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Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2008 - 02:19 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Hmm, I was wondering why Spike left early the day before. Still wondering. Evil he is.

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Date: 04/29/2008 - 11:38 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

I am really liking this story. Just found it and stil reading but after this chapter I had to leave a review to say how much its had me laughing out loud. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Oh wonderful - I'm so glad to have given you a few good chuckles - I do enjoy writing comedy. THank you sweety, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story and thanks for the fab review - jisses.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 - 07:19 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

OH is she starting to warm up to him.

Author's Response: Just a weeeeeeeeeeee bit, giggles. Thanks for the rewview sweets - hugs.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 04:25 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

I've been behind on this story. shame on me. I should be punished....by spike....lol.that would be fun. lol. at first I feel sorry for spike and then i remember that he's only trying to get into buffy's pants at the moment and then he's an ass again. hopefully, not for long. great job. kisses for you and the muse.

Author's Response: No worries hon - I'm just glad you read and enjoy it. LOL - yes, SPike is quite the ass and his transformation will be slow - but of course that's the fun part of writing it all!!!! Thanks for the great review darling. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Flibble Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2008 - 11:28 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Ahhh, I had such high hopes when they got stuck in that elevator. hehe. Great chapter. Really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Hahahha, but that would have been too easy. Glad you enjoyed it sweets - thanks again for the reviews. Huggles.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2008 - 05:28 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Love their tension. And I wonder if he's figured out he cares for her despite her award winning attitude. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Giggles, yeah, he's getting in a little deeper, but he's as stubborn as Buffy is too. It'll take them both awhile to figure it out, but it's spuffy in the end, *winks*. Thanks for the review darling.

Reviewer: Pyro63 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2008 - 02:56 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

OMG, I can't believe I missed this update! I totally blame my husband. Anyway... omg, I would be SO pissed if I were Buffy. He's taking his sexual frustrations out on her, and touching her, even if he's trying to keep her safe from Parker, (gag) is rude. I kinda wished that Buffy would have puched him in the face, cuz he totally deserved more than that slap. I can't wait to see what she does to him about piling all that work on her. Awesome update, I can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: LOL - glad you're all riled up over Spike's actions - he's quite the ass, huh? But he'll get his in next chapter, you'll see, *winks*. THanks for the review sweets - huggles.

Reviewer: KatieGrrl1016 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2008 - 06:24 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Wow... I've been following this story since it started, and I just have to say it is fantastic. Spike is such an asshole, but Ithe UST is just too good to ignore. Your characterizations of both Buffy and Spike are excellent!! I just can't help but cheer for both of them... well, maybe I cheer a little bit more for Buffy standing up to him. This a great story idea, and I can't wait to see where it goes! More, more, more please!

~Katie

Author's Response: LOL - and that's what I'm aiming for, the UST, built upon a young cocky, unthinking SPike with selfish motives. He'll grow up though - trust me. As for next chapter, Buffy get's some of her own back - at least for a bit, *winks*. THanks for the review sweets - hugs.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2008 - 04:15 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

okay, i thought i had commented on this but guess not. i was probably half buzzed when i read it. anyway sooooo lovin' this story! Spike is such an ass and Buffy just shoots his shit right back at him! it is nice that he's trying to win her over, even if it is sneaky and underhanded. i can see that Spike is getting restless and that's when i know he'll either cool it WAY down or go for something drastic. i'm going towards drastic though. it's just his way! keep this one going gurl! can't wait for an update!! and she really needs to thank him for that expensive ass pen!! good Lord! and btw, she's a STUPID BINT for not jumping in w/ the taking off of clothes! i would've got out my camera!!! nice imagery! UPDATE PLEASE!!!

Author's Response: Hehehehhe, gotta love an evil Spike. Going towards drastic???? Good guess, and yes, for quite some time he does before he cools down - bravo on the prediction darling. LOL - glad you liked my undressing of SPike with much Buffy squirmage. Thanks for the review sweets - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2008 - 04:30 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Oh, that was just a freakin' fantastic chapter! Geesh, Spike is one hell of an infuriating man, huh? Not that his attitude would deter me for one single second, but then again...he's gorgeous. Gah!

Love, Love, Love the tension between our fav duo. Totally leading up to what I imagine will be one hell of a smut filled scene! Looking forward to the next one!

~Serenity

Author's Response: YAY - I'm so pleased you enjoyed it - even if Spike was a complete ass, lol. Thanks for reviewing darling. Kisses.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2008 - 03:20 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

I was sure one of them would kill the other. Oh well maybe next chapter! *grins* Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Oh yes, they came close to each other's throats for sure, lol. As for next chapter, get ready for the slicing and dicing, *winks*. Thanks for the great review, boo - huggles.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 - 07:25 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Spike staking his claim before every male that deigns to speak with Buffy is hilarious. I loved his fake solicitousness, and buttoning up her coat was priceless. I was laughing right up until he grabbed her in the limo. He's such a ballsy jerk, but Buffy giving in, even a little bit, has just fueled his flames. This made me laugh out loud: “That kiss was pointless.” She rapped her knuckles against the window. “This is tinted glass, you moron.” A moron that kisses like a dream, you mean.

The little skirmish in the elevator had me laughing at their childishness. Spike's pulling her pigtails and running away. The petulant blow to her weekend was cruel. This made me laugh out loud: "He felt the need to leave the hostile environment she’d created and go home to kick off the beginning of a long, relaxing evening." Hostile environment? I bet that phrase is going to take on a whole new meaning on Monday.

Thanks for another tight chapter of this hilarious story.

Author's Response: Hee hee, he's dasterdly, huh? And Buffy kissing him back really did only encourage his evil behavior. But these are lips of Spike we're talking here, giggles. As for her weekend, she'll have it, but not in the way she expects, *winks*. Glad you liked the childish behavior in the elevator - I couldn't resist trapping them and undressing SPike - yum. Thanks for the review darling - smooches to you.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 - 02:01 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

LOL, god, Buffy is doing EXACTLY what I'd be doing in that situation...stubborn, ignoring him, being 'strictly professional!" LOVE IT!

Ooo and that elevator, I was sure Spike was gonna try something, but mmmmm posessive Spike is very, very nummy!

And will she get her work done in time for him and still have time to play on the weekend? Hmmmm

Author's Response: Giggles - she's certainly doing her damndest. Hee hee, I just wanted to get Spike's clothes off - make Buffy drool and worry a bit, evil here. As for her work and the weekend - I really think you're going to enjoy this next chapter - that's all I can say, sweets. That and thanks for the review and the awesome chat we had the other day. Kisses.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 - 10:14 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Loved both the Parker bit, where Spike got all posessive and maybe started to feel more towards his assistant than just the conquest part. Also liked the UST in the car and in the elevator. Looking forward to the 24/7 thing. Yay sparks!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked the Parker scene - nothing like a little competition to bring out growly, possessive SPike who acts before he thinks, lol. More sparkage to come in next chapter - a LOT more, *winks*. Thanks so much for the review hon - hugs.

Reviewer: OKDeanna Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 - 07:07 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Okay, so I'm not sure which one I'm more in love with at this point. That elevator scene with a shirtless Spike or that kiss! Gah! Are you trying to kill me? I mean, seriously, first you and Maria and Sotia conspiring to send me the naught pictures on YM and then you post THIS and put those images on a whole different playing field!

And you three call me evil for not updating! Hmph!

So, when can I expect more of this gem of yours? I did tell you I was addicted to it, right? Because yeah, I totallly am. I want more of your Spike, too!

Deanna

Author's Response: Hahahahhaha, those pics did the trick, huh? And I couldn't help stripping SPike down here a bit for a drooling Buffy in denial. The kiss - couldn't help that either, caveman Spike at play here. Next update wil be probably this monday - if things go smoothly. Now you get back to work and write yourself so I can read more of your stuff sweety - drools with anticiaption, lol. Thanks for the review boo - smoochies.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2008 - 09:07 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Seems as if Buffy's choice of clothes was the right one to distract Spike ;-)
Loved Spike becoming possessive when Parker looked too much at Buffy.
The others (like the driver) noticed too how jealous Spike became *grins*
Playing with the elevator buttons? Hilarious when they got stuck.
And I bet that Buffy is including Spike into the any man in the circle of this company's business dealings

And already checked the story out :)

Author's Response: Indeed it was, but it backfired a bit on her as well after the encounter with Parker, hee hee hee. Of course I couldn't resist a spot of childish behavior in the elevator and the subsequent squirming Buffy went through after seeing Spike half naked - glad you enjoyed that bit. Thanks for the great review my friend - and glad you enjoyed Sandara's story too. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2008 - 06:46 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Evil of him to give her those reports over the weekend... I guess he just wants revenge ;) I wonder what she'll do about it ;) By the way, it was funny when they got stuck in the elevator... Enjoyed! :) More soon I hope. / Ariadne

Author's Response: He's thickheaded here, thinking it's all her fault - of course - little spoiled rich boy that he is. But he'll get what's coming to him, you can count on that - next chapter, *winks*. Thanks for the review sweets - kisses.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2008 - 12:52 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

That was just brilliant. I am still laughing. Could Spike be any more possessive? I cannot wait for more.

Author's Response: Giggles, glad to have made you chuckle - that's the whole point of the story that underlines the UST. ANd yeah, Spike can definitely get more possessive, *winks*. THanks for the review and I do hope you enjoy the surprise held in next chapter. Hugs.

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2008 - 12:34 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

beautifully played as always :D can't wait til next installment in a week :)

Author's Response: Thanks sweetheart - glad you enjoyed the banter and sparks. More of the same to follow soon. Hugs.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2008 - 09:17 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

That was definitely one interesting business meeting... lol! Loved the little show Spike put on for Parker, he totally deserved the slap he got for the kissage though. ;) And the elevator ride that followed was also quite an experience. :D Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: Oh yeah, he deserved a punch actually, but Buffy went easy on him considering what she could have done - giggles. Glad you enjoyed the elevtor ride - it was fun to write Buffy squirming and undressing Spike is always of the good. Thanks for reviewing darling - smoochies to you.

Reviewer: SpikesGoddess Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2008 - 08:56 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

i love this line!

"Too bad there wasn’t enough blood in his body to run both brains simultaneously"

Jesus woman, are you trying to kill me? and so early in the day too!

Ok u officially killed me, i love possesive Spike! mmmmmmmmm!

Anyway! i LOVE the chapter! can't wait for the next one! lol!

Author's Response: HAHAHHAHAHAH - I loved using that line - I first heard it from Robin Williams during one of his earlier stand up shows - though he worried it differently. Glad you like my possessive Spike - he's my fav kind to write. Thanks for the review sweets - huggles.

Reviewer: Blood Faerie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2008 - 03:51 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Whyyyy doesn't she just knee him in the groin and get it over with??

Author's Response: LMFAO - that would be toooooo easy - I like the hard road, giggles. Thanks for the review my friend - hugs.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2008 - 03:48 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

All I can think to say is, tee,hee, hahahaha ,snicker, snicker snicker . I can't help it I think their so funny even when you don't mean them to be,they way they treat each other is just to much . You know i'm loving this ,right, i have told u ! Your evil Tina,my type of person. Update soon this is too good.

Author's Response: HAHHAHHAHA, yup - I;'ve been accused of being evil before, and I concede, guilty as charged. But I'm ever so glad to keep you chuckling - that's the whole point underlying the UST of the story. Thanks for the awesome review darling - hugs you tight.

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Date: 02/19/2008 - 12:31 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Gah! Stupid thing ate my review.

Poor Buffy...but that's how the sales world goes, anyway. You can sell to anyone any day of the week between 8am and 9pm. And Spike doesn't quit!! At least she got to leave a big red welt on his face.

Of course, Spike just sees her as a prize to be won, so it doesn't occur to him that she knows everyone in the biz better than he does, or that she's been doing this a lot longer, and on her own. She's had to be twice as smart, twice as aggressive, and twice as proactive just because she's a woman i a notoriously male business. She could eat Parker Abrams for lunch.

Author's Response: Yeah, sales is tough, no doubt about it. And the handprint he definitely deserved, even if she started to cave. And Spike has no frickin clue as to Buffy and her true smarts - he just doesn't 'see' things the way another adult would. Never fear though - he will in time. Thanks for the review swets - hugs.

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 11:50 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Lovin' it! You've done it again, as only you can do it!
But then, I can't think of any of your fic I don't adore.
You write a wonderful Spike. His younger age in this is interesting, and I look forward to to see how you'll pique out interests with that.
Why, he'd barely be out of college, with scarcely any time for practical experience....c'mon, fess up---have you been secretly watching "Secret of My Success" on a DVD loop again??? (I know I love it...and somehow this reminds me of it a bit, tho' I understand JM is a leetle taller than MJF. But just a little.)
I love the way you write his bulldog tenacity---no, perhaps that's not even right---maybe that of a more hyper Jack Russell terrier. Grabs on, and hangs ON.
And the lovely thing is, his obsession & perserverance to the chase have already crossed over, past attraction, to possessiveness. Which implies that he wants her for longer...longer than just the win, for further than the finish line. He just doesn't know, it hasn't caught up to his brain & conscious mind yet, that he has already fallen HARD for Buffy. Say goodbye bachelorhood, goodbye former life.
And she's definitely attracted too...she likes the dominant man, but not necessarily likes a dominating personality. She doesn't want to give into either. She doesn't want to eat that crow. (MY advice is LOTS of ketchup!)
So he's also a spoiled rich boy. But the good thing is, he realizes it as a possible shortcoming. But come on! $4200 for a PEN????? I know life in the city is expensive but wow!
You've given us yet another thing to avidly look forward to, waiting with ever bated breath for the latest update from you!
My only complaint so far is, you didn't leave them in that elevator near long enough!!!
Thanks!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~

Author's Response: WOW, making me blush here, pet, giggles and grins. As for Spike's age - add in his genius status and I suppose the difference in British education and it's suffice to say he excelled above the norm. It becomes apparent later. He definitely wants Buffy, in the worst of ways, and as time goes on, even he doesn't see how much that is and for the why and how long, *winks*. He just needs a bit more growing up - which will happen, I promise. Buffy is admittedly attracted and perhaps a bit scared b/c she recognizes his personality is similiar to her own - a combo that makes their lives difficult yet interesting throughouth the story. LMAO on your comment for not leaving them in the elevator long enough - but I felt Buffy was tortured enough, both by Spike and her own thoughts, giggles. Thanks for the totally awesome review darling - hugs you tight.

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