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Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2008 - 12:52 am Title: chapter 52

The fire and rescue were vivid and exciting, Buffy being drugged added even more tension. Buffy joking about Faith's comment bodes well for a full recovery, and learning she's pregnant was certainly a bright note in the chapter.

The hall will be well rid of the malevolent Col.

Author's Response: bad penny well gone...glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2008 - 12:52 pm Title: chapter 52

Oh wow. That was definitely a close call, too close in fact. Believe it or not, when I read how tired Buffy was earlier I had a fleeting thought that she could be pregnant. I remember being that tired in the early stages of pregnancy. That dumb oaf Col... somehow I wonder if that's going to be the last we see of him. He gives me the major creeps. Thanks for the b-day wishes my friend. I absolutely loved the chapter - hugs and kisses.

Author's Response: too close for william's comfort and i'm glad you enjoyed. hugs and kisses

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2008 - 10:42 am Title: chapter 52

Whoa! This chapter was action packed, I literally held my breath during the fire scene. *breathes a sigh of relief that Buffy made it out safely* Loved Buffy's revelation, it was definitely a nice surprise. :D Can't wait to read more, should be interesting to see how Col is dealt with for the destruction he caused. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: more, on its way and so is Col thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2008 - 05:11 am Title: chapter 52

Loved it I almost thought she wouldn't get out. More please soon.

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed, more soon

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2008 - 01:56 am Title: chapter 52

Baby number two - hooray! What a scary night. I'm glad everyone made it out alright, though. And tying Nordlys with a rope - lol - I guess I just had a mother's instinct about that one. Thanks again for the beautiful writing.

Author's Response: i actually tethered my son when camping, cause he used to wonder of:) and baby no 2 on the way

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2008 - 11:10 pm Title: chapter 52

No need to beg me, I love this story too much to not review. And awww, that's too sweet a revelation! I'm pretty sure that's not the last we've heard of Col, although I hope I'm wrong, but at least he'll be gone for now. He did quite a bit of damage. I was holding my breath wondering how he would react to what William said and then during the rescue scene. Very well done, sweetheart!

Author's Response: more from col soon:) glad you liked and more soon

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2008 - 09:59 pm Title: chapter 52

A very exciting chapter, and such a dramatic way for Buffy to let William know he's having another child! I hope they deal with running Col off in the next chapter. The description of Buffy and of her people trying to look out for her was great. Another great chapter.

Author's Response: You didn't leave a name, i should imagine buffy wanyed to keep quiet for a little while longer, glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2008 - 09:28 pm Title: chapter 52

Bad hole... so that's why Nordlys could escape.
Wow, didn't expect Col to burn the old hall down. Well even if it was kind of an accident but he started the fire anyway.
Relieved to see Buffy is okay and even had news for William. This time he'll see the baby grow, won't miss it again. :))

Author's Response: He gets to see it all this time:) glad you enjoyed and more soon

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