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Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2008 - 12:02 am Title: chapter 49

Other than waking up alone, this was the perfect morning after. Buffy and William united as a family, working toward a common goal. Buffy is an astute business woman and William is no slouch. They both know what needs to be done to get his hall running profitably. Anne will enjoy being with this family after the horror of the other.

William cuddling Nordlys as she gnawed at that horse painted a charming picture. He's taken to fatherhood like a duck to water.

Author's Response: thank you...i couldn't make it too perfect could i

Reviewer: Kings of Mercia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2008 - 11:37 am Title: chapter 49

We're all still LOVING it! Keep it up

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review, more soon

Reviewer: Thundercat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2008 - 10:28 am Title: chapter 49

Not to nag, but what happened to that supposedly awakened muse?

Sad that we're nearing the end of this tale, but certainly hope and trust you'll see it finished properly.

This was a lovely chapter....Hopefully the first of many happy family times.

Author's Response: I've been on holiday...away from the comp for nearly 3 weeks, and muse wanted to concentrate on UB...but the next update is on its way

Reviewer: spuffygurl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2008 - 12:22 pm Title: chapter 49

Wow. I just started reading this story and it is amazing. You have an amazing way of writing. I can't wait for the next update. I want to know more.

Author's Response: many many thanks...glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 09:01 pm Title: chapter 49

Aw, the whole chap. is cute, esp.:

Don’t wake the baby!’
‘I think I’m going to be hearing that for a lot of years, God willing,’

Author's Response: that was one of my favourite images:) glad you liked. more soon

Reviewer: MrsP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 06:04 pm Title: chapter 49

Thank you for the explanation of the colours of Buffy's clothes.

Daddy William is so cute - loved the bit where Nordlys hits him with the horse and he tells her she's violent just like her mother!

Great writing as always.



Author's Response: my pleasure, it fitted in nicey with the tale at that point. glad you enjoyed, and glad you liked the bit with Nordlys thanks for the review

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 02:01 pm Title: chapter 49

Nordlys is so sweet *smiles* Congrats on your nominations! You truly desrve them! *hugs*

Author's Response: Nordlys is a cutie, thanks for your review...

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 08:27 am Title: chapter 49

Aww, what a lovely family scene. :D It was really nice to see Nordlys interacting with her parents. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: thank you so much, glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 07:28 am Title: chapter 49

That was fast - thank you, thank you, thank you!!!

He has some making up to do, though, letting her wake up on her own. Lucky her - the making up, I mean. :)

It seems that William is aware of her status among her people, but needs to be reminded that she sees herself as equal among his, too. This will raise eyebrows, I'm sure, when she expresses herself in the male-only political and business arenas. But she's just the woman to do it and do it well. They will prove to be a formidable force, the two of them, and the best place for them now is on the border.

Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Yes, he shouldn't have left her to wake up alone, but things were different, no real honey moon for one, and yes there will be eye brows raised as she reminds the world just how capable she really is...more soon

Reviewer: caia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 05:48 am Title: chapter 49

*blinks* The site inexplicably ate the second paragraph of my comment, which was:

Did William forget to get a bride gift for Buffy, or is it coming? (Or is that only for first marriages when the woman is presumed to be a virgin?)

Author's Response: they are only supposed to be for first marriages, but wait and see...thanks for adding the second paragraph

Reviewer: caia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 - 05:46 am Title: chapter 49

N'aawww, Nordlys.

Author's Response: ain't she a cutie:)

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 09:41 pm Title: chapter 49

Have I told you lately that this one of my favorite stories ever?

Author's Response: you may have mentioned it once or twice:) thanks as always for aking the time to review

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 06:32 pm Title: chapter 49

That was sweet I loved the family moment.

Author's Response: thank you and thanks for the review

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 06:13 pm Title: chapter 49

*sniff* The end is near now? That are sad news. :( I could read on and on. *hopes for short independent one-shot sequels ~ maybe some holiday specials*
Oh that's a good idea, having Thor's hammer from the flowers made as a thong / on a thong. A good reminder.
Buffy is very competent to manage an estate. William can be very happy he won her (and her love).

Author's Response: there might be one shots, if my muse allows. and William really did win her, went from a penniless younger son to a powerful lord, just for her he changed his destiny. glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 05:42 pm Title: chapter 49

Awwwwwwwww, this was such a sweet chapter - the happy family. These two are just so perfect or each other and neither take their love for granted. The scene with his daughter was just adorable and Buffy wanting more kids... yeah, I can see that. I'm sad the story is coming to a close, but it's been such a wonderful ride. Glad to hear your muse is back - looking forward to the next update darling. Hugs.

Author's Response: Glad you like it, I love your stuff so much that any of your positive commnets make my day. thanks as always for the review

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2008 - 04:35 pm Title: chapter 49

Awwww, so sweet! I'll be sad to see this story end, but it's been an amazing journey and I imagine good things must end someday. *sniffs* In the meantime, I'll be looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you for the amazing review and I'm glad you enjoyed the ride. there is still mopre to come and I hope you enjoyed the rest

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