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Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2008 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 47

Yay their married! Loved it and more please soon.

Author's Response: thanks for the review and glad you enjoyed, more soon

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2008 - 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 47

Cookies for your muse :)
Awe :) Update. Sweet William so nervous...
And what a way to get married for the woman. Only given away from one prison to the other. (Not in this case and maybe not in others, it just came to my mind because nobody asks the woman. Well at last not at least, in the church. Can't say what happens before.
What a difference to the Norse ceremony (when Buffy got asked what she wanted).
Loved it as always.

Author's Response: under saxon norms the woman was viewed as slightly more valuable than a cow, it was her blood line that was of value..it was worse under Norman law, at least under saxon she owned her own property

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2008 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 47

because if he had any food in his stomach it would be making a speedy and unwelcome return. LMFAO - pre-wedding jitters AREN'T just reserved for brides. And I loved that Buffy was just sitting there as casual as you please while feeling her husband up, hee hee. The wedding - both of them were lovely, and dare I say they're going to have one helleva long night ahead of them, giggles. LOo and behold... dost my eyes decieve me??? Do I detect that Olaf fancies Anne? I kept seeing it through the earlier chapters but methinkksI'm right - woo hoo. Is there another wedding in the future? Loved it all so much my friend. A truly magnificent chapter. Now - onto the sex, squeeeeeeeeeeee, or at least I hope you might consider writing our newlyweds first night together as they perform their AHEM, duties, giggles.

Author's Response: hopefully my muse will allow the wedding night, It's where i want to go next, and Anne and Olaf well wait and see

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2008 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 47

Hee, I love the idea of Anne and Olaf! And of course, I love the double ceremony and how different they were from one another, although the common denominator, their love for one another came shining through in both. Wonderfully done, sweetie! I'm glad your muse is back. *hugs*

Author's Response: my muse loves the reviews so hopefully she'll stay around for a while....and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2008 - 07:23 am Title: Chapter 46

Finally William's brothers are dead and I think Dru will like the nunnery :) Looking forward to read more, sweetie! :)

Author's Response: more on its way. muse is enjoying writing about the wedding at the moment

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 46

Still here with ya, and will continue to nag for chappie... Gah! The Wedding Day and we STILL have to wait for at least another chappie til it happens! Consider this henceforth to be nagging for more! Was good to see good friends sat vigil with William (much as they would were he being knighted or elevated to any other great estate, which, well, he actually IS somewhat by the terms of the treaty and his marriage). And how sweetly shy he is among married men's talk, as well as quietly discreet, to keep the secrets (or not, among Buffy's kin and few Saxons such as his clergy) of his relationship previous to his marriage with Buffy quiet and discreet; he could've boasted and told tales with the other men, and would have had he been like his brothers, but thankfully he is not. You convey so well the good man that he is here, Much akin to the William the poet of the TV show (but more useful!), but having faced and bested more adversity in life, having had a positive experience with his Buffy, and having not had to resort to wearing the tough as nails and uncaring mask usually seen on "our Spike".
Your handling of Druscilla at the end was gracious; a sad end for her, but a good way to bring Dru's madness into the tale.
Great that you brought up the factual stench that had to roll off people, especially those in lowered circumstances such as the insane, beggars, poor and prisoners (not to mention people on an everyday basis in general, plus soldiers, tradesmen, farmers/herdsmen/butchers, and pilgrims (not the kind from early American colonies). I used to hate watching Monty Python's Jaberwocky JUST because it so blightedly depicted this kind of thing in almost smell-o-rific graphic detail! (I wanted to keep my fantasy of chivalric romance!)
The guards that allowed Liam to grab Buffy should have been, (and hopefully will) beaten. But I loved that Buffy defended herself in a manner that did not emasculate Wm. Gotta love a woman who is always prepared. Somehow I have the feeling she started carrying that knife back when her husband was alive though, he being a man like Liam.
Love this fic, you know it! More, More, More! {Please?) Don't wanna nag too much!
~~Kara~~

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it so much, and glad you are back with us...more as soon as my muse allows

Reviewer: astrodex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 46

Ahh, sweet justice, at last.

Great chapter.

Author's Response: sweet and quick. glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2008 - 06:01 am Title: Chapter 46

I'm so glad that you up-dated!! This chapter was terrific, just like the rest. Are you going to let us know what happened to Darla? I look forward to the wedding chapter. Give your muse a kiss and maybe he'll start being a little less cantankerous! :)

Author's Response: my muse still isn;t playing nicely. he used to do 3000 words in a day, now i'm lucky to get 300!!! bad muse but thanks for the review, maybe it will do the trick

Reviewer: Thundercat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2008 - 02:07 am Title: Chapter 46

Yay! A new chapter, and quite a doozy. Very fitting that Buffy took Liam out, but did Darla witness that scene? I'd hate to think she was around to serve cold, cold revenge at a future date.

On with the wedding!


