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Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2008 - 02:50 am Title: The English Patient

spike is growing up. Though I'm surprised Buffy doesn't know what fellatio and cunnilinguis is. But it might be because she is drunk.

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Date: 03/12/2008 - 09:48 am Title: The English Patient

Awww. What a great chapter. Sorry I'm so behind. I'll try to catch up over the next few days.

Author's Response: No worries hon - I just hope you truly enjoy the fun and laughs they have in store - luv ya babe and thanks for the review. Huggles.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 11:54 pm Title: The English Patient

i really liked it but i would've tried to feel him up...or her....just some feeling up!!! she has more damn restraint that i ever would have!!!

Author's Response: Giggles, and she's control freak to an extent with her rigid rules about co-workers and all, hee hee. Thanks for the great review sweety. Kisses.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 01:32 pm Title: The English Patient

So like a man to totally draw out the whole sickness thing (I know my hubby totally does this - and its really annoying sometimes). Loved her overhearing his private moment. Reread the hottub scene many times - its just so funny (specially the 'italian' misunderstanding and the part where she calls him a kid ; ) The wake up scene was classic, since I thought it revealed her ambivalence towards him.

Author's Response: Isn't it - almost every man I know does - my hubby included. YAY - glad you liked Buffy's drunken rant in the hot tub - loose lips sinks ships but she also got him good with her 'kid' statement too, giggles. Plus misunderstandings are always fun between these two. Glad you enjoyed the chappy and the wake up scene too - thanks for the review sweety - hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2008 - 09:25 pm Title: The English Patient

Buffy sure doesn't trust Spike much, does she. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Hahahhaah, nope, she sure doesn't,m but with good reason. GLad you enjoyed the update sweety - thanks o much for the review - smooches.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2008 - 07:04 pm Title: The English Patient

Spike's baser desire just to seduce and abandon Buffy are evolving naturally. There were still flashes of his crasser self in the sexual talk and leering, but Buffy's reacting to his softer side. Here's hoping he realizes it and lightens up on the inappropriate innuendo and grab and kiss behavior.

I love that he's a virgin to a real relationship, and his response to just sleeping with Buffy was delightful. Buffy, too, is disconcerted to find herself warming to Spike. Her confusion at the pleasantness of sleeping with him gave me a grin. They're both doomed!

I laughed out loud at Buffy's response to “So tell me, Buffy. Are you into fellatio?” I'm surprised Spike didn't spit out a mouthful of wine at her "I could eat."

Thanks for another delightful chapter. I'm sure the tension will ramp up once they're at the office, but this was a nice break in the bickering.

Author's Response: Yup, Buffy is definitely reacting to her motherly instincts, well, except when she was drunk, giggles.
And oh yes, their reactions to sleeping together were quite unecpected for both of them - frekaing them out in their own way, lol. And of course drunken Buffy is always fun to write with the misinterpretations, LOL. Glad you enjoyed the break fromth ebater and of course Mondy will bring back some of that, *winks*. Thanks for the swesome review darling - higgles.

Reviewer: Katie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 - 09:52 pm Title: The English Patient

SQUEEEEEE! This just keeps getting better and better! *Sing-songy* He's falling in love with her, he's falling in love with her!

Spike can be such a pervert sometimes, but we love him anyways!

I love where this is going, and I can't wait for the next chapter! An overnight business trip AND Parker... Looks like romance and major plot bunnies.

~KatieGrrl1016

Author's Response: Hhahaahaahh, but how long will it take him to relize it, that's the question. Yup, I do love me a bad boy perv Spike, I can't help it, I'm sick, giggles. THe overnight trip will be hmmm, interesting to say the least, *winks*. GLad you enjoyed the update darling - thanks so much for the review. SMooches.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 - 08:54 pm Title: The English Patient

I loved it

Author's Response: Yay, glad you hon, thanks for the reivew. Kisses.

Reviewer: Sarah Aless Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 - 02:31 pm Title: The English Patient

LOVING this story hun - I love these two snipey but her looking after him was really sweet and always gotta LOVE drunk Buffy - makes me giggle so much - your stories tear me in two cos I LOVE all the banter and back and forth so much I almst don't want them to get together if it means an end to that stuff but at the same time feel like I'll burst if they don't bloody shag each other soon!!
Oh I'll just be quiet and say thank you and please torture me more as soon as possible!!
Sarah
x

Author's Response: Giggles, drunk Buffy is always so much fun to write - with her big mouth just shooting off like that. Glad you enjoy the banter - that kind of S/B relationship is my fav to write, each of them trying to take the other down a notch or two while secretly, well in Buffy's case anyway, wanting each other. As for them shagging - you can bet when it happens it'll be quite intense, but they've a long while to go before they get there. *winks* - it's all part of the game. Thanks for the awesome review darling - smooches.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 - 03:27 am Title: The English Patient

So many awesome parts to this chapter, it's impossible to name them all! The Vicks chest massage, the fellatio/cunnilingus conversation, Buffy overhearing Spike's bout of self-love, Spike being a big baby and Buffy enjoying nursing him back to health...OMG, it's all so sexy and funny and BRILLIANT!

