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Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 01:39 am Title: chapter 36

That's wonderful that William is trying to prove himself in what he sees as Buffy's eyes. But I have a feeling that she already saw him as something great. More likely he is proving this to himself. Great update Vara! And CONGRATS! on the noms, you sooooo deserve them!

Author's Response: thanks for the comments, It was a total surprise and an absolute joy. more on this story soon

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2008 - 02:56 pm Title: chapter 36

Another lovely chapter! A step in the right direction for William... :) I hope he will meet the Norse soon. Looking forward to read more! / Ariadne

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed. there is more on the way when I get my muse awake again

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2008 - 06:21 pm Title: chapter 36

Wow, great chapter honey. I can feel how much is riding on William's mind to make sure this trip is a success. I have every confidence in him to do what's right and that last line just made me swoon.... No, I work to be the man a certain Lady knew I could be, and I will undertake any task I need to fulfil my vow to her. Can't wait til the next chapter. Hugs and kisses.

Author's Response: just the thought of JM saying that was enough to make me swoon. glad you liked it more soon

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2008 - 06:59 am Title: chapter 36

Loved William's talk with Father Gregory. Can't wait to find out how William's meeting with Ingimund play out. Great chapter!

Author's Response: many thanks for the review. more when I can

Reviewer: Thundercat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2008 - 05:04 am Title: chapter 36

So lovely to see an update! Hope you enjoyed your visitors.

William is such a likeable lad, isn't he? Making friends and admirers wherever he goes. Almost too likeable. He's needing a bit of an edge for my taste. At the very least I'd like to see him make a stumble or suffer a setback to illustrate his human frailty.

Please don't misunderstand ~ I fully accept your authorial choices and am greatly enjoying the story. I will continue to read and review as I am quite wrapped up in the tale you've wrought so far and am confident you have some twists and turns planned.

Anyroad, I look forward to the next installment!



Author's Response: oh I haven't stopped twisting, but after being kidnapped, seeing a female relative gang raped, being held captive for the best part of a year and then loosing the love of his life I wanted him to have some good luck. there is a way to go yet, glad you are enjoying it so far

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2008 - 05:00 am Title: chapter 36

I loved it and I hope William and Buffy meet back up soon.

Author's Response: the journey has started....thanks for the review

Reviewer: GDO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2008 - 01:16 am Title: chapter 36

like it.

Author's Response: i'm glad

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2008 - 11:45 pm Title: chapter 36

It's indeed a lot at stake for William. *bites nails*
To know that will let him work harder to archive it.
At the moment it looks still good for him.
Enjoyed the update as I do the story.
And congrats for the nomination! Well deserved :)

Author's Response: there is a lot at stake, his whole future. more when i can

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2008 - 09:06 pm Title: chapter 36

Yay! I'm so happy to read an update of this story. :D I'm so happy William is doing everything in his power to fulfill his vow to Buffy, to be the man she knew he could be. Good start by talking with Father Gregory. :D I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: more soon I hope. thanks for the review

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