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Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2008 - 12:36 am Title: chapter 52

After the lightness of the last chapter, the drama of their missing daughter ramped up the tension admirably. Andrew may be simple, but he did an admirable job consoling the little girl and getting her back to the fold. William and Buffy acted like any young parents. Their terror was understandable in light of all the dangers a small child could get into. I don't think little Nordlys is going to be out of eyeshot for quite a while.

Author's Response: i tied my son down when he did that on me:) glad you enjoyed and thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2008 - 09:48 pm Title: chapter 52

Oh, good, nothing bad happened to her.

Author's Response: he got her out in time:) glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review

Reviewer: MrsP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2008 - 08:14 pm Title: chapter 52

What did I think? Same as usual !
Another lovely descriptive chapter.
Still enjoying this story immensely; your writing just blows me away.

I know it's probably not appropriate to mention here but for some reason I don't get the review box on Ultimate Betrayal (probably my crappy old computer) but I loved that story. I'm torn - so pleased that you finished it but also heart broken that there won't be any more.

Author's Response: what an amazing review, thank you. don't know what happened with UB..the review bit seems fine now. glad you enjoyed that ride as well

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2008 - 05:34 am Title: chapter 52

Every parent's nightmare. At least she was found safe and sound. Perhaps they should put a harness on her and tether her to the clothes line. lol Just kidding. Thank you for the update. Your muse is leading you in the right direction now. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: have you read the next chapter? LOL glad you enjoyed and more soon

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2008 - 10:08 pm Title: chapter 52

*relieved sigh* Right now I'm just about as thankful that Nordlys returned home as her parents, but I'm a bit curious over how did she ended up in Andrew's garden. I understood it's fairly far away from the hall. And also the fact that everyone seemed to think the girl was with someone else. I wonder if there was someone behind this disappearance. Anyway, very well done, and I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: all will be explained, but glad you enjoyed, more soon

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2008 - 08:41 pm Title: chapter 52

Whoa! Things were very scary there for a moment, I'm so glad Nordlys was safe. And I loved that Andrew was the one that found her, reading Andrew's thoughts after the incident was really heartwarming. :D Fantastic update!

Author's Response: I had that scare with my son once, and i fainted when he came home safe. thanks for your review, glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2008 - 06:24 pm Title: chapter 52

Wheww, for a minute I thought that Col would get his hands on either Buffy or Nordlys. I think you just described every mother's worst nightmare but what a wonderfully realistic job you did my friend. Loved the chapter sweety and can't wait for more - hugs you tight.

Author's Response: written from experience!! ny son was the wanderer...but Col will return

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2008 - 04:23 pm Title: chapter 52

That was kid, I am very familiar with the freak out feeling when you find out your child is missing. More please soon.

Author's Response: been there, done that. my son kept wondering off and geting lost. its what made me go grey

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2008 - 02:58 pm Title: chapter 52

So happy to see another update on this story. You are doing a tremendous job. Thanks for the update and looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: thank you for the review and the compliment, i'm glad you like the story

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2008 - 02:41 pm Title: chapter 52

Ah... the 'normal housework'. Without a washing machine not so easy back then. (William is gone? I hope Buffy will be save regarding that idiot.) Seems he did with Nordlys now gone. This sounds very bad.
*sniff* Glad that went well. Cute how Nordlys was found by Andrew.
Enjoyed the update :)

Author's Response: glad you liked nad thanks for the review

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