Author's Response: yep wedding next, but darla is always the spectre at the feast

Reviewer: Puma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2008 - 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 46

WOW this story is awesome. the background info on the vikings is really interesting. please keep up the amazing work and update soon

Author's Response: will update when i can I study and teach viking history, it shows i think glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review

Reviewer: Abbyland Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2008 - 03:10 am Title: Chapter 46

Sorry it's been so long since I've had a chance to catch up with this fic. Great resolution although I would have loved Harold and Liam to be forced to live and see Wiliam happy and successful - oh well, their deaths are just as satisfying. Hopefully Anne will get to go with William and Buffy. Cannot wait for the actual wedding! Great work!

Author's Response: thank you so much for the lovely review. i wanted Liam and Harold to pay the final price, i tried and tried to make it work the other way,but the muse refused. this came without effort and i was surprised as well:) more soon

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2008 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter 46

This wole chapter was absolutely riveting and i'm so glad Buffy got hers in where Liam was concerned - bastard deserved it, giggles. A brilkiant chapter hon and I hope RL will cam down eo9ugh for you to continue soon. Love it all boo - hugs.

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it. Must have hit the right note if you found it riveting... more soon

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2008 - 02:06 am Title: Chapter 46

Don't know if Dru is acting crazy or is crazy, but considering she was crazy on the show, I guess she really is crazy. Good chap.

Author's Response: and thanks again

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2008 - 02:00 am Title: Chapter 46

Don't know if Dru is acting crazy or is crazy, but considering she was crazy on the show, I guess she really is crazy. Good chap.

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2008 - 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 46

great update justice was served

Author's Response: thank you for the review

Reviewer: nat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2008 - 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 46

Loved Harold's dropping dead and Buffy's killing of Liam - they finally got what they deserved. I'm not normally this blood thirsty but those two just p#%*ed me off. Now for Darla......

Author's Response: wedding first, then some spuffy loving:) thanks for the review. more soon

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2008 - 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 46

Ooooh, very fitting end for the both of them. Poor Dru, though, I felt sorry for her. I can't wait to read what's going to happen to Darla though. ;) I guess they all know the Lady Buffy is quite capable of fending for herself now, don't they? Loved that part and the chapter was fabulous. I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: darla's come uppance to come...and poor saxon's watching Buffy, you almost feel sorry for them:) more soon

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2008 - 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 46

Wow, what a dramatic start to Buffy and William's wedding day! The Ordeal definitely played out in a fascinatingly unexpected way. I also enjoyed reading William's thoughts regarding his upcoming nuptials. And go Buffy, gotta respect a girl who always comes prepared. :D Loved the update!

Author's Response: thanks for the review, Buffy always had a stake hidden where Spike couldn't find it on the show:)

Reviewer: MrsP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2008 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 46

Been out of the country for a while and so I've only just caught up with all your updates. I asked for a bit more action and WOW did you deliver!

Loving this story.

Sorry to hear that RL has been tough for you of late; I know that nothing can bring back someone you have lost but I hope that things improve for you soon.





Author's Response: thanks for your kind words, things have been tough. glad the action hit the right ote, and glad you are still with me. more soon

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2008 - 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 46

I bet neither Harold nor Liam did think that the day would end for them as it did. A greater justice took place. In a way with Liam too. Underestimating Buffy was the last error he did make.
Dru isn't a danger any longer; maybe Darla...
Enjoyed the update. Glad you posted this story again. *hugs*

Author's Response: Rl has let up a bit and let me post....glad you liked it

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2008 - 07:56 pm Title: chapter 45

Buffy had insisted that they marry in both cultures. She said she wasn’t having him escape again. Hahahahahahahah, smart girl. Loved the chapter boo. Hope William's brothers and/or wives don't stir up more trouble, thought it was supremely hysterical they got their asses beat by Buffy and Faith, hee hee. Too bad they can't be banished as easily as the do in Buffy's culture.

Author's Response: oh yes, like me she's getting married both ways. and as for the evil wives club, wait and see. thanks for the review. knowing you read the story really made my day

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2008 - 03:05 am Title: chapter 45

great as always

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2008 - 12:57 pm Title: chapter 45

Dru and Darla, how stupid are they really? Loved the update, looking forward to the wedding and I wonder what kind of gift Anne will give Tara. / Ariadne

Author's Response: no one could ever claim they were clever...hoped you liked and more soon

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2008 - 01:33 am Title: chapter 45

I'm glad Dru and Darla won't hurt Anne again. Oh yeah, poor Conner, dragged to market.

Author's Response: poor Connor indeed....glad you enjoyed and there will be more soon. thanks for the review as always.

Reviewer: Goddess Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2008 - 12:08 am Title: chapter 45

I just found this story, and I'm absolutely thrilled with it!! I actually live on the Wirral (as it is now) and it's wonderful to see the Norse and Saxon history of my home so lovingly and carefully portrayed. And it's all so in character as well!!

Author's Response: I used to live in Liscard...small world isn't it:) if you have ever been to any of the regia shows on the wirral, 4 years ago Iran them and now my step mom does. If you like this period there is an amazing show with lots going on at Prenton Rugby club, 14-15 june:) I think you would really enjoy it... Or there is a book on wirral vikings by H Douglasson, published by Countyvise in Birkenhead I'm so glad you like the story and there will be more soon

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