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Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 06:01 pm Title: Who's the Boss

And now on to the story...

I can't wait to see how working together with clients successfully impacts Spike & Buffy's relationship. I know back in my advertising days, I could feel quite fond co-workers I loathed, in the afterglow of a meeting where we totally rocked the house.

I think your point about the sexual harassment is well taken; this is a fantasy, and it makes total sense their their wouldn't be real life consequences for Spike's actions. I mean, if I wanted realism, I'd hardly be in the habit of getting hooked on shows about vampires. ;-)

Thank you for the shout out, love. Like I said before, being supportive is the least I can do for all the hours of pleasure your hard work has given me.

Author's Response: Hahahahaha, i can imagine that too - the afterglow and all. It's safe to say that w/ Buffy and Spike, it goes smoother than they expect it to. Cuz honestly - I'm not sure how it goes in RL when two agents go together on a meeting, I've only heard one end of it on a couple of occassions. It didn't sound pleasant, but not great either so I'm going to keep their meetings in the story more of a daily grind type of thing than to delve into it what goes on during one (I'd definitely muck it up) LMAO at your comment about watching vampire shows. Yeah, this is fiction thank GOD!!! S.H. is no joke but it's not getting any 'real' drama or a spotlight out of me in this story... moving along b/c Buffy can handle herself, yup. And you're welcome for the shout out b/c hey... like i said, what you told me really 'clicked' and got the 's' out of my scared issue, thank you darling. And I'm happy to entertain, very happy, its what I love. Thanks again for everything my darling. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 05:55 pm Title: Who's the Boss

I also would like to comment on our anonymous commenter. I think it's quite a stretch to say that stories where Spike is an ass get more positive reviews. HollyDB writes a lot of fics where Spike is quite sensitively portrayed, as does Addie Logan. They don't have Buffy as horrible, but Spike's not either. Herself's Bittersweets series has Buffy as extremely cruel to Spike in the early chapters, but it's not an AU fic. I can't say as that I can recommend you a fic that is AU, has bad Buffy/good Spike, doesn't have a lot of graphic sex, and most importantly (I would hope), *is written well*. Certainly, there are some things in fic that light up all my dials when I see them in the summary, but for me, really wonderful writing can completely overshadow any pet peeves I might have. Because you're looking for a very specific set of elements in a story, your best bet would be to post a challenge over at The BloodshedVerse and see if someone picks up on it. I just don't think the the reviews section of a specific fic is the right place to air your complaints that nobody seems to write the kind of stories you like to read. I'm sorry if you feel that the only person who can define if your comments are a problem is the author, but welcome to the internet - when you post anything in a public forum, it's subject to both positive and negative responses from whoever can read it. Everyone has a right to their opinion, but no one has a right to not have it held up to scrutiny if it's shared publicly.

Author's Response: Wow........ just, WOW. Here I thought I came across as eloquent, but honey, you blew me out of the water. All your points are not only valid but written so well - you sure you're not destined to be a lawyer? Giggles, just kidding, I know you love what you do and that's something I really admire about you is your courage - and that you've also have leant me your strength in your emails. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: sour Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 04:34 pm Title: Who's the Boss

still enjoying it. can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Thank you sweety, I'm thrilled you're still enjoying it. Huggles.

Reviewer: oooooooooooooooooooo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 03:01 pm Title: Who's the Boss

I really don't see anything wrong with my review. If the author has a problem with it. She should tell me. So, far it looks she doesn't. Unless, she hasn't had the chance to read my review yet. I really do think other reviewers need to back off though. The author has no said one thing negative about my review. I know people feel like they must defend their favorite author or friend. Cause heaven forbid someone says something about this other than positive words.

I am not telling her that she shouldn't write so much sex in her story. I simply asked her if she ever planned on making a story that wasn't about sex with Spike and Buffy first. Yes, Spike and Buffy haven't had sex in this story. But Spike is always thinking about sex. So, that is why I asked the question. Cause it still it is about sex in this story. I saw nothing wrong with that. I don't the author saw nothing wrong with that. If she did. She didn't tell me. Which she should tell me if she had a problem.

About the stories I am looking for. I have tried google and looking everywhere. I have yet to find an AU story where Buffy is terribly bad and needs to redeem herself. Really bad as in how some of these type of stories make Spike to be. I have had several authors tell me that there are out there. Again, I asked simply if any of them can give me a list or a couple of stories because I can't find them. Again, I don't see the problem in asking that question.

You guys may have problems with my review. But you are not the author of this story. This isn't your story. I have said nothing bad to the writer of this story.

This story has gotten over 100 reviews for three chapters. While some stories struggle to get 5 reviews per chapter. Stories where Spike is the ass always gets lots of reviews. I guess a lot of women like seeing that. Not to take anything away the author. I know she is great writer. It is something I noticed about thse type of stories.

Author's Response: I'll just leave this review alone since it wasn't directed at me sweety but I'll answer your other one. Hugs.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 09:39 am Title: Who's the Boss

Sparky, perky and a fight to the finish. And beyond.
This is a fun read. Looking forward to your update.

Author's Response: Thank you sweety - glad you're enjoying the sparring matches, there'll be plenty of them before the spuffy luvin begins, *winks*. Smooches to you darling.

Reviewer: Aeryn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 08:45 am Title: Who's the Boss

Whew! I have just spent the last 20 minutes ranting and raving about the review by earlier persons unnamed but am restraining myself from putting it all in here.
DO NOT CHANGE A THING about this fic. I love how you write Spike and Buffy and you always make us love Spike well before the end and they are always in cannon as far as poss. The sex in you fics are great and if for any reason I 'm not in the mood to read it (god forbid) I can just skip past it and read the plot, isn't that an amazing thing and anyone can do it too!!! Keep writing this fic please. Looking forward to more although I think setting the fic in a sales environment, sorry misspelt that, most sadistic corner of the worst hell dimension is something that gives me the heebee jeebees.
I know it doesnt look as if I have restrained myself but I did, its not good to relate to fictional charachters too personally, that way lies too pain and confusion.

Author's Response: Thank you darling. I do have quite a number of chapters already written and a very clear cut written outline for what each chappy involves that I don't intend to stray from. I spent a little over 3 months writing this story and there's really no turning back now, nor would I. And yes, anyone can skip the sex parts if they choose to, I agree. I have a personal friend that reads my stories but she always skips that part b/c she just doesn't care for reading sex in general. The Sales arena is indeed a very tough area for anyone to work in, but it won't be about Sales, that's just my setting, my backdrop for the story - so no worries about that, *winks*. I think you voiced your opinion well. Everyone is entitled to their own and you did make some very valid points. The one in particular I liked is that readers shouldn’t become too involved with the characters, it’s a messy road that once self imposed can really bring a reader down and lead them away from what’s going on in the story, taking all the fun out of it in the process. Thank you for the review hon, and no worries, this old girl has a tough second skin and promises you’ll get the story as it was originally written. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 05:54 am Title: Who's the Boss

I couldn't help myself, I had to say a couple of things, since it seems that someone around here thinks reviews are the place where people are supposed to rant about any- and every-thing that is wrong with society!

One of the reviewers - who for some reason chose to leave neither a name nor an e-mail (I wonder why, s/he seemed so opinionated, one would think s/he'd want to be given the opportunity to further discuss her thoughts!) - has freaked me out... So I'm gonna rant about it!

First off, authors do not write on request... unless they pick up a challenge or are asked nicely and agree to do so. This is your
story, you have the right to do with it whatever you think is best.

Secondly, your previous record with SR shows that if nothing else you can be trusted to wrap things up beautifully, even when the rest of us common folk do not see a way for that to be done.

