Date: 11/06/2008 - 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 47
The two weddings were as markedly different as these two societies. The first was almost a business transaction, the second felt more like an exchange of heart felt vows. They were each vividly written, and I love the zeal and humor of these Norse. The women having to be stopped for their weapons was hysterical, as was Connor's broad and bawdy translation of the latin texts.
Author's Response: that was exactly what i was trying to show..and Connor's bit was so much fun to write...when i went into church in viking kit i have my weapons removed..that bit was taken from near life:)
Date: 07/07/2008 - 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 47
That was lovely! :) *now I'm off to next chapter*
Author's Response: glad you liked, lots more for you to read and thanks for the review
Date: 07/05/2008 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 47
Hee, great chap. and Anne has an admirer, hee. And the thing about the ushurs...not just to show people where to sit!
Author's Response: oh no Ushers were there to either remove weapons or ensure that they were peace knotted.. the poor men had such trouble at my wedding trying to remove the groom's sword. it went in with a peace knot on it eventually:)
Date: 07/04/2008 - 04:31 am Title: Chapter 47
Wonderful chapter. Just love this story and looking forward to the next part of their lives.
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed and thanks for reviewing
Date: 07/02/2008 - 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 47
So descriptive as always, great to read. Loved the bit where the girls have to hand over all their knives!
Do the green and yellow colours of Buffy's outfit signify anything special? I'm sure I've read somewhere that white weddings are modern (Victorian?) idea.
And do I detect a hint of a side story about Olaf and Anne?
Good to hear that your muse is feeling friendly - hope that means you're going to treat us to another update soon.
Author's Response: yes the colours have meaning, more on that later...and there is a second story line, my muse is definitly feeling a little better
Date: 06/28/2008 - 02:36 am Title: Chapter 47
What a wonderful chapter! Loved both weddings. So, Olaf and Anne. She sure deserves some happiness all her own. Will there be any interaction soon between William and his daughter? Again, thanks for a wonderful chapter. Love this story!
Author's Response: yes there will be daddy interaction, but for them there's hardly been time....thanks for reviewing
Date: 06/27/2008 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 47
I must say, I prefer the second ceremony, but then, I think I would have made a better Norse wife than Saxon - too much Scots in me! LOL
Beautiful writing, as always. Looking forward to the wedding night. And I think Anne might have another reason to follow her son and granddaughter.... :)
Author's Response: thanks for the review, i prefer the viking ceremony as well.. more soon and more about Anne
Date: 06/27/2008 - 10:30 am Title: Chapter 47
What a wonderful wedding or weddings. I really enjoyed it. Thank you!
Author's Response: and thanks for the review
Date: 06/27/2008 - 09:33 am Title: Chapter 47
I loved that William and Elizabeth had two marriage ceremonies, both were a joy to read. :D I especially enjoyed the little glimpses into the bride and groom's heads. I also liked the Olaf/Anne interaction. Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: glad you liked it, thanks for a fantastic review
Date: 06/27/2008 - 06:49 am Title: Chapter 47
This was lovely; they're each so happy. I liked the contrast between the Saxon and Norse ceremonies, which I'm sure was not lost on Anne any more than it was on Buffy.
I would love to see some interaction between William and Nordlys... you mentioned him being besotted with her, but it would be nice to see it directly as well.
Author's Response: some daddy and gilr time soon, and I'm glad you enjoyed the contrast between the two ceremonies:) more soon hopefully
Date: 06/27/2008 - 02:28 am Title: Chapter 47
Woo Hoo! They're married! Great job contrasting the two ceremonies. Your research has really paid off. Now, onto the wedding night, I hope!?!
Wonderful update as usual! I love this story.
Author's Response: hopefully the wedding night next, if my muse allows...and I'm glad you enjoyed
Date: 06/27/2008 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter 47
Finally! And well worth the wait.
On to the wedding night.
Author's Response: wedding night next:) thanks for the review
Date: 06/26/2008 - 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 47
Mazel tov William and Elizabeth!
Yay! and thank you and your muse for posting another chapter.
Author's Response: William and Elizabeth say thank you:) the muse is enjoying the adulation
Date: 06/26/2008 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 47
great detail as always
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 06/26/2008 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 47
Yay their married! Loved it and more please soon.
Author's Response: thanks for the review and glad you enjoyed, more soon
Date: 06/26/2008 - 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 47
Cookies for your muse :)
Awe :) Update. Sweet William so nervous...
And what a way to get married for the woman. Only given away from one prison to the other. (Not in this case and maybe not in others, it just came to my mind because nobody asks the woman. Well at last not at least, in the church. Can't say what happens before.
What a difference to the Norse ceremony (when Buffy got asked what she wanted).
Loved it as always.
Author's Response: under saxon norms the woman was viewed as slightly more valuable than a cow, it was her blood line that was of value..it was worse under Norman law, at least under saxon she owned her own property
Date: 06/26/2008 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 47
because if he had any food in his stomach it would be making a speedy and unwelcome return. LMFAO - pre-wedding jitters AREN'T just reserved for brides. And I loved that Buffy was just sitting there as casual as you please while feeling her husband up, hee hee. The wedding - both of them were lovely, and dare I say they're going to have one helleva long night ahead of them, giggles. LOo and behold... dost my eyes decieve me??? Do I detect that Olaf fancies Anne? I kept seeing it through the earlier chapters but methinkksI'm right - woo hoo. Is there another wedding in the future? Loved it all so much my friend. A truly magnificent chapter. Now - onto the sex, squeeeeeeeeeeee, or at least I hope you might consider writing our newlyweds first night together as they perform their AHEM, duties, giggles.
Author's Response: hopefully my muse will allow the wedding night, It's where i want to go next, and Anne and Olaf well wait and see
Date: 06/26/2008 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 47
Hee, I love the idea of Anne and Olaf! And of course, I love the double ceremony and how different they were from one another, although the common denominator, their love for one another came shining through in both. Wonderfully done, sweetie! I'm glad your muse is back. *hugs*
Author's Response: my muse loves the reviews so hopefully she'll stay around for a while....and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter