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Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2007 - 04:28 pm Title: Chapter One

Oh so he covered for Spike, that was good.

Author's Response: more will come out about David

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2007 - 10:11 pm Title: Chapter One

It was kind of harsh burning her dress. I guess slave labor is still going strong there, maybe the grandparents could have a session in the hospital to mellow them out to her. I think this is a great start for a story, would you fill us in on what her parents do and why they moved away from such a promising career. Thanks!

Author's Response: thanks for the input

Reviewer: piratesxohmy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2007 - 02:07 am Title: Chapter One

loved it , can't wait until your next chapter!

Author's Response: glad you liked it

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2007 - 11:13 pm Title: Chapter One

Just found your fic and love it! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: glad you like it

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