Third, your place here is not to suggest stories. You are not google, for crying out loud! And to tell you the truth, I've had enough of Buffy being a bitch in Season 6 to not want much more of it (but again I, or any of your readers, can choose to continue with this story or give up on it, but cannot tell you how to write it!!!

Fourth, the person in question says they don't see why you put so much sex in your stories, and I just have to ask why, oh why, they chose to read an NC-17 story that clearly indicates the warning of 'sexual situations'??? Furthermore, they seem to be familiar with your work in the past, so are the masochists? If they do not like this sort of thing, why click on another of your stories???

Finally, I have to underline the hilarity of complaining about abundance of sex in a story where a) we haven't read any sex yet (except in Spike's mind... or are we to believe that men do not think about sex and it is your twisted mind that wants us to think so?) and b) says in the summary 'tons of UST' which means no sex for some time!

~~~Here endeth the rant!

I love you honey, you're the best and I'm sorry, but I cannot tolerate anyone saying otherwise and not even leaving their contact details for you to reply.

Oh! And why did s/he keep reading if s/he didn't like the bloody thing??? (OK, maybe rant wasn't over... :P )

*hugs you tight*



Author's Response: LMFAO..... boy, I can count on you to have my back if I ever went into a real war with bullets, huh? Mother bear to the rescue and I love you for it boo. You're one of the best friends I could ever hope to have. I just take it all in stride, I know what I write doesn't appeal to everyone, but I can entertain the few that do enjoy my style and plot. No one has to read it if they don't want to and you made a good point that there can be requests and even challenges posed over at LJ - that's a great way to go about getting what someone really wants. Thanks for everything my darling. I'll chat with you later today. Kisses.

Reviewer: SpikesLilChit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 05:38 am Title: Who's the Boss

Ohhhhh...I just love to hate this Spike. Every button Buffy has, he knows how to push it! I love it!!!! You've got me hooked on yet another story! I cant wait for the next chappie! Can't wait to see how Buffy gets back at him!!! Once again, a job well done!!!! Hugs~n~Kisses!!

Author's Response: He's fun to hate in this one isn't he? Especially b/c Buffy won't take it. I just adore writing their personalities this way - it makes for some awesome fireworks and banter galore. Things may get a bit worse for Buffy yet, but you can bet she'll keep handing his ass back to him the entire way. THanks for the review darling. Huggles.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 05:24 am Title: Who's the Boss

loved it sooooo much. great job on the innuendos. so funny. spike's an ass but a cute one and buffy's just great, not taking shit from him they both know that he'd be stupid to try anything too over the top with her. it's all in good fun....for now. then the tension between them will get so heavy, it'll all be too much for them both....and then comes the "angry sex" (your words not mine. lol) more soon. great job.

Author's Response: Squeee, glad you liked the dialogue. And no, Spike really wouldn't dream of using his authority over her innapropriatly - he wants her to want him of her own volition - he just can't resist goading. Ah yes, angry sex can be terribly gratifying as twisted as it might sound - but he's got his work cut out for him to be sure. Thank you for the review darling - more to come soon. Kisses.

Reviewer: Pyro63 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 04:08 am Title: Who's the Boss

Awesome. I so can't wait to see what Buffy will do to Spike and his 'plans.' While I of course don't condone sexual harrassment in the work place, this is of course to delicious to pass up. I can already see that this fic will be excellent, the sparks are practically fireworks by now. Great chapter hun!!

Author's Response: Hi sweety, *waves*, you can bet Buffy won't be too pleased about Spike's plan, but she'll get hers back even if it takes a little time - and of course the banter won't stop a single bit. Yeah, I clearly don't condone S.H. in the workplace, have even had to put up with it on more than one occassion myself, but I'm glossing over it in part b/c this is a comedy and Buffy can handle it. Get ready for more fireworks, *winks*, glad you liked the chappy. THanks for the review sweets - hugs.

Reviewer: Edgehead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 03:49 am Title: Who's the Boss

That's a great story...like always...:)

Author's Response: LOL, thank you my dear and it was soooooo much fun chatting with you this morning. Hugs you tight my friend.

Reviewer: V Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 03:06 am Title: Who's the Boss

