Date: 07/03/2009 - 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 17
Great to have an update - what you are doing with all the characters and this new realm is a pleasure to read. You have created another terrific world for The Buffyverse characters to inhabit and for FF community to enjoy - THANKS MUCH
Hope that you will be able to update very soon again.
Author's Response: Thank you nmcil, it's comments like that, that keep me going, however slowly. New chapter up tomorrow if my internet access co-operates.
Date: 06/28/2009 - 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 17
LOVE IT! Also love the whole coller thing with faythe and that one dude!! HOT!!!
Author's Response: You naughty bondage person you. Wait, whatever do you mean?
Date: 06/25/2009 - 07:40 am Title: Chapter 17
So happy to see more of this!
Ahnja and Andii are perfectly in character and so funny. Pot roast with marshmallows indeed.
What a cruel place to leave us hanging though!
Author's Response: Yup am the cruellist. Glad you liked the dialogue between A & A, had to really concentrate on Ahnja's character so am pleased that it worked for you.
Date: 06/25/2009 - 07:40 am Title: Chapter 17
So happy to see more of this!
Ahnja and Andii are perfectly in character and so funny. Pot roast with marshmallows indeed.
What a cruel place to leave us hanging though!
Author's Response: Thanks again.
Date: 06/25/2009 - 07:35 am Title: Chapter 17
Enjoyed this update with all of its detail. Ennico's attempts to seduce Buffy are highly entertaining bringing out Spike's possessive side. Look forward to more!
Author's Response: Ennico is a bit mischievous isn't he. Deliberately provoking Spike perhaps? Thank you Vette.
Date: 06/25/2009 - 04:01 am Title: Chapter 17
This is my favourite spuffy story at the moment and has been since I discovered it. It's such a great mixture of sci-fi, romance and adventure. One of the best plots ever in the spuffy genre. Well done, and remember there are (I'm sure many) fans of this story just hanging out for an update.
Author's Response: Am thrilled that you like my little Spuffy universe and hope that it is still one of your favourites after all this time. It has been a lot of fun to write apart from the few headbanging moments when I don't know what I'm doing.
Date: 06/24/2009 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 17
I love this story, I hadn't seen the updates for awhile so was' pleased to get a number of chapters in one go!! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: thanks PJ, I hope this next chapter doesn't slip under your radar.
Date: 06/24/2009 - 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 17
Ooooo, are those barriers I hear crumbling? Great update, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Yes at least they are beginning to dance to the same tune now and events are on the way to make their bonds stronger and the barriers weaker.
Date: 06/24/2009 - 10:15 am Title: Chapter 17
This chapter had so many good scenes in it, and the dialogue throughout was great too. I also simply loved Ahnja's and Andii's appearance... lol! Wonderful update!
Author's Response: I really sweated over those two so am pleased that they worked for you. Another long chapter on the way.
Date: 06/24/2009 - 07:32 am Title: Chapter 17
OH! Such a needed update! *bowing down* Thank you for such a treat - great long chapter. More coming right? Mmm... Prophesy... testing one? Nice one? Oh I am a bit scraed!
Author's Response: Hello Carrot. Yes, more finally on way (tomorrow). Hope the prophesy will shed a little more light on the story and yes, you're right to be a little scared.
Date: 06/23/2009 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 17
still with you and still loving every word....the spike lving was delicatly and superbly handled...more and please not so long a wll with you and still loving every word....the spike lving was delicatly and superbly handled...more and please not so long a wait next tiait next time
Author's Response: Was your cat walking over the keyboard when you wrote this? ;) Thank you jamies_lady.
Date: 06/23/2009 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 17
Did love Anhja and Andii ... and felt you have her voice. Waiting to see if Brack is able to stay in LossAngel and be her consort.. I am sure he would appreciate it as well.. LOL
And true to form.. Buffy and Spike had a very nice encounter only to turn it into their normal banter. Hopefully, Faythe's warning to Buffy being tested about Spike is not a foreshadowing..
Waiting to see why Anhja is in trouble, the Axe, the prophecy.. and Buffy..
Enjoyed.. and thank you..
Author's Response: Hi Pam, thanks for the thoughtful comments and for the extra nudge ;). Hope some of the explanation in the next chapter will make the plot a little clearer. One of your predictions won't come true so don't hate me.
Date: 06/23/2009 - 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 17
ROTFL!!! Another awesome chapter! I LOVE Andii. He is hilarious. And Ahnja! “You’re right, it does suit me...although I am glad that I ignored your suggestion of not wearing any undergarments, and crossing and uncrossing my legs in front of our guests.” Hahahaha! I wonder what else Andii thought of Basic Instinct!
I also laughed out loud at:
“Great, why don’t you sign my rump with a cattle-brand while you’re at it?”
Annoyed that she was reacting so badly towards his marks of affection, Spike retorted, “Well, since you’re being a complete cudder, you only have to ask!”
Wonderful work again. So glad you're still working on this fic. *sends your muse hugs to write faster!* :)
Author's Response: You picked out my favourite bits, thank you. I'm relieved that you got the film reference, I forget that most readers will probably be younger than me and may not have seen it. Thanks also from my muse for the hugs, they didn't make her work any faster but she felt a lot better for them.
Date: 06/23/2009 - 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 17
Always thrilled to see a new chapter! Interesting to see the ever-changing dynamic between Buffy and Spike change once again :) Hopefully they really aren't back to square one and will be able to rely on one another emotionally, physically, and as warriors since it looks like they are certainly in for a large battle ahead.
I really look forward to hearing about what is in store for everyone and this universe and more discussion of the Saya.
And, as always, I love how you merge familiar characters into your universe so nicely.
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you Albie. Yes more Saya info on the way hopefully it will make Buffy's role a little clearer. Our couple will get together in all senses of the word but you're right, their warrior side will be at the forefront very soon.
Date: 06/23/2009 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 17
As she arched her back before him like the figurehead on a ship’s prow, he bowed down his head to drive the waves against her once more. Gorgeous imagery right there.
And Faythe, bless her for bringing some foresight into the story! Oh yes, Buffy, you just might regret taking so long to give him a chance if you lose him, especially with the spooky prophecy in the works. I assume spooky, because you cliff-hangered it like some kind of evil temptress.
And Yay! Andrew and Anya!
Author's Response: I've never been called an evil temptress before. I like it! For someone who had never read romance novels until recently (for research purposes only of course) I seem to be making up for lost time, so I'm pleased you liked the ships prow stuff. At least it wasn't a train and a tunnel (smirks).