaving. I love it!

Author's Response: many many thanks for the review, i wanted William completly torn, between heart and duty. there is plenty more to come

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 - 03:56 pm Title: chapter 17

Awww Buffy and William...sigh. I can't wait to observe the Thing! Great chapter as always!

Author's Response: the thing in a couple of chapters. but more soon. thanks for the review

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 - 02:22 pm Title: chapter 17

Lovely, you've made it again, another great chapter! Exactly what I needed :) Wiliam doesn't have to be jealous...

Author's Response: no he doesn't but he is in a very alien world and feeling insecure. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 - 12:02 pm Title: chapter 17

Just lovely, so very lovely! Today was a good day to get this gift, something special being a new chapter...I hafta go to court today, in an hour (!) and this was good for (some of) what ails me! Thanks, and SO looking fwd to another update soon!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~

Author's Response: hope court went in your favour, and wasn't too stressful. another update soon. I just need to re-edit it

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