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Reviewer: Pyro63 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 01:34 am Title: Beneath Me

Oh My God. If I were Buffy I don't know if I could stop myself from quitting. To put in that much time and effort to be given a "promotion" to being a bloody assistant? Oh and I totally hope Buffy puts him in his place for his "beneath me" comment. I just love Buffy's sharp tongue and can't wait for her to cut Spike down again... It's just so funny. :) Awesome chappy, sweetie, and eagerly awaiting the next one!

Author's Response: Tell me about it. If this were RL, I'd have committed murder by now. As for Buffy putting him in his place... giggles... you KNOW she will. She has spirit in this for sure and the sharp tongue you're hoping for, *winks*. Loved your review darling and hope you like ch 3 once its up - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: SpikesLilChit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 01:23 am Title: Beneath Me

Three....Two....One....BOOM!!!!! I see the fireworks already! This is rich!!!! I'm totally lovin' it already! Great chappie m'dear, can't wait for the next!!! Hugs~n~Kisses

Author's Response: LMAO, indeed an explosion, but take cover, cuz next chapter is worse... runs and hides as the fuse is lit, heheheheheheh. Thanks for the review darling - hugs and kisses right back at ya.

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 12:40 am Title: Beneath Me

Oh, yea....saw it coming, but it was way better than what I imagined! Great update! Looking forward to the next one.



Author's Response: Oh good. I know some things are predictable, but I'm glad that I at least made it fun for you - thank you so much for the reivew sweets... hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 12:08 am Title: Beneath Me

"He purposefully kept his eyes trained on hers and planted a lingering kiss to the top of her hand, rubbing two fingers to the inside of her palm which was hidden from Snyder’s view."

Okay, I know it's just a simple sentence. But that was so hot. I think I need a change of underwear. ;-)

"Glancing at the manual paper trimmer with its giant cutting blade, she swore if he looked at her one more time like he wanted to play hide the salami, she’d slice it for him so thin it’d fit through a piggy-bank slit!"

OMG! Bwahahahahahahahaha! So. Freaking. FUNNY!

I swear, you are the best at mixing steaminess and humor in a fic. I can't wait for the next update - you rock!



Author's Response: YAY - glad you found it hot - I'm a sucker for this kind of Spike, so God can just strike me dead now and get it over with, LOL. Ooooooh, that salami line, that was my friend Sotia's idea and it was soooooo Buffy I had to use it - glad you laughed at it, hee hee. And of course enjoyed the chapter as a whole. I tried to email you back but it came back with a mailer demon notice so it didn't go thru, damnit. SO please don't think I ignored your email, but it got kicked back twice on me. Thank you so much for the email and the review darling - it really made my day. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 12:03 am Title: Beneath Me

How sad, although it has never personally happened to me. Too often women are passed over in the workplace due to the lack of a penis. Great teaser, let the games begin! I will watch for more. Kelly

Author's Response: I absolutely agree, it is sad and it does happen, ughh. But I'm glad to see you're looking forward to more and liked ch 2. Thank you sweety for the review - kisses.

Reviewer: sour Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2008 - 11:52 pm Title: Beneath Me

great chapter. can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Thanks sweety, I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Smoochies.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2008 - 11:47 pm Title: Beneath Me

Buffy.. almost 30.. Spike 23... play on words.. Beneath me.

Leave it to the Men running the business to give her more responsibility and no more money..

Enjoying...

Author's Response: Giggles, well, why not make him a bit younger - he could stand to learn a thing or two from being around an older woman - and hey, the gap isn't huge. Yup, corporate life and men - sometimes the sterotype is true unfortune as it may be. Thanks for the review darling - huggles.

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2008 - 11:27 pm Title: Beneath Me

Oh god, I was laughing so hard at the "hide the salami" scenario! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Hee hee, that was a suggestion from my friend Sotia - I couldn't pass up using it. THanks for the review darling, glad you liked the chappy. Hugs.

Reviewer: constanza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2008 - 11:26 pm Title: Beneath Me

as always its brilliant i cant wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you sweety - I'm glad you enjoyed it. Kisses.

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2008 - 11:24 pm Title: Beneath Me

I so loved this chapter, darling! Espeically when they came face to face again. I feel slightly bad for Buffy, one can only imagine what those expectations of Spike entail. *weg* Loving the characterizations, the details, the humor but above all I love you, magnificently done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much darling, I love you too. I do feel Bad putting Buffy in this position, but hey..... evil here, LOL. The tension in that office is just palpable, isn't it? Mwahahahhahahhaha!!!

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