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Reviewer: strikske Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2010 - 05:16 am Title: Beneath Me

you have me waiting for the next chapter

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2008 - 01:32 am Title: Beneath Me

I was trying to see how Spike might get Buffy's job in the last chap (since hi-jinks dictate that she does't get the promotion) but once I found out in this chap that it was a London based business that bought out Buffy's company, it made sense. Though I also expected that Buffy would have to shar her apt. with Spike...that's going to happen, huh?
And I liked Buffy thinking about the use of the paper shredder. Ok, not nice, but hee.

Reviewer: athena606 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2008 - 11:23 pm Title: Beneath Me

urgh GOD he is acting like an ass. i love it so far.

Author's Response: Heheheheh, he is isn't he? Thanks for the review sweets. Hugs.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 06:43 pm Title: Beneath Me

Oh that is so good,

Author's Response: Hee hee, again, glad you enjoyed it. Smoochies.

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 07:16 pm Title: Beneath Me

Gotta say, I don't care how attractive he was, if my boss talked to me like that, I'd file a sexual harrassment suit. Just saying. I do like it though, since it is fiction, it's ok.

Author's Response: Good, I'm glad you see it for the comedy it's meant to be, b/c I agree, if I had a boss like that too, I'd be filing complaints every day, lol. GLad you liked the chapter sweets and thanks for the review. Hugs.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2008 - 06:21 pm Title: Beneath Me

I knew it! :p He got her job ;) *off to next chapter*

Author's Response: Hahahahah, yup, he sure did - glad you like it hon and thanks for the review. Smoochies.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 12:17 am Title: Beneath Me

See? This is why I wait a couple of chapters before beginning a story... I don't like dealing with cliffys, even though I love dishing them out...yeah, I know, hypocritical of me. Oh well! I did see this coming, but oh, I know it will delicious! It will be interesting to see how long they both last...him falling in love and her giving in. Sigh.

Author's Response: lmao - I can understand that, I do that too sometimes, just wait til a few are up. Cliffies are so deliciously evil aren't they? HEE HEE HEE. As for the falling in love - oh yeah, it'll happen, but it will be a stubborn ride on both their parts, *winks*. Thanks for the review hon - huggles.

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 12:43 am Title: Beneath Me

Another fantastic chapter. The tension is on its way to spiking very soon.

Author's Response: Giggles, oh yes, the tension is spiraling upwards for sure. Glad you liked the chappy hon, thanks for the great review. Hugs.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 12:30 pm Title: Beneath Me

He he - well since it was in the summary it was har not to see it coming - but it was still gooooooood! Loved the piggiebank immagery. Can't wait for more - so I wont - I'll just go straight on to the next chappie since its up ; )

Author's Response: Good, glad to see the delivery of the predictable went well - it had to be done, so I tried to make it as humorous as possible. Giggles, glad to see you're still enjoying it and of course I'll be looking for your next review and hope you like ch 3 just as much. Thanks for the great review, hon. Huggles.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 05:24 am Title: Beneath Me

Evil bastard. Gotta say life sucks sometimes. Poor girl. Gonna make for some great sex one of these days, though :)

Author's Response: He is rather evil huh? But yeah, though Buffy is put in a bad position, once they do get together, things will get interesting to say the least, *winks*. Thanks for the review darling. Hugs.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 05:07 am Title: Beneath Me

well......isn't that interesting????? spike is buffy's boss. oh, this is gonna be sweet. buffy's stubborn and spike is persistant so....this is gonna be quite a story. loved it soooo much. really cheered me up....on with the next chapter.

Author's Response: YAY, glad you like it, boo. Yup, firworks everywhere with these two and their personalities. You can count on more verbal sparring and fun banter. Thanks for the review sweety - hugs you tight and glad I could cheer you up.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 11:02 pm Title: Beneath Me

Although I knew it was coming, you built the tension of the bad news beautifully. Buffy being all happy and sure of herself, only to be shot down, even being given more work with no pay raise has me outraged, too. Then, you really drop the bomb with her meeting her new boss! It 's just delicious.

This made me laugh out loud: "Glancing at the manual paper trimmer with its giant cutting blade, she swore if he looked at her one more time like he wanted to play hide the salami, she’d slice it for him so thin it’d fit through a piggy-bank slit!" I wonder how long Spike's sexual fantasies would last if he had an inkling this was the sort of violence going through Buffy's mind!

Off to chapter three, whee!

Author's Response: Squeeeee, your review is music to my ears. I'm glad the oneI got the job d even if it was predicatbleLOL - that was Sotia's idea about the salami and cutter - I couldn't resist using it. Hope you enjoy ch 3 sweety and thanks for the review. Huggles.

