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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 09:44 pm Title: Ch. 9-Aye Aye Captian!!

Bad timing for Riley to arrive now. I wonder what happened down there with Buffy and Riley, did they fight (because of the noise Spike and Dawn heard).

Author's Response: yeah, i'm thinking of broadening that later on. or not!! i think i might want it to be like the fight that Angel and Buffy had in the epi, "The Zeppo", Xander's epi. Xander walks in on them having one of their DRAMATIC fights and they have an apocalypse that night but they don't really focus on that. i dunno yet. but i'm glad u like it!!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 02:13 pm Title: Ch. 9-Aye Aye Captian!!

Tehehehehe, I want the best bloke to win NOW!!! Woo hoo for second update so soon! *does happy dance* Me likey lots, babe!

Mwah!

Author's Response: like OMG i wanna SQUUEEEEE!!! go look how many reviews i have over on EF!! i'm just bouncing in my chair!! one of my constant readers (YES!! I HAVE A CONSTANT READER!! :OD) gave me an idea so i might update w/ chapter 10 before that interview!! so u might have ch. 10 by tonight!! *TWIRLS SOTIA AROUND HER DESK!!* i brought Riley in for some angst and i will try to make it good. i can't wait for u to read the next chapter gurlie!! it's gonna be yummy!! *SKIPS OUT OF SOTIA'S OFFICE AND HEADS TO BEAUTIFUL BEACH WITH HOT GREEK STUD* see you soon!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 01:51 pm Title: Ch. 9-Aye Aye Captian!!

I liked the interaction between Spike and Dawn, and of course that moment is when Riley shows up. I wonder what that crash was. Good chapter thanks for updating.

Author's Response: thanks so much for reviewing!! that crash was just a vague crash for humor. i might add what it was in the next chapter. dunno. i'm glad u liked it!! hope u keep reading!

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 12:51 pm Title: Ch. 9-Aye Aye Captian!!

Sorry, I had thought this all happened after Riley got caught with the vamps. As far as I remembered Buffy only became aware of Spike's feelings after Riley left.
Ah, well... no matter... it was just a rather unpleasant surprise to find him here. And this sheds a new light on the goings on in a previous chapter when Buffy and Spike went on a date as payment for his information. So, basically she was cheating on Riley (not that I think that he doesn't deserve it or anything). That does raise the question though... what is Riley's secret that Buffy is aware of?

Author's Response: well okay, from what i remember Buffy had a vague idea in s5 while Riley was still there that Spike had feelings for her. Remember Spike coming to get her and the classic line "are you naked under there?" was uttered. yeahhhh....anyways, yeah, i can't have it lovey-dovey all the time like i want so i had to bring in some angst. and it wasn't technically a date. more like a patrol. Spike just ate along the way, lol. oh the secret is the Initiative! u didn't get that? remember, he has to keep it a secret and have everyone think that he's a TA. i was hoping it wouldn't be that vague but i really didn't want anyone to know who it was till she said his name. cuz u thought Angel didn't u?? :o) yeah, i wanted everyone to think Angel. hope i worked, lol. glad u liked it!!

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 07:33 am Title: Ch. 9-Aye Aye Captian!!

What's with Captain America deciding to pop in for a visit? They ran out of vamp hos in Belize? Or what happened this time, in your AU?
Francly... I just want him maimed :D

Author's Response: well u have to remember s5. riley's there but it's not working! remember? LOL if u read the last of this chapter, there IS going to be some male strutting. this time, in MY story, Spike's gonna get a fare fight!! right now, Buffy and Gag Me are still together but.......starting to flatline.

Author's Response: also, thank you for reading!! *HUGS*

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