Date: 08/12/2008 - 07:00 am Title: part one
Oh. my. god. That was frickin' HOT! Love it! And thanks for giving Parker what he deserves!
Date: 04/02/2008 - 11:16 pm Title: part one
When will part 2 be up?
Date: 12/07/2007 - 09:51 am Title: part one
OMG that was amazing. I loved the build up and it was eventually so hot it was untrue and I loved how long it was. Am so looking forward to more but am off for a cold shower now and a fag - bye and thank you so much.
Date: 12/07/2007 - 08:09 am Title: part one
Loved your story! :) Spike was very sweet and the spuffyness was so hot. Thinking about that cold shower now ;) It was good that it was a long chapter :)
The part about Amy was so funny :) the girl reminded him of a rat that needed to be caged... *giggles* Dru and Amy, that was an unusual combination, but I liked it a lot! :) Looking forward to read more! So please update soon!
Ariadne
Date: 12/04/2007 - 11:38 pm Title: part one
Excellent! Can't wait for part two!
Date: 12/04/2007 - 09:52 pm Title: part one
Enjoyed the start; this was sweet and hot.
Date: 12/04/2007 - 07:07 pm Title: part one
Loved it... great start! :D
Date: 12/04/2007 - 02:08 pm Title: part one
This was awesome smutty goodness, but more than that, I really loved how sweet and patient he is with her. Everything was written wonderfully from the barely contained lust to the longing on both parts. Plus, I am such a sucker for Spike when he is all protective and growly. I loved the scene with Parker.
I can't wait for part two. Great, great job.
Thanks for sharing.
Cheers,
Nina
Date: 12/04/2007 - 01:31 pm Title: part one
Well |I don't know about them having a cold shower, I definitely need one after reading that!! Very hot stuff, can't wait to read the next chapter
Date: 12/04/2007 - 11:51 am Title: part one
WOW that cold shower doesn't sound too bad right now ;p Can't wait to read the rest!
Date: 12/04/2007 - 10:29 am Title: part one
Jaysus H. Cheerist....ARE you TRYING to kill off us old ladies so early in the morning? What a wake up call!!!
And here Mr. Frisky is still in the hospital with his 15th heart attack (really---but is probably coming home today!)...oh, well, guess I'll just have to fall back on the affair I've had with my old friend (has gone thru many, many incarnations! Hee!) Buzz.... Oh, Buzz....Buzz...???
Come and re-read a story with your best gal....hee...hee...hee........!!!
Yeah! What a lovely way to wake up=== with a smile on your face! And, a second part is forthCOMING???
Are you seriously trying to send me over to join Mr. Frisky in the Heart Ward at the Hospital???
Obviously, I loved it.
Only picked out a few typos, etc (and what the heck was I doing that for, and where did I find the presence of mind to do it with???)...
I wait with bated breath for part II (as if I *have* any breath left this a,m. ...)....hope it's as good as part I.
BTW, both in general and pertaining to the sex scenes, I truly enjoyed the much longer chapter format of this fic. I hope part II follows suit. That is one pet peeve I have with many fics, that chapters are so brief, sometimes barely more than drabbles.
Thanks for the read...and the...read...!!!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
fyreburned@yahoo.com
Author's Response: LOL well thank you so much for def. the most interesting review ive gotten. Part two will probably be along next week at some point. So glad you liked it, i think i smoked a pack writitng it lol.
As for the typos, sorry, there always tend to be a few with me, esp. with the words, here/hear and where/were, dont ask why cuz i really dont know lol.
thanks again SO much!
xx
Date: 12/04/2007 - 06:39 am Title: part one
OK, I'm never again reading a story of yours at work! GOD! that was sooo HOT! I'm gonna read the next update at home, alone!!! LOL!
XXX
Author's Response: lol ya well the next chapter has 'the sex' lol, i do recommend an at home reading ;)
Thanks for the great review, really good to post again, its been a while
xx
Date: 12/04/2007 - 04:50 am Title: part one
very steamy and it had a nice plot too! i really enjoyed the mix of story and naughty-ness :o)
Author's Response: thanks so much. glad to see you again with one of my fics!
xx