[Report This]Date: 03/15/2011 - 03:40 am Title: 73
I loved the "love" scene. Anyone can write a "sex" scene (if for no other reason than that there are plenty of examples out there to follow), but to write a love scene that actually feels intimate is something else. Well done.
[Report This]Date: 12/13/2008 - 03:50 pm Title: 73
I have waited for this for so long and I can't believe I was too busy to read the moment you posted.
You have nothing to worry about concerning the love scenes, honey. This was beautiful, touching, and real, and I loved it!
*huggles*
Author's Response: Wohoo! So very happy you enjoyed the chapter, hon! Thank you! :D
[Report This]Date: 12/13/2008 - 01:57 pm Title: 73
Don't worry you did a great job, much better than I could ever do :). Oh and this is the first review for me for this story because I've seen the stroy before but never read it but I started today and made it all the way here so now I'm definately interested in it. I love the way the characters are written and how Xander was such a pain in the ass. Also you are an excellent writer at the angst. I love this story so far and I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Wow, a new reader! Yay! *lol* Thank you so much, I'm so glad you decided to start reading my story. :)
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2008 - 02:04 am Title: 73
You did awesome. I thought you did a great job writing the sex scene. I liked that it was not that kinky. I had a this feeling that Spike might better cry when they actually made love. I am happy that Spike enjoyed himself. I love that Buffy is his home. Time like this I miss the show being on the air. You are a great writer.
Author's Response: *blush* Thank you so much for those words. Means the world to me. :)
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2008 - 12:10 am Title: 73
Beautiful! Loved it! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: So happy you liked! Thanks! :)
[Report This]Date: 12/11/2008 - 09:24 am Title: 73
Amazing chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 12/11/2008 - 04:45 am Title: 73
it was beautiful. You should not have felt so nervous or dreaded it. Have faith in your skill :)
And while, yeah sex scenes have been written a million times in other stories, the act has been done n (tending to infinity) times more than that and with very little variation. Can't help that pretty much "tab a fits into slot b, withdraw, reinsert. Repeat until satisfied" is the whole process.
Author's Response: Guess you're right. Still, think I'll always be a bit unsure about writing the sex for that reason. Anyway, thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 12/11/2008 - 12:52 am Title: 73
Sweetie, you did fine. That was a beautiful moment. Glad to see that he got through it just fine.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing and letting me know you liked it. :)
[Report This]Date: 12/11/2008 - 12:50 am Title: 73
You did an awsome job. i loved this chapter so much it was so full of love and you wrote it perfectly.
Author's Response: Thank you! So happy to hear you say that. :)
[Report This]Date: 12/11/2008 - 12:40 am Title: 73
AHHHH IM SO HAPPY THAT IT FINALLY HAPPENED!! i LOVE this fic and am so happy that u updated. im glad that they both enjoyed it and that everything worked out well. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX
Author's Response: Thank you very much, so glad you liked it! More coming asap. :)
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 11:24 pm Title: 73
i loved his chapter:).... and as for you thinking everyone will hate this chapter i thinks thats way off the mark..... you wrote it beautifully and i can't wait to see what you have in store for the couple next:):)
keep up the amazing work:)
Author's Response: I'll do my best. :) Thank you so much for your review!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 10:23 pm Title: 73
Glad to see neither Buffy broke Spike nor did he freak out. Well done, your chapter. Sad to see the story come to an end.
Author's Response: Not over quite yet though. ;) Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 10:17 pm Title: 73
OK your mantra should be "I must have more faith in my writing". You have absolutely nothing to worry about. So Spike is usually written as a sex god (and boy would I like him in my bed) but your Spike is normal and lovely. I think you have tackled an incredibly difficult subject with enormous sensitivity and for this Spike and Buffy this chapter was (if I can use the same word once again) perfect.
Author's Response: You have no idea how much your kind words mean to me. Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 07:10 pm Title: 73
ho dont you worry so much!
the chapter is perfect!!
the sex scene is good it describe how spike is feeling very good!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, so happy to hear that you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 06:41 pm Title: 73
that sex scene was amazing. nothing wrong with it
YAY!!! They finally did it!
can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Amazing? Really? Wow. Can't tell you how happy I am to hear that. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 06:25 pm Title: 73
well i think you wrote this sex scene great and its always fun to read a spuffy sex moment but anyway please update again soon
Author's Response: Update as soon as I can. :) Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 05:52 pm Title: 73
I thought it was perfect! It was sweet and romantic and a little bit awkward, exactly how it should be. I doubt Spike would all of a sudden become this ravenous confident sex machine, so I thought it was played perfectly right. :-) Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 05:32 pm Title: 73
Sex scenes are the one thing I'm worst at, I always hate writing them, so I know where you're coming from. Although, you did a pretty good job of it. All I have to say is, yes, finally...lol! So, I take it this story is almost coming to an end. Wow, over 73 chapters. I applaud you for even being able to do that. I never could.
Author's Response: You too? Thought I was the only one. :) Glad you liked it. Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 05:31 pm Title: 73
Written quite nicely... and glad Spike did not freak out... with any type of memories of the past..
Enjoyed..
Author's Response: Good to hear. Thank you!
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