Reviewer: Fia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 08:07 pm Title: Beneath Me

Poor Buffy! No promotions, although I am guilty of wanting Spike to drive her crazy by being her boss! Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHAHAH, adn he will drive her crazy too, no doubt about that. It's how she handles it that will make his life more interesting as well, *winks*. Thanks for the review sweety. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2008 - 12:18 am Title: Beneath Me

I wish I could say I love this Spike. Looking forward to see how Buffy handles him until she finds another job! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Spike will definitly be the bad guy for awhile, a lot of folks won't like him at first, but things will eventually turn spuffy and he'll come around from being the pig he is, I promise. Glad you liked the chappy and no worries on Buffy's part - she can handle her own with her sassy mouth., *winks* Thanks for the review darling. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 - 09:21 am Title: Beneath Me

I look forward to reading another one of your stories! The sparks between Buffy and Spike are enough to ignite a bonfire. What a truly fun start.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the fireworks between our couple, there's more of that one the way, *winks*. THank you so very much for the review darling - smoochies.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 09:14 pm Title: Beneath Me

OT: If I remember correctly Henry isn't a romance writer at Blood ties (but he is at the book) *g* So he is kind of a colleague of you ;-) Looking forward to see them later this year.
And no, not so obvious what would happen, just this would be the perfect Murphy's Law.
What a shame ... it's sounds like the reason Buffy thinks of is the reason why she didn't get promoted. Very bad she spent the money already that she doesn't have.
Yeah, surprise on both sides now :) The banter has started again *grins* ~ Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: Correct - he produces comics, well, not comics, but draws adult comic-book type drama... jeez I can't think of the correct title right now for that kind of work. Nope, not obvious, but oh yes, follows Murphy's Law to a 'T'. Thanks for the review hon - more banter coming up, more fireworks, you name it. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 03:04 pm Title: Beneath Me

Poor Buffy but then she did count her chicken's before they'd hatched and my glass is always half empty - couldn't fit any more metaphors into that sentence!!! I'm not sure that this Buffy is going to be as straightforward as Spike seems to think and I can't wait. Loved it - as always.

Author's Response: Indeed, she was overconfident. LOL, love the metaphors and how true they ring here at ML. And very, very good gues on Buffy's personality - but that's allllllll I can say for right now, *winks*. Thanks a bunch for the review hon, I really appreciate it. Hugs.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 12:55 pm Title: Beneath Me

OHHH i can't wait for her to start working beneath him, wish you hadn't made him so much younger and Angel wasn't in this one but I know your fics are nothing but my favorite spuffy so even if i get bit squeeked along the way ( but hope not) I still read. Really liking all the conflict beywwen them , give me more sister and soon , please.

Author's Response: Ahhhhhhhhh, I have you duped on something. Angel hasn't enetered the fic yet.... *winks*.... hasn't even been mentioned either, *double winks*, giggles. True, Spike is younger, but there's only 6 years diff here and I thought, why not make him younger - give him a chance to learn something from an older woman. And at least he's not a teenager, so I do hope not to squick you out. GLad you like the conflict sweety and hope you stick around because the conflict gets worse before it gets better - that's just my style I guess. Thanks for the review sweety - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 12:30 pm Title: Beneath Me

well done

Author's Response: Thank you sweety. Smooches.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 10:17 am Title: Beneath Me

Wow! This second meeting was as equally explosive as the first one, the Spuffy sparks are definitely flying. Loved the dialogue, and the glimpses into Spike and Buffy's heads throughout the chapter. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: Indeed and it gets even more explosive in the next chapter, ooops, gave that away, didn't I? LOL. Thank you darling for the wonderful review, stay tuned. Huggles.

Reviewer: SpikesGoddess Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 07:36 am Title: Beneath Me

Yay! another update, and dont have to wait long for the next either! u are really spoiling me now! lol! loved the chapter, mmm, office sex... wait i mean, love the chapter, cant wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Hhahaha, and I'm glad I can spoil you darling. The possibilities are endless, aren't they? And I do hope you enjoy the next chapter as well, thank you soooooo much for the review. Kisses.

Reviewer: ~^^~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 05:44 am Title: Beneath Me

Such a speedy update ~^^~ I was thrilled to get off of work and see this posted on the site! Wonderful end to a long shift!
Poor Buffy, this just isn't her day! Spike is obviously thrilled to bits. He had just better watch those bits with her around tho, cause she is clearly not going to "play nice"

Author's Response: I'm so glad I could entertain you after a night at work hon and help you unwind/ Oh yes, this is not Buffy's day but you're right, SPike does need to watch out for her claws where his bits are concerned, hee hee. Thanks for the review darling, hugs.

