Date: 11/06/2008 - 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 20
The relationship between William and Buffy is lovely to read, and his imminent departure puts just the right amount of angst into the plot. Their love doesn't trump honor in either culture. William's view of this matriarchal society is also fascinating. He's adapting extremely easily, though it may be more due to his being treated well by the entire clan. He doesn't resent Buffy's wealth and power, it seems he's wholly accepted her.
Again, I commend you on the rich detail and vivid story telling. This world and these people are three dimensional and you make me care what happens to each of them.
Author's Response: thankyou for your kind words and for taking the time to review. it's lovely to know that someone is enjoying this tale.
Date: 02/07/2008 - 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 20
You're amazing! :) Another sweet chapter :) Seems like you write a lot, you've got flow ;) I'll read next chapter now! :)
Author's Response: thaks, yes my muse likes this story and won't let me write anything else at the moment... so I go with the flow
Date: 02/05/2008 - 11:21 am Title: Chapter 20
I love your original characters, even if she's only making a brief appearance Aldis is also a great addition to the story. I found it very realisic that William brought up the Harmony situation, that's just not something he would ever forget. It was good to see him laughing by the end chapter though. Fantastic update!
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed. more from aldis later i think, if my muse plays nicely
thanks for the review
Date: 02/05/2008 - 03:32 am Title: Chapter 20
Shopping is definitely a cure-all for women of all times and places it seems. William has made himself a place in Connor's hall, ransom or not. He has come to care for every one of them, but now I feel like the other shoe is about to drop. Excellent update, can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: yes, you're right there is another shoe...wait and see.
glad you enjoyed it
Date: 02/05/2008 - 02:50 am Title: Chapter 20
Ariadne made a nice banner.
The story is looking good. William is certainly changing.
Author's Response: yes, william is changing a lot. and the banner is georgous. I am very grateful to Ariadne
Date: 02/05/2008 - 01:37 am Title: Chapter 20
It's true - shopping does heal all!
This is a great story and I look forward to every update. I'm anxious to see how they get to stay together (they do get to stay together right?) Thanks for all of your hard work with all of the detail!
Author's Response: wait and see about the staying together, but I do know this is a spuffy site and I love a happy ending:)
lots more to go before the story is finished
Date: 02/04/2008 - 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 20
Awesome update! Still waiting on what honour price Conner will pay to William... sigh, guess I'll just have to wait! Dang it! It was very amusing to see William getting all worked up over what they were willing to pay for his 'little' cut. Can't wait for next update!
Author's Response: more soon I promise. Connor is Rich, think Bill gates, and Buffy richer, so the price will be good.
more soon
Date: 02/04/2008 - 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 20
Mmm the banner looks good :)
You sure do know that some things are rediscovered like using honey for wounds. Some time ago I saw it in TV, it helped to close wounds that didn't want to close with the modern medicine. Just because the knowledge is old doesn't mean it's bad or worthless. /*end ramble
But the Buffy medicine is priceless (and kept William calm too) :)
Robin will work for Faith, huh? *wonders......* ;-)
~ Enjoyed the update :)
Author's Response: there are a lot of the old medicines that have been found to work well. Silver as an antiseptic mild anti biotic for one. more on its way
Date: 02/04/2008 - 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 20
And another lovely chapter to show how things work with the Norsemen. This particular line, along with Buffy being Wiliams' world, intrigues me... Connor looked at William. The saxon had become more than a hostage in the five months he had been with them, and now he earned his ransom, near enough, in gold, just by saving Connor from a nasty injury. Makes me wonder what he's thinking - either that or I'm reading something into it that isn't there. Can't wait for the next installment sweety. Well done - hugs.
Author's Response: No you're not reading anything that wasn't meant. I love it when people pick up on the tiny clues. more soon, but we have a long way to go before the story ends
Date: 02/04/2008 - 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 20
I'm glad that even if William was angered by the money thing, he understood at the end, that was just what was supposed to happen, nothing he could have done to prevent it, other than as he said he'd knocked Harmony out so she didn't create more problems. The scene with Aldis was a wonderful addition to the story. I loved her almost as much as I loved the chapter! Looking forward to more! The banner for the story is gorgeous! *hugs*
Author's Response: more on its way!! glad you enjoyed. Aldis is lovley isn't she. this story has a long way to go