Great story so far. Love the UST, the repartee - just about everything so far. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you darling, I'm very pleased you're liking it and to keep you entertained. More fun to follow soon. Smoochies to you.

Reviewer: elle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 02:51 am Title: Who's the Boss

Uh oh what exactly do you have up your sleeve for our duo. Is it wrong I enjoy spike's pain/frustration? Does that make me some kind massachoist? (However it is spelled) xD anyways happy super tuesday! Woohoo voting lol anyways write more soon because I'm very excited n curious on what you'll write next

Author's Response: Giggles, it's fun to watch Spike squirm, particularly given his character here and squirm he will. Just wait and see what Spike has up HIS sleeve for Buffy - inserts evil laugh - but of course there is cosmic karma, justice and all that rot to be had as well. Thanks for the awesome review sweets - huggles.

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 02:13 am Title: Who's the Boss

Loved it, this story is lots of fun.

Author's Response: GLad to hear you're enjoying it and thanks so very much for the review. Smooches.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 01:07 am Title: Who's the Boss

I'm not giving up on this story, but I'm REALLY uncomfortable with the sexual harassment. It's not OK, not even for fun. I hope Spike smartens up soon and that Buffy doesn't sleep with him until he does.

Author's Response: Please be mindful to read my warning at the beginning of my author's note because it would have saved you from being uncomfortable. I'm not writing sexual harassment for fun or find it fun to write, it’s for the fic and I clearly stated I don’t condone it. Please bear this in mind if you continue the story because you have a choice not to read and I’m being upfront when I say Spike gets worse before he gets better even though Buffy handles herself. He does smarten up eventually and no, of course Buffy doesn’t sleep with him while he’s acting like that. This is simply the story’s progression, the starting point and it has to unfold in a timely manner. I’m glad you’re sticking with it and of course appreciate and thank you for the review. Just keep in mind the sexual harassment issues have been handled in that Buffy told him up front she wouldn’t hold her tongue. I’m not getting into the RL issue of it at all as this is a comedy, not a drama.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 11:20 pm Title: Who's the Boss

I'm sure you'll find a banner artist soon. There sure are plenty of pics out there already of the two of them in the right attire. (Gah, that man in a suit!)

I have faith in your Buffy's strength, since she gave Spike such a hard time in IAN, too. :) At least he realizes she's not just a pretty skirt behind a desk. Boy still needs to grow up, though. ;)

Author's Response: Yup, I did, thank you. I got very fortunate very quickly. You can count on Bufy being just as tough here as in IAN. She's no coward despite the odds stacked against her, *winks*. I'm so thrilled you're enjoying the story darling. SUch a lovely review, thank you. Kisses.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 11:19 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Spike actually recognizing Buffy's business acumen has me softening toward him even as his continued aggression and innuendo has Buffy bristling. Buffy is going to fight tooth and nail against Spike's dream that they are going to make a great team. It's already delightful.

Author's Response: Yup, he sees her worth despite being a 'man' and noticing her other attributes as well. Give him a bit of time and he'll grow on ya - but fireworks first, giggles. Buffy can hold her own, no doubt about it. I'm so pleased you like it so far sweety - I can't thank you enough for the review. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 11:11 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Glad Buffy isn't bowing down to Spike over all of his demands. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Nope, she definitely won't be doing that, lol. Glad you liked the chapter and thanks for the review sweets. Smooches to you.

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 10:33 pm Title: Who's the Boss

great update, hope to see more soon.

Author's Response: Thank sweety, and thanks for the email too - hugs.

Reviewer: ~^^~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 08:44 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Boy but Spike is an arrogant prick isn't he? He's certainly met his match in 'Just Plain Buffy' tho. Poor girl, good thing she can certainly hold her own. Though I have to agree with him that Angry Hte Sex is pretty hot... lol
Great update, you left me amused and pining for the next one.

