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Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 09:56 pm Title: chapter 28

OMG! William beat Liam! SWEET! And Anne loved the brooch, *sniff sniff* Oooo but William doesn't know. And that haunted look... sigh. It's good that Anne won't divulge any of William's secrets to the rest of the family... god only knows what those women would do with the info! Great update!

Author's Response: glad you liked. more soon

Reviewer: MrsP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 06:39 pm Title: chapter 28

Loved William using his new fighting skills especially as he used them to kick Liam's ...



Author's Response: more of that eventully, if the muse agrees. thanks for the review

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2008 - 04:04 pm Title: chapter 28

His brothers were no better than Tara's father and his mother had to sell her house to pay the ransom. She must really love him. :) Good that Liam lost the fight and that William will be in the king's troops. I hope he won't have to fight the Norse... Good idea with the markets :) / Ariadne

Author's Response: no they're not nice people. more soon

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2008 - 02:51 pm Title: chapter 28

I enjoyed William's talk with his mother, and I liked how honest he was. Although I think he might have been mistaken when he said Buffy would've hated her new home had she accompanied him, in my opinion Buffy seems like that type that would've adapted.
Loved all the detail you out into the fight scene. And William's talk with Athelstan was wonderful. Interesting closing words between mother and son, makes me wonder if someday William will be put in that position. Fantastic chapter as always!

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed, more soon. pleased the fight scene was tough to write, could see it but not write it at first

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2008 - 03:19 am Title: chapter 28

Good to see his mom is still alive though I'm thinking sh'e becoming ill. And his two brothers wives needing to be watched.... very interesting. That burns my butt that his brothers wouldn't put up the money for his return, just evil. But it looks like life is treating him better so far and the place with the king, very interesting - it's Liam I don't trust.

Author's Response: glad you are enjoying. given how much I love your stuff its a real compliment. I am having problems with Connor's wedding night any suggestions? email me off list if you have, many thanks

Reviewer: caia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2008 - 03:09 am Title: chapter 28

Ooh, there's a twist. I'm glad William has a place away from his brothers. Could he maybe sell the Bible to buy his mother's home back? Or will he return it to the monastery? So many questions. Really enjoying the rich tapestry you've woven here.

Author's Response: there are more twists and turns to come...glad you are enjoying this

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2008 - 02:39 am Title: chapter 28

Liam's Arms should be: noir, per pale or, a skunk proper, striped or....
Does that make any sense? LOL? Any heralds on board here?
So basically black (like his heart!) divided by a lengthwise yellow strip (like a stripe down a skunk's back), a natural skunk in skunk-pose with his tale raised, and yellow stripe down his back.....
OK, too punchy now....Just glad to read an update. I'm SO hooked on it, you've got me running to see if you've updated it several times a day! I cannot believe how drawn in you've got me! And to think I wasn't going to read this one!
You should do a webpage with pix & maps and all JUST for this story!
This is addicting...until my next fix...,
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~

Author's Response: too early for Arms like that, unfortunatly..buy I agree sable (black) heart with a yellow (cowardice) background? would love to do a web page, but don't know how. i ahve a live journal page, but haven't worked out how to post to it yet. can do maps and things, but don't know how to put them in the story:( glad you are enjoying it. Must admit its my favourtie as well.

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2008 - 09:02 pm Title: chapter 28

Hee, yes, life is indeed sweet. I just love Anne and I'm so happy William decided to tell her everything about Buffy. I was even happier when William was offered a post in the king's army, he's already making a name for himself and showing the stuff he's made of. I'm pretty sure that's not the last time Liam'll try to hurt William. Again, I loved the update. You're spoiling us with all these wonderful chapters, many, many thanks for that! *hugs*

Author's Response: More fun to come with Liam and Dru, glad you enjoyed...

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2008 - 08:39 pm Title: chapter 28

good chap.

Author's Response: glad you liked it

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2008 - 08:26 pm Title: chapter 28

*nods* I saw I had an email and hoped for an update. Good to see I guessed right it was this one.
Mmmh well I hope it won't come to that (that William has to fight his old friends). Because they have become that.
~ Loved William stood on his own when he was fighting with Liam. And William was as unwanted by his brothers as Tara was? That's really sad. Seems that William is better off with the king. Maybe he is on his way to earn the money now he'll need to support Buffy (his thoughts...).

Author's Response: lots more twists and turns to come.. glad you are enjoying this

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