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Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2008 - 12:58 am Title: Chapter 53

William taking matters into his own hands and turning Col out was the right thing to do. He was a threat to the hall. he brought the exile on himself. His end means William and Buffy won't have to be wary of revenge.

Author's Response: thanks for the review

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2008 - 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 53

Nice job of writing Col's final scenes. I liked how you fleshed out his character a bit before he met his demise, looking at things through his eyes was insightful. Good update.

Author's Response: thank you, i didn't want him to be cardboard

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2008 - 06:12 am Title: Chapter 53

At the end I felt oddly sorry for Col but I guess you reap what you sow. Loved it and more please soon.

Author's Response: he lost everything because of a bad attitude and a quick temper, either of which could hurt the hall and neither of which would be tolerated, more soon

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2008 - 04:33 am Title: Chapter 53

Col became a victim to his own foul temperament, he should have begged for forgiveness and apologized to those he offended and nearly killed. I do not blame William for banishing the man who nearly cost him everything. As leader, it falls to him to ensure the safety of his people from forces outside and within. Am enjoying this story and look forward to more.

Author's Response: you got it:) this wasn't the 21st century full of understanding, this is the 10th where someone like col could have killed them all

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2008 - 04:23 am Title: Chapter 53

Well, that source of trouble has ended, thank goodness. I love how protective of Buffy and Nordlys William is. I get a warm, cozy, safe feeling off him. :)

A typo? "... but William wasn’t taken any chances..." taking?

Thanks for the lovely update. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: thanks for spotting the typo, i will correct:) more soon and tahnks for taking the time to review

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2008 - 01:04 am Title: Chapter 53

Good riddance to bad rubbish - oh yes indeed, good riddance to Col. GLad he isn't a threat any longer. I like how William controlled his action upon throwing him out so well. I don't think I could have done is as calmly. Loved the chapter my friend - hugs and kisses.

Author's Response: i got hugs and kisses:) glad you liked and revenge has always been a dish best served cold

Reviewer: 2zen2 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2008 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 53

Just when I thought the story was being wrapped up - you kept it going and in such a great direction. This is one of my favorite all human Buffy/William stories. EVER. Great job. Keep the chapters coming.

Author's Response: there is more to come and i hope you enjoy the rest thanks for the review

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2008 - 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 53

Oh, thank God you got rid of Col. He gave me the creeps. *shudders* Fantastic update! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: more as soon as i can get to the computer in peace:) glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2008 - 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 53

Oh right, all the stuff already moved didn't get lost. That was lucky indeed.
William sent Col away? He (William) didn't punish him bodily, Col can be glad. Though I hope he'll see it this way too and stays away.
~ Seems there was a greater justice working. Col won't be a threat ever again. At last that will keep William's family save.
~ And good to see an update :)

Author's Response: more updates soon and thanks as always for all the reviews

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