Author's Response: Oh yes, he's as bad as they come, welllll, not quite - you'll see what I mean in a few more chapters, *winks*. But yes indeed Buffy roasts his goose good thru it all. Mmm, mmm, mmmmmmmm, hot angry sex - i'm a sucker for it, guilty as charged, lol. Glad you like the chappy darling and thanks so very much for the review. Hugs.

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Date: 02/05/2008 - 08:40 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Seems as if Spike loves to upset (prick) Buffy a bit or he really doesn't know how she was taking that. Well he knows now ;-)
So there is more to Spike getting the job as only getting back to Buffy. *wonders*
Mmmm Spike is already impressed.
Indeed, banter and fireworks :)
I wonder whom Spike is calling now.
Still with you :) And looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Hi sweety, thanks for getting in touch with Edgehead for me, we chatted this morning and she's a wonderful person, very witty and smart. Yup, SPike does appreciate Buffy for more than the obvious, and that will go a long way with him during the story. As for the phone cal, *giggles*, you thought you saw fireworks before - heee hee heee, be prepared, that's alllllll I can say. Thanks for the review my friend. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: oooooooooooooooooo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 08:24 pm Title: Who's the Boss

First of all, I like to thank you for taking the time to reply back to me.

For me, I personally am tired of reading Spike the ass and Buffy the "saint". Spike learning the errors of his ways. Buffy the sweet one who he changes for. Please Buffy and come save Spike and make him a better person. He would have never be a good person without saint Buffy.

I wouldn't be as tired of these stories if authors took the time to write it the other way around. Where Buffy is written so bad that readers don't like her. Not that I want to see bad Buffy and innocent Spike. But I would love to read an AU story where Buffy has to redeem herself.

You say that there are some AU stories out there like that and other authors have told me the same thing. But I have trouble finding them. So, if you could please list me some of the stories out there like that. I would be most grateful. So, far all of the people I asked have never listed them. I wonder if it is because they don't want to or because there are no stories like this. I don't want stories where Buffy is a little bad. I want her terribly bad like some of the stories have Spike.

You also say that writing Buffy a man-eater is like Faith. I have that seen excuse so many times. But this is an AU and people have no trouble writing Buffy the complete opposite from her character on the show. She would not be like Faith. She would be like a woman who treats men like things and uses them for what they can give them. talking about gold diggers and such. Also, why write Spike a womanizer if you want to keep characters in canon? Spike is by far a womanizer. If anything he is the opposite. The only woman he uses was Harmony. That is Harmony we are talking about. But Dru and Buffy used him so much. So, why write Spike as the womanizer. I personally think because most authors are women. It is better writing the man as the ass and the woman the sweet one who he realizes that he is beneath her and must change into a man she can loved.

Sorry, to hear that your husband is away. That must be terrible. I like stories that have nice sex scenes. I am just not too crazy about stories that are just about sex. Not that your stories don't have plot. But I love your writing and it would be nice to see a story that isn't about sex with them at first. Part of loving Spuffy, Is that there was a lot of sexual tension between them. But I always believed it was more than that. So, when I read stories I like seeing the soft side of Spuffy. The loving side which I find more appealing. Like when Spike says to Buffy that holding her was the best night of his life. Not the sex but being that close to her was. That is why reading Spike as the womanizer is hard to do. Cause when I think of his character from the show. he so is not a womanizer. He is love's bitch. A man who does anything for love. Not a man who uses woman. If anything it is Buffy the one who uses the men who love her. Riley and Spike.

So, if you could please direct me to those AU stories that have Buffy terrible. I would be most thankful.

I thought this story was going to be a little angst. Now, I read that you are planning to write Spike a major ass. Yeah, going to pass on this. Have had enough of these stories. I mean I might tried reading this. I might be able to stomach another one of these stories.