Reviewer: oooooooooooooo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 02:11 am Title: Beneath Me

Again, Spike is a womanizer. You writers sure do love Spike being a womanizer. I would love to see a story where Buffy is a manizer. Believe me there are lots out there. Lots of women using men and what they can get from them.

Anyways, I will continue with this story since I see that you have mild angst. But if Spike is made to be just another dick, ass, jerk, or anything else like that. I will not continue.

I like how you have Spike smart and young. William seems like he would be really smart.

You also seem to love writing lots of sex in your Spuffy stories. Why? Have you ever consider writing a Spuffy story where it isn't all about sex at first. Just wondering. Not a meant to be a put down or anything. I would love to read a story from you where it isn't all about sex with them in the beginning.

Author's Response: Yes, while it’s true that a lot of authors, as well as readers, like Spike as a womanizer, it doesn’t account for everyone. I enjoy reading him as such because I like to see how he redeems himself and eventually finds love as well as the challenge of writing him as a jerk and his redemption – simply a preference of mine. I can tell you there are definitely stories here at TSR where Buffy is the man-eater (though it’s been awhile since I’ve read one) and that’s great, too. Like you said, they’re out there. I think, (personal opinion here), Buffy in BTVS was rather conservative with her sexuality up to Season Six and it’s easier for me to see things from that perspective. Although I write AU fics, I try to keep a certain level of canon in their personalities and a man-eater Buffy would, to me, be a Faith

While I’m glad you enjoy ML’s Spike as young and smart, I can tell you up front this story is definitely not for you. He gets worse, much worse, (he’s a complete ass in this fic, concentrates on sex though I can say he won’t see any from Buffy for quite some time) before he gets better and as I’ve said in my first a/n, this story is meant to get people riled up. If I can’t move people to feel passionately one way or another, I may as well give up as a writer.

As for me, personally, writing a story that doesn’t involve sex up front, it’s possible, but you’re also talking to a woman who has to live without her husband under the same roof for about 3 years and running now b/c he’s gallivanting the globe with the military. I’ve sex on the brain, needless to say, and I write nothing below nc17 as a preference. In the future I may decide on a plot that isn’t centered on sex from the start, but as to when I can’t predict. The muse has to have a proper plot bunny for that and I find I can only concentrate on one or two fics at a time. Though I hate to lose you as a reader, this story will definitely turn you - and possibly many others - away. It’s a risk all authors run no matter what kind of plot they choose to write.

I do want to thank you very much for the review and tell you that I respect your views as an individual. Hopefully in the future I’ll gain you back as a reader with a different story. Take care, sweety.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 01:54 am Title: Beneath Me

Get ready to file that sexual harrassment suit, Buffy. There's no way he's allowed to make those kind of references to a subordinate.

Damn Liam....another man thinking with his dick instead of being fair to hard work.

Interesting, that Spike's younger than Buffy......thinking of a song lyric: "I'm smart, slick, lean and mean. No one can out bullshit me."

Author's Response: Indeed. As much as I loathe the issue of actual cases of RL workplace sexual harrasment, hopefully I won't offend anybody with the way I address it once the chapter comes up. It's just a comedy, not to be taken too seriously even though it has that unfortunate issue in it. As for Liam... just wait and see, that's all I can say without giving anything away, *winks*... it'll become apparent later on. LMAO - love the song lyric reference you have here. Ya know, there isn't a really huge age gap here and I thought why not for once have him be younger than her, so, that's the way I wrote it.... let him learn a thing or two from a mature woman. Glad you enjoyed darling and thanks so very much for the review. Smooches.

Reviewer: Sotia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 01:41 am Title: Beneath Me

Yup, this is me, had an indescribable urge to get off the bed at 4:30 am, honestly don't know why I checked RL, since one eye is still shut, but I'm glad I did! (couldn't bother signing in though :P)

Chuckled throughout this! Poor Buffy, being the victim of sexism, glass ceiling... cuz that's what this is, right? *widens eyes innocently*

I love you honey, and you have created another gem...oh, and 'a booster seat' for Snyder? Priceless!!! *giggles*

*hugs you tight*

PS. I really did nothing! Just proposed a phrase or two simply for upping the word count! If anything I should be thanking you for giving me a sneak preview :P Luv ya!



Author's Response: LMAO - you just amaze me boo, you really do. Yeah, Buffy's getting the unforunate treatment of some ugly RL things out there, but this is a comedy and hopefully everybody can move past that to enjoy ML for the comedy its meant to be. I love you boo and everyone adores your salami comment - thank you soooooooooooooooo much. Hee hee, can't you just see Snyder in a booster seat - maybe a binky and blankie too, LOL.

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