[Report This]Date: 10/06/2008 - 04:05 am Title: 32
aww! after a rocky start, the birthday had a rockin' end! ;)
Author's Response: *biggrin* I'm so happy you liked *bounces all around* Thank you! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 06:10 pm Title: 32
Now what a way to end a picnic : )
Kudos!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it hun, thank you!!! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 02:30 pm Title: 32
i am kinda jealous! i soooooo wanna spend a night like that!! and the swing-thing... OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very good one! you rock babe!!!
Author's Response: I want a night like that too *sighs* Have to get a swing like that for my balcony methinks (and search the world for a boyfriend! lol)Thanks babe! *smooches*
[Report This]Date: 04/12/2008 - 02:12 pm Title: 32
That was so sweet, and hot, but mostly sweet! You made me smile, but deep inside I know that this maybe is too good for them, so I guess there'll be some angst coming up soon. They can't be together for all time, not yet anyway...
Author's Response: The angst is coming sooner than you may think, sadly. Like on Wednesday. *hides*I'm really glad you liked it, honey, thank you very much!*huggles*
[Report This]Date: 04/12/2008 - 12:46 am Title: 32
okay i have like people walking all around me so i had to speed read this chapter!! i hate doing that but what i read......it got me REALLY REALLY flustered!!! and JM's "For What I Need" is playing on Myspace so it just made it worse!!!! gah!! i'm gonna have to go back and read it more slowly and savor it better. so expect a much LONGER and THICKER review!! *eg* great job gurlie!! ttus!!! GET BETTER!!
Mon
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked even the speed-read babe! Thank you for the review, and you know longer and thicker are always welcome! LMAO We've missed having you around, *hugs you tight*
[Report This]Date: 04/10/2008 - 04:07 pm Title: 32
Sorry can' t leave a very long review as I must go buy a swing - erm and i suppose i better find a hunky man to shag on it while i'm out there!
This was yummy!!! The whole chapter was great, spanking, strawberries and 'cream', sex in the water (just), and then the swing mmmmm you outdid yourself sweetheart!! Wonderful!!
Sarah
x
Author's Response: LOL, find me one too, ok? Thank you, thank you, thank youououou!!! I'm really glad you liked it!! You're so nice to me!*huggles and smooches*
[Report This]Date: 04/10/2008 - 02:12 am Title: 32
You really are a naughty girl, actually...maybe you should be renamed Smutty McPorn? It would be fitting. This chapter made me blush, squirm in my seat, raise my eyebrows in wonderment and giggle...ALOT! The swing part was hysterical, but only because I had a guy suggest it one time. (Had to refrain though because there were children present which would so ruin the moment.)
Loved the smutty goodness, but you know I am on pins and needles waiting for the angst. Mainly, I'm just eager to read it because you normally don't give in to the angsty-ness and I can't wait to see what you throw at our lovely couple.
Hope you are feeling better! Your review the other day made me laugh (and feel very sorry for your current situation!) Damn those people who wouldn't get you a ciggy, not that you really needed it, but dad-darn it you wanted one and that's all that matters.
Talk to you soon, Tori
Author's Response: Tehehehehe, I believe I am a naughty girl but I doubt my mom would appreciate that new name you're suggesting! LMAO!!! I'm really glad you had all those reactions to this chapter, no, I'm not glad, I'm in ecstasy! THANK YOU! *hugs you tight*Hope you like the angst that's coming, cuz I really had a hard time writing it. I had to mentally revisit 'the dark era' of my life to write it and I'm glad I'd decided to keep it brief beforehand cuz I could have ended up doing a Romeo and Juliet to them the way I felt :-PTalk to you in about 5 secs, *smooches*
[Report This]Date: 04/10/2008 - 01:45 am Title: 32
Hot chapter. Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2008 - 11:35 pm Title: 32
This one keeps getting better and better! I will continue to watch for updates. Thanks
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I'm really glad you're still enjoying this! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2008 - 07:52 pm Title: 32
Awe, it's already finished? Sorry to know it ended... I'll miss it when I've read the last chapter.
HOT :) Both liked the dessert very much. Good idea with the picnics even if it started bad (Spike thinking the worst).
Author's Response: Yeah, it's finished and I can't believe it :-( Thank you honey, I'll miss it too, but will revisit them with one shots ;-) Glad you liked the chapter, but be prepared for angst in the next one!*huggles*
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2008 - 04:25 pm Title: 32
Oh, hot, hot, hot!
Hmmm, I have 2 boxes of strawberry in the fridge...
Thnx for the idea hun, you know I love you and your story! xoxo
Author's Response: Tehehehehe, glad I could be off service, hun. I just LOVE giving people naughty ideas! Now go put those strawberries to good use!!!*huggles*
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2008 - 03:29 pm Title: 32
OMG that was so hot! *fans myself* Loved it, honey! Would love to praise you more, but I'm out of words after this. *lol*
Author's Response: Hee! *hugs you tight* I'm so glad you liked it so much! It felt like I hadn't posted smut in ages! lol!! The next one will be the angstiest I've written yet, and I'm really nervous about it. I just hope you'll like that too!*huggles*
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2008 - 02:45 pm Title: 32
“Are you getting’ more beautiful by the day, or am I fallin’ for you more and more?”
god damn it, even if the worlds biggest asshole (which does sometimes turn out to be my bf lol) said that i'd swoon!
