Date: 11/07/2008 - 01:08 am Title: chapter 54
There was a lot of hustle and bustle in this chapter, and I really enjoy the details of the day to day work it takes to run their estate. There's a constant hum of activity and it's a pleasure to read.
The picture you painted of the market was also detailed and entertaining, and Buffy's surprise was lovely. Having Tara there for the birth of their second child will be a balm to both her and William. I'm left remembering Connor's reaction to Buffy's last birth, so I 'm looking forward to reading William's.
Author's Response: he birth is on its way, but glad you enjoyed
Date: 10/12/2008 - 09:16 pm Title: chapter 54
I wonder what William has in mind; must be a surprise for Buffy.
Awe, Tara? Nice to see her again. Really a good idea of him; Buffy loved it.
Enjoyed the update :)
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Author's Response: glad you enjoyed, another chapter up now and thanks for all the reviews
Date: 10/12/2008 - 09:09 pm Title: chapter 54
Awww, this chapter was so sweet! I'm so happy Tara is back into the picture and that she'll be around to help Buffy. Seeing William so worried for her was adorable. It's understandable, though, since he has no notion of what's normal or not in a pregnancy. Off to read the next chapter. :D
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed. and poor william, panicing over every little things....
more soon
Date: 10/05/2008 - 04:48 pm Title: chapter 54
I love how sweet and doting he is towards Buffy, surprising her like that. It's nice to see Tara back on the scene, too. So Willow is pregnant, but I can't seem to remember, how many children does Connor have now? Man, he better make a good living, giggles, having two wives and I'm sure plenty of kids from each. Lovely chapter as always my friend - hugs.
Author's Response: he has three now, one each to willow and tara and willow is expecting another...more on the way and i'm glad you enjoyed
Date: 10/05/2008 - 01:16 am Title: chapter 54
Yay, for wonderful surprises! No wonder William was wearing a self-satisfied smirk, his surprise was really sweet. :D It's so great that Tara is back, should be interesting to see if any of her family (aside fron Anne of course) show up. Loved the chapter!
Author's Response: glad you liked and hope you enjoy he rest
Date: 10/03/2008 - 11:16 pm Title: chapter 54
You have 10 chapters of the same chapter 54
Author's Response: i know, comp went locco:( hopefully fixed now