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Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2008 - 04:36 pm Title: chapter 23

Yeah, I know he must return, his mother will be proud of him :) Maybe he'll return sooner than he thinks...
Now I've got three more chapters to read, seems like you've been writing both day and night :) / Ariadne

Author's Response: the muse wants this one written...thanks for reviewing each chapter

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 11:25 pm Title: chapter 23

I couldn't wait, so I read this at work during lunch.. Ahh... loving in the woods...

I know angst is coming, but man, does it have to be now? Sigh, I guess evil plot bunnies ensue. I really, really hope that William will get his head on straight and stay. Interesting that Conner will choose Willow, I wonder how Tara will handle it. Thanks for the great update!

Author's Response: Tara will handle it nicely:) and the evil plot bunnies are in full flight...more soon

Reviewer: MrsP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 07:15 pm Title: chapter 23

Another lovely chapter, very descriptive as usual.
You've guided William through so many changes in this story already, can't wait to see how the man he's now become is received at home.

Author's Response: many thanks, and thank you for getting it. yes there will be a huge change in him

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 03:07 pm Title: chapter 23

What a great chapter. We got some insight on Angel - thank god the ass is dead - and Buffy and William 's talk was so heartfelt. They realy needed it so they both understand where each other is coming from. And she did come right out and tell him she loves him regardless of what he can or can't bring to the table. Now the question is..... will his family pay the ransom? Because honestly, how would they know whether William was truly alive or not? A fifth gear for the Iceland horses? Really? I used to ride horses a lot when I was ounger and I'm trying to imagine what that would feel like, between a trot and a canter, because as a rider you have to adjust your own motions to the movement of a horse. Is it like a fast walk instead of the choppy, clop-clop of a trot? Another brilliant chapter my dear and I'm loving how frequently you're able to update.

Author's Response: yep really five gears...its weird. they would have to ensure William was alive and unharmed (ish) befor paying a ransom.. the equivlant of $645,000... more on that later. yes they love each other, but its a different time, and a different place. more as soon as my beta has tamed the next chapter.

Reviewer: Pyro63 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 02:32 am Title: chapter 23

Oh the plot thickens. I wonder if his ransom will be paid or if he will have to stay and make a name for himself. But he can't go to Buffy with nothing, relying only on her good graces, that would be torture for him. As always, wonderful chapter.

Author's Response: many thanks. yes it would be torture for him if he came with nothing, especially in such a male dominated world..more soon

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 12:53 am Title: chapter 23

Loved William and Buffy's talk, I really like how open and honest these two characters are. :D
Hmm, *ponders thoughtfully* I know honor is very important, but after re-reading the first chapter I can't help but wonder if William might be right in questioning whether his brothers will pay his ransom... they didn't respect him much and it would be easy to tell their mother he was dead. Well, whatever happens I'm sure it'll be all kinds of interesting. =) Wonderful chapter as always!

Author's Response: thank you, and you are right to wonder:) more soon

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 12:27 am Title: chapter 23

I enjoyed the backstory on Angel. Nice chapter.

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2008 - 10:58 pm Title: chapter 23

A year is not much time together; but as I guessed William would rather leave then stay without money. Honor demands if the ransom is paid. It never crossed my mind that they wouldn't pay it. *wonders what will happen now* (Is Erik = Eirik the same, just a typo? Then maybe the answer arrived.)
Enjoyed the update :)

Author's Response: thanks for the review.. e year was what they were hoping for but you never know what will happen more soon

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2008 - 10:03 pm Title: chapter 23

If you didn’t want to come to me with that much honour William you wouldn’t be the man I love, and I do love you so much.’

Awww, I'm glad they got to talk about that and especially that Buffy actually understands William's need to be worthy of her before he can court her. That line I quoted I think sums that. Wonderful chapter and thank you for the quick updates. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: thank you thank you thank you, I was hoping that people would get it. more soon but angst on its way

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