Author's Response: YAY, glad you enjoyed all aspects to the chapter - I had to have some fun other than the bickering, a little break if you will, hee hee. But of course things will go back to normal - for some more fun bantering - you know it has to happen, *winks*. GLad you really enjoyed their weekend hon - thanks for the awesome review. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 - 02:57 am Title: The English Patient

ROFLMAO 'wee willy winkie' (ahahahahhahaha). Shouldn't that be "big billy bulging?" God, I need help! That's awesome that you had their whole weekend in this chapter...satisfied my curiosity... A TAD. What is wrong with you woman? I need vicarious smoochies, although the longing glances was soooo worth it. And awwww Spike is getting those "I like her for more than sex" butterflies. And oooo does Spike suspect that little secret about Buffy? heheheh dum dum dummmmm! Thanks hun for the shout out, you seriously rock my sista!

Author's Response: LMFAO - you are tooooooo funny. Vicarious smoochies huh? Hmmmmmmm, may take a bit, but we'll see - I know, I'm musch with the cryptic here, I can't help it. Nope, SPike suspects nothing - *winks*, and won't until it's spelled out for him, hee hee - evil laugh here. You deserve the shout out my sister - you're awesome - luv ya, and thanks for the review - smooches.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 - 02:22 am Title: The English Patient

A business trip? Oh, she's gonna *love* that!

That weekend was all so classic, but you still make it so enjoyable. They're both softening....

Author's Response: HEHEHEHEHEH, indeed. GLad the weekend, though classic, was enjoyable for you - thanks for the great review hon, huggles.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 - 02:18 am Title: The English Patient

Loved this chapter. Loved how they were getting along so well...until Buffy's guilty conscience kicked in. Yep, I think that's the reason why she got a little bent out of shape. She wants it just as much as him. Can't blame her though. Looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Hahahhahah, yeah, you're correct, but to what extent she wants him remains to be seen - cryptic I know, but that's the way my muse has been working with this fic, lol. THanks for the review hon - glad you enjoyued it. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 11:15 pm Title: The English Patient

Can't wait to see everything blow up!!!

Author's Response: OHhhhhh, and it wil, just you watch, *winks*. THanks for the review hon - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 09:29 pm Title: The English Patient

*g* At last Spike isn't a grumpy patient. And Buffy is well prepared. *gg*
And enjoying the sight too.
*grins* Tipsy Buffy was fun. How goes the saying? Drunken ones and children tell the truth. Even it Spike didn't like it all (kid).
Spike got his own lesson (I don't know how good he'll remember it; how good it felt to simply be there with Buffy).
~ Enjoyed the update, some calm for the moment (eh before the storm, huh?)

Author's Response: Giggles - nothing like taking care of someone who isn't feeling well to bring about the other side pf poeple, huh? HAHAHAH - you're right about the saying, *winks*. ANd of course yes, it it the calm before the storm, giggles. Thanks for the review darling - smooches.

Reviewer: V Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 08:52 pm Title: The English Patient

Great characterization & interactions!

Author's Response: Thank you sweety - ga dyou like it. Thanks so much for the review. Huggles.

Reviewer: janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 07:15 pm Title: The English Patient

awww...spike and buffy are adorable together tehee :)
can't wait to see what happens next!!
p.s. love the title ;)

Author's Response: LOL - glad you liked the title and of course enjoyed the chappy - couldn't help changing the dynamics of their behavior towards each other for a bit. Thanks for the review hon, huggles.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 12:35 pm Title: The English Patient

Spike and Buffy's first 48 hours as roommates was definitely fun. The hot tub scene was awesome... lol! I loved the misunderstanding about the food. :D Great chapter!!!
Love the pretty banners! :D

Author's Response: YAY, I'm so pleased you enjoyed the chapter hon. I didn't feel it'd be fair unless I gave everybody the first 48 hours. And of course drunk Buffy and misinterpretations are always fun to write. Thanks for the review sweety , glad you like the banners too - they're awesome and I'm so pleased I got a couple of people to help out. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Pyro63 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 11:39 am Title: The English Patient

Awesome chapter!! Loved the response to Buffy waking up next to him and Spike realizing that maybe he didn't just want to shag her. Theres sure to be more fireworks in the next chapter. Absolutely Brilliant!!

Author's Response: Yeah, you can imagine her horror after waking up and not remmebering a thing - I know I would freak out. As for more fireworks - yup, you can count on it, *winks*. Thanks for the great review darling - hugs.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 10:47 am Title: The English Patient

Sorry.. had to add. I guess I glossed over that last paragraph.. Never stayed 'til morning.. until now.

And leave it to men always equate maturity with the size of their penus.. At least we are left with the feeling that he might be finally "growing up" and not needng a slut for a girlfriend..just Buffy. Have a feeling the Parker meeting will have Spike turning green with jealousy..

Again ... enjoyed had to come back and reread.. always better the second time around.

Author's Response: Nope, never stayed the full night with a woman - bad, I know, but that's him at least for now. HAHAHAHHAHAH, men really do, do that don't they - the measure of their AHEM being sooooo important. As for the Parker meeting - your guess is correct, and of course there'll be a little disaster as a result, hee hee - that's all I can say for now. Thanks again for the review hon. Smooches.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 07:38 am Title: The English Patient

brilliant as always. love the banners.
poor Buffy seems such an innocent. hope spike doesn't ruin her. more soon please

Author's Response: Giggles - yes, she definitely was innocent when she was tipsy - but it makes things interesting when they misinterpret one another. As for Spike ruining her? Nah, he'll get to her many times throughout the story, but she'll come back tougher every time. Thanks for the review hon - hugs.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 07:11 am Title: The English Patient

What a brilliant way to start the day. That was an such a good chapter and I am still smiling while writing this. I did feel a little sad when Spike was thinking about the fact that "he'd never spent the night with a woman before, not even after sex." He really has been sowing his wild oats hasn't he? And now he's beginning to realise that it's not all about shagging. I am so looking forward to more of this fab story and thank you for making my day - and it's only 8am!!!

Author's Response: Hahahahaha, glad I could help start your morning off right - w/ a few laughs. Oh yes, Spike has done nothing but sow his oats - unfortuntely, but he'll come around, it just takes a few revelations on his part. Again, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter sweets - and thanks so much for the great review. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 06:43 am Title: The English Patient

"The last thought that ran through his semi-conscious mind before dozing off was that he’d never spent the night with a woman before, not even after having sex. But the sensation of spooning the woman in his arms, knowing it was Buffy... well, he couldn’t help but think it felt kind of… nice." -- And slowly, he grows a bit as a person. Would never imagine them sailing smoothly, but these baby steps are wonderful. Amazing chapter, looking forward to the next.


Author's Response: Ah yes, he is human after all, just tightly bundled under the big bad persona, hee hee. It's true it won't be smooth sailing, but that's just the way they make it to their spuffy ending. I'm so glad you enjoyed it sweety and thanks so much for the great review - smoochies.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 06:21 am Title: The English Patient

Greek Goddess *blushes* Thanks babe, but I don't think I did anything worth mentioning!

Aaand to the chapter:
Just the fact that I rushed to read it as soon as I got to the office should be saying a lot :-P Once again you have a chapter full of twists and turns, but this time one that began and ended with awww-worthy moments! The hotness of Spike cumming with her name on his lips had me squirming in my seat (then again I should have known reading this at work was a big no-no!), the tender moments they shared were yummy while the conversation concerning... eating (of a different sort for each of them!) made me giggle so hard the guys at the office are still staring! LOL

Oh, and Matter of fact, he’d love to have her suck his ‘proof’. was just inspired! LMAO

I love you, Mistress Tina, and once again: you are the Goddess, I'm your bitch, k?

*hugs you tight*

Author's Response: You are a greek goddess, baby - kisses. Giggles - hope I didn't get you into too much trouble at work. You know I had to have a Spike-wank scene - and of course the eating conversation - hee hee hee. Love you boo - thanks again for al your help, it really wouldn't be the same.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 04:55 am Title: The English Patient

‘wee-willy-winky’

LOL. SO FREAKIN' FUNNY!!! i almost fell out of my chair when reading that line. lol. awesome.

okay...does buffy realize that she pretty much did the exact same thing with him the night before when she put his head in her lap and ran her fingers through his hair. it had nothing to do with him being sick....okay maybe a little bit. then again, spike still is trying to get into her pants. he's an ass but i knew that. and i keep forgetting that he's younger than her. that explains a lot. lol.

great job. give the muse a big wet kiss for me. more soon.

Author's Response: Hee heee, wee willy winky - she's nooooooo idea. Well, she did let him sleep on her lap, but she had no (drunken) idea he would have them fall asleep together. A bit different, but the results paralleled each other didn't it? Smooches right back at ya babe and thanks for the awesome review.

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