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Reviewer: xoChantelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2009 - 04:34 am Title: Kara

Jeez! For a second there I thought you were having Spike move on from Buffy. I thought 'Ohh man.. he is falling for Kara' but then I got to the end and I was like *Pheww* lol I really want to see how Buffy gets back into his life.

I have a feeling I might know though...

I guess I will have to wait and see...

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 10:12 am Title: Kara

Sorry, I don´t get it. That is so heart-breakingly wrong. Why does he do that? He doesn´t even try to find out where Buffy is? What the heck? Moving on so easily, with a slayer no less. You KNOW that every spuffy-shipper is close to hurling when reading this. Why do you make Spike betray Buffy without a second thought? A reunion doesn´t get even better if one of the two is straying and betraying prior to that. This is just completion of every wrongness he has ever done to Buffy. Trying to kill her, getting his revenge, hurting her and now abandoning her completely. I dislike this. Just picking up a random girl/slayer and getting it on with her because she is willing and falls for him. Ugh, thanks for mucking up my sunday morning.

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 04:32 am Title: Kara

"Because she isn't the girl of his dreams.

Buffy... "

Or IS she? You haven't really said WHEN William (/Spike) has been re-born (or 'where" either, actually dimensionally-speaking, as in a different one from the "actual" one of the Joss-TV-verse-one we usually fanfic in/about)...
Could William have been born a generation later? Not sure, since you mention the LA destruction, but also say it's not apparent and he wonders HOW it got covered up.
Who is his mum, BTW? A convenient Anne? (Or a girl named Buffy? Just to throw that out there,
re-incarnationally speaking...)
Ditto-ish on the "re-incarnationally speaking...re: Kara...
again, yes, also a slayer, and with Wm/Spike at this point, at least; again, you haven't said when this life is occurring (or where in dimensional space)...You haven't said why :
"It was night when Kara's life forever would change."
How? Is it because he realizes he can't love someone that is NOT Buffy? Or is it that Kara might suddenly HAVE Buffy's memories superimposed on/with her own, and have come into realization of them, had them come consciously to the fore? Or will Kara meet her fate at the hands of a vampire, etc?
And I take it that HE does not realize that SHE is a slayer? That she didn't NEED rescuing?
And Spike would have a COW if he knew you had referred to him (William/Spike, him) as "Brooding"!!! That is/was the "OTHER" former (?) souled vamp!
Questions, questions, and not yet quite an answer in sight. What a QUANDRY you have left us dear readers in!!!
And ..."KARA"...gotta love that name... fancy putting it into a fic...!!! Love it!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
fyreburned@yahoo.com

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 01:27 am Title: Kara

Ok i intend to read more of this , and i gotta say kara's probably a lovely girl, and being a Spuffy nut like me it had to have been as tough to write the last paragraph as it was to read it, i should have passed right over it , but i stupidly didn't. Eventually kara is going to get her heart broken and hurt and i find myself not caring, I hope Spike stops using her and the same goes for Buffy and whoever she's currently with , maybe you could introduce Buffy 's current other to Kara and let them go off into the sunset , or better yet to hell, because i don't care about them ,only Spike and Buffy and their eventual reunion , which is why i will keep reading . I just hope I don't have to get grossed out for too many chapters more, I know , I know you did warn me, it's my own fault for being an angst fanatic(i'm nuts) and I love nfa fics, and the premise is good, you story has gotten me mad with means it's effected me emotionally and isn't that what writing is all about . Sorry for babbling but i tend to when i'm mad, questionis , how mad are the preceding chapters gonna make me, can't wait.

Reviewer: dicecanntcry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2007 - 11:24 pm Title: Kara

oh goodie! that last line made me feel so much better about reading this fic, and helped me not to be so against Kara as what I normally would be.

hope to see more soon!

Reviewer: Ok Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2007 - 10:47 pm Title: Kara

Still not sure where you going but if you keep updating i'll keep reading and reviewing. Does Spike realize she is a slayer. hope you update soon

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