Great chappy sweets, i really cant wait for more, itll be a nice refresher after my demon paper for finals is handed in :)
Wonderful!
L.
Author's Response: I know *sighs* a guy (love of my life to be honest) told me that once. I found out today that he got engaged. So I guess he could be the world's biggest asshole, huh? That line has never left my mind tho! I'm glad you liked the chapter, honey. Hope that demon paper gets ready almost by itself and gets you a stellar grade! *smooches*
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2008 - 02:22 pm Title: 32
Uhhh, I don't think I'll ever see swings in the same manner again. Lord woman, just when I think this story can't get any more hotter you surprise me with something like this? That was sizzling hot, very different to anything I've read before, sexy, exciting and still retaining the loving quality between them. I think this is my favorite chapter so far. Masterfully done, sweetie! *hugs*
Author's Response: *squee's, bounces, and does happy dance* THANK YOU!!! Honey it means a LOT that you liked it so much. I'm so very happy right now! SQUEEEEEEEEE!!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! *hugs you tight and peppers you with kisses*
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2008 - 02:01 pm Title: 32
Very hot! How does it feel to have completed your first story? Congratulations! Glad you're feeling better! Looking forward to more soon!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!!! Thank you so much! It feels weird. One one hand I'm happy I saw it through, on the other it hurts to let go (so I'll revisit them for one-shots!). And of course I'm nervous about how everyone will react to the remaining chapters. More next Wednesday,*hugs* Thanks again, you're a sweetheart!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2008 - 01:38 pm Title: 32
OMG ~ OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!
You used the tire swing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SWEET! You had said something, but I didn't know if you were actually going to do that one. Oh that was just soo freakin AWESOME! **is SQUEEEING all over the place!** (oops, better clean up the mess, ewww). Many thanks for the nod in the beginning hun, I love it when you play in my demented playground of a mind - you come up with the coolest shit! Love ya to BITS!
Author's Response: Hehehehehehe, couldn't NOT use it, babe, it was a FRIGGIN' AWESOME idea! *squee's with you* Thank YOU, honey, for all the times you've been there for me and for throwing those great ideas my way! Love you just as much and wouldn't miss an opportunity to play in your demented playground of a mind!Mwah!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2008 - 11:43 am Title: 32
Squeeeeeeee, I love how this chapter is so sexy and so emotionally sweet at the same time. I don't think I'll ever look at a swing the same way again, LMAO. You're brilliant my sister and I of course enjoy helping you in any way I can... luv u boo. Big smoochies.
Author's Response: SQUEEEEEE-SQUARED! I'm sooooo happy you liked this! And you know the swing idea is aaaaall Carrie! (That woman's mind is my favorite playground!) LOL! Of the two of us you're the brilliant one, I merely try to learn from you. Thank you sooo much for all your help, luv ya lots boo! *huggles*
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2008 - 11:22 am Title: 32
aaawww.... that was sooo sweet, cute and sexy all at the same time. awsome chapter. hope all this happiness doesn't go away when his parents come back. more soon please.
Author's Response: Awww! Thank you sooo much, honey! I'm really very happy you liked it! And you know I can't give clues... :-P*huggles*
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2008 - 10:06 am Title: 32
Oh, girl, you sure know how to plan a party! Yummm....strawberries, whipped cream (my favorite way---from the can or....), Spike...oh, um....reviewing...right...
Loving it still. You know I'll be sad to see it end.
Somehow, I think worldwide the the sale of swingsets and jungle-gyms are gonna skyrocket....someone should have warned the marketing department of Home Depot so they could have put a premium on the sale price of board and rope after women the world over read your story...surely those products will swing themselves up to the check-out counter, the sales will rocket up in volume, prices will soar....you get the idea...and which gutter my mind is in still----and a good deal of it is your fault! At least this morning!
Thanks, hunny!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
Author's Response: *bounces despite being in pain* Thank you sooo much, honey! I'm so glad you liked the chapter and the story in total! I love that your mind is in the gutter, keeps mine company ;-)*huggles*
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2008 - 08:33 am Title: 32
Swing sex ey! lol! Will have to try that, cos obviously I have never done that before! That has got to be the best birthday make up sex ever! Thanks for sharing, you are great, and me and James didn't do much really, you had a lot of details yourself! lol!
Author's Response: LOL, yeah, I think you should try it! *stifles giggle* I wanna try it too, sounds fun! Thank you very much for everything hun, and thank James for me too, you really helped out! Loves you!!! *smooches*
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2008 - 08:13 am Title: 32
hum... "swing sex"...? that was excellent!!
seems everything turned out well for spikie! perfect birthday present, perfect girl... (lol)
xxx
Author's Response: Glad you approved babe :-DAnd see? Buffy is not a bitch (well, my Buffy isn't!!!)Love you lots and lots! Μάκια!!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2008 - 07:39 am Title: 32
Swing sex? So filing that away for future reference. ;) Though I'll never be able to pass a playground without a grin now!
A lovely, fluffy, smutty chapter! :)
Author's Response: Tehehehe, I found that interesting too. It's the first sex scene (other than that in the pool) I had no RL experience in and had to do some research. Now I haven't been able to pass a playground without that grin you mentioned since :-DI'm really glad you liked it, honey, thank you!!! *hugs you tight*
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2008 - 05:59 am Title: 32
all caught up and may i just say...BRAVO!!!!
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you so VERY much!!! Your review just made my day!*hugs*
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