Author's Response: No problem sweety, I always answer reviews. It sounds like you’re having a hard time finding a fic that suits your particular predilections. It’s not that authors don’t take the time to write things the other way around, believe me. We, I, take a lot of time to write, hours in fact, but it’s to write things the way we see it rather than what readers want. There are so many readers here and on other spuffy sites, that it would be impossible to please everyone and a fool’s job to try and take that on. I write what’s in my head and it doesn’t come easy or fast by any means. When I post, I know what I create isn’t going to tickle everyone’s fancy and I’m okay with that. Call me dull, but I prefer the classic stereotype themes and it probably is because I’m a woman, lol.

As for other stories out there that may, may, contain what you’re looking for, the only 2 I can think of – off the top of my head - is Wish I was Your Someone by beasleysmom and Silently Broken by Suzee. You can also try using the chat board on the home page here at TSR and ask around and/or search LJ communities centered around spuffy as there are stories that authors only post there and no where else. If you can’t find anything among those sources, my only suggestion would be for you to possibly consider writing one yourself, the process can be grueling but fun as well.

To me, meaning just me personally, a man-eating Buffy is a Faith type personality, it’s not an excuse sweety, that’s just how I see it, just me. I don’t ever intend to write a really bad Buffy that needs redemption – perhaps one who makes mistakes and needs to earn forgiveness as in the case of TE but that’s as far as I’ll take it.

Also, please go back and re-read my previous response from ch 2. I never said I want to keep the characters in canon or even as close to canon as possible, I said I try to keep a certain level of canon in their personalities. As with any AU, they’re going to show differences in action and responses to situations that are fictional which subsequently requires an author to ‘make it up’. True, most authors here are women, but there are some male ones as well. You can try out stories from lostboy, TestaALT and drkdevin. Those I know for sure are men.

Beyond that, I still believe this isn’t the story for you and would be more than likely a waste of your time. You should consider taking up writing and perhaps simply write what it is you want to see, your own vision and what speaks to your heart the most. Though it is a serious investment of your personal time, it’s also a very a rewarding experience you wouldn’t regret. Take care sweety and good luck on your fic hunting.

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Date: 02/05/2008 - 08:13 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Argh. You're evil! Can't wait to see what Spike has in plan (what's the phonecall all about!?) and feel a little bit sorry for the fellow - I sure as hell wouldn't say no to a lunch date with Spike. Update soon!

Author's Response: LOL, yeah, he's got a plan for her alright, just wait and see what kind of fireworks go off after he's executed it, hee hee hee. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review. Kisses.

Reviewer: jennybear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 08:02 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Woah, what a jerk Spike's being. He is showing that he acknowledges how competent and smart Buffy is, but he still gets his kicks ordering her all over the place. He must know how much it sucks for her that she should have gotten the job. Buffy’s a bigger chic than me, because I’m not sure I could handle a situation like that too well. I know she’s got finances to think about, but to have to swallow her pride that much must be truly difficult. The sparks are exploding all over the place though, and that’s so intriguing. I am guessing that Spike’s going to move her into his office somehow, and it should be interesting to see how Buffy handles that. I can’t wait for the tables to get turned on him though. He’s used to having whatever woman strikes his fancy and so right now Buffy’s just a conquest. But, I hope soon Buffy gets some of her own back here. Your storytelling is amazing as always. I am thoroughly enjoying it and I can’t wait to see how Buffy turns this around.

Author's Response: Indeed he's a right ass - but he'll keep getting it handed back to him, no worries on that end. Buffy is a tough gal here. A little later on, he'll see things from her pov and that's when he begins to soften a bit, I promise. And yes, the sparks are going to fly once his plan goes into action, *winks* - hope you enjoy that part when I get to it. I really enjoyed your review hon, it was awesome, thank you. Hugs.

Reviewer: nat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 07:18 pm Title: Who's the Boss

I'm loving this fic! Looking forward to the next chapter.


Author's Response: Thanks sweety, I'm pleased you're enjying it. There's more fun ahead so stay tuned. Hugs and kisses.

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