Well |I don't know about them having a cold shower, I definitely need one after reading that!! Very hot stuff, can't wait to read the next chapter

Jaysus H. Cheerist....ARE you TRYING to kill off us old ladies so early in the morning? What a wake up call!!!
And here Mr. Frisky is still in the hospital with his 15th heart attack (really---but is probably coming home today!)...oh, well, guess I'll just have to fall back on the affair I've had with my old friend (has gone thru many, many incarnations! Hee!) Buzz.... Oh, Buzz....Buzz...???
Come and re-read a story with your best gal....hee...hee...hee........!!!
Yeah! What a lovely way to wake up=== with a smile on your face! And, a second part is forthCOMING???
Are you seriously trying to send me over to join Mr. Frisky in the Heart Ward at the Hospital???
Obviously, I loved it.
Only picked out a few typos, etc (and what the heck was I doing that for, and where did I find the presence of mind to do it with???)...
I wait with bated breath for part II (as if I *have* any breath left this a,m. ...)....hope it's as good as part I.
BTW, both in general and pertaining to the sex scenes, I truly enjoyed the much longer chapter format of this fic. I hope part II follows suit. That is one pet peeve I have with many fics, that chapters are so brief, sometimes barely more than drabbles.
Thanks for the read...and the...read...!!!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
fyreburned@yahoo.com

Author's Response: LOL well thank you so much for def. the most interesting review ive gotten. Part two will probably be along next week at some point. So glad you liked it, i think i smoked a pack writitng it lol. As for the typos, sorry, there always tend to be a few with me, esp. with the words, here/hear and where/were, dont ask why cuz i really dont know lol. thanks again SO much! xx

very steamy and it had a nice plot too! i really enjoyed the mix of story and naughty-ness :o)

Author's Response: thanks so much. glad to see you again with one of my fics! xx