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Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2008 - 04:51 pm Title: chapter 24

Poor Tara, her father must be a cruel man. Luckily she'll stay with Willow :) and Connor. And Buffy can return to her own hall. William will leave, but hopefully soon return... / Ariadne

Author's Response: yes a complete bas***d, We'll have to see about him returning. i am keeping this in period and acurate

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 04:37 pm Title: chapter 24


When I read about what was served for the meal, I had to look twice at the dumpling – I thought it read cootie dumpling, HAHAHHAHA. And mmmmmmm, a little growly William feeling possessive, me like. How awful about Tara’s father – jerk – but in the end I think she’ll be much better off. And hey, a threesome a few months out of the year – not too shabby, those kinky little Norseman, lol – just kidding. I took in all in historical context of course, but I’ve a twisted mind at work as well. I liked this line in particular: The only difference was that here, when he added anything, it was listened to. It spoke volumes for me. As for Buffy, at first I thought uh-oh – she’s going to become pregnant on purpose, but then again, she never expects to see him again, so maybe it’s her way of having a little piece of him with her forever to remind her of her true love for him? Sighs, I need another update, like sooooon, *whines*. Brilliant chapter sweety, loved it.



Author's Response: yes, a little piece of him, and someone to love, glad you enjoyed. cLootie dumpling is lovely , adn as for the threesome:)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 05:36 am Title: chapter 24

I'm happy for Tara, her fathers cruelty turned out to be better for her future in the long run. And my heart is breaking for William and Buffy, he's not even gone yet and already I'm missing him... looks like I better keep the a box of tissue handy for the next chapter. :( *crosses fingers* I hope Freya blesses William and Buffy's final night together. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: I would keep a few boxes handy... thanks for the review and more soon

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 02:46 am Title: chapter 24

Ah, poor Tara, her father wanted her dead. But even though it's hard to hear that, I guess it worked out for the best. Poor William and Buffy.

Author's Response: thanks for the review, and yes, here comes the angst...

Reviewer: Pyro63 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 01:38 am Title: chapter 24

Hmmm, Tara being the second wife... well from the beginning chapters, you can tell that Tara does like Connor, and we all know she likes Willow, so I actually think it's a good idea. Even if she was rejected by her father, she gets to stay with people that respect and care for her. But it seems the journey is not over for William and Buffy, since he's going back. And now, since she's leaving the conception up to the gods.... me thinks the road ahead may be a little rocky... Great chapter, can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: a little rocky? more as soon as I can.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 11:33 pm Title: chapter 24

OMG OMG OMG!!!!! Woman you pack a lot into a chapter!!! My heart was dropping and then lifting and then dropping ugh! I'm sea sick! So Buffy is letting Freya decide about children... Freya better say a resounding YES! And Tara hopefully gets to stay, but William...gah, my eyes are misty. Oh update soon, I gotta know!

Author's Response: more as soon as work allows. the muse knows what she's doing... sorry about the seasickness:)

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 09:34 pm Title: chapter 24

TOLD ya so!!!!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~

Author's Response: told me what? bats eye lids glad you liked

Reviewer: djonie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 09:23 pm Title: chapter 24

Love it!

Author's Response: i'm glad

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 09:21 pm Title: chapter 24

Unexpected... Tara isn't wanted? Her father wants her money more. At last she'll have a good place there.
William *sigh* sorry for him to see their time cut short.
He did have to sit lower because he has no rank? That's a glimpse of what he doesn't want to be but when married it would have been different.
And maybe he'll be a dad without knowing it for some time.

Author's Response: sits lower because there those of higher rank in the crew.. eirik for one, and yes, there is the possiblity that he might become a father

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 08:58 pm Title: chapter 24

You almost made me cry, that last part was so bittersweetingly beautiful. I do hope Freya decides on letting a part of William stay with Buffy while he comes back for her, if he leaves that is. And I'm very happy Tara is staying as Connor second wife, that's what he's wanting all along, isn't it?

Yay for two updates of two of my favorite stories in the same day! I don't know how you do it, but thank you, thank you, thank you. You made my day! *hugs*

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed, had to happen though didn't it? more soon

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