Reviews For Murphy’s Law
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Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 04:52 am Title: The English Patient

you are bloody brilliant :D

Author's Response: Giggles - thank babe - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Maia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 04:46 am Title: The English Patient

I am thoroughly enjoying reading about Buffy and her extreme denial! I mean, come on, how can anyone deny being attract to that gorgeousness???

I can't wait to see where you take this and to see the two fo them grow closer and closer and closer...

Great story!

Author's Response: Heee, and she is in denial, but rightfully so given the circumstances of him being her boss and then roomate. But they'll both come around - in their own way, *winks*. Thank you so very much for the review sweety - huggles.

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 02:10 am Title: The English Patient

Wonderful chapter! Loved the jacuzzi scene.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed that scene - it was my fav to write within the entire chapter. Thanks for the review sweets - huggles.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 02:02 am Title: The English Patient

Love, love, love the story. The build up is slow, tantalizing, and a sweet agony as only you can do. You have a way with our characters, especially to make a love/hate relationship. The sweet but quite feisty Buffy will tame the arrogant, womanizing Spike, and I can't wait to see how they slowly find their way to each other. As usual great job and many thanks
Hugs to you , Debbie

Author's Response: Oh yes, the build up is going to be slow - it wouldn't be realistic if it weren't - setting aside Murphys' Law and how it seems to plague their intertwined lives, lol. I think you'll enjoy the trip on their road to love, *winks*. THanks for the review hon - huggles.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 12:56 am Title: The English Patient

The games Spike will play... And they have already slept together .. LOL
Poor Buffy and the booze. The girl better be glad Spike still is a gentleman of sorts...

And how honest is... blonde and nympho..And loved his definition of honest and loyal.. I'll be loyal to you all night long until I leave in the morning..

Thanks for the update... needed the chuckle..

Author's Response: lol - indeed with the games, but some of it was genuine at least. Ah yes, Giggles - blonde/nympho - can't get more honest than that from him huh? GLad you enjoyed the chapter and of course more to follow soon - thanks for the great review darling - smoochies to you.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 12:50 am Title: The English Patient

Sweet! :) Buffy was a good nurse :) She really treated him nicely. The scene in the hot tub was so funny, Buffy and alcohol are very unmixy ;) Looking forward to read more, as always :) *hugs you tight*
/ Ariadne

Author's Response: Oh yes, she went above and beyond to make sure he got better - quite the contrast from her previous behavior, but then again, that's what guilt can do, hee hee. I'm so thrilled you enjoyed their weekend together my friend - hugs you tight back and thanks for the review.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 12:41 am Title: The English Patient

Now, that was a great chapter Tina, I swear they both tickle me with their banter, and he's out to get her now. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Oh yes, he's out to get her, but the poor bumbling fool has no true idea how to do it right, lol. GLad you liked the chapyy darling - more to foolow soon. Thanks for the review - hugs.

Reviewer: Vanilla Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 12:41 am Title: The English Patient

Love it love it love it. Drunk Buffy was so entertaining, Dirty Spike is always sexy, and their chemistry is just hot.

My absolute favorite part:
"She may be older than him, but he was no boy. The size of his ‘manhood’ alone was proof enough of that. Matter of fact, he’d love to have her suck his ‘proof’. That would shut her up in more ways than the obvious. "

I spit out Diet Coke I was laughing so hard. Excellent update! Can not WAIT for more. Hugs!

Author's Response: YAY - glad you enjoyed all the elements of the character and their display over the weekend. LMAO - over youreaction to his 'manhood' - hey, he's a guy in every sense of the word - of course he's going to think that, giggles. SOrry about your soda spitting darling, heeeeee heeee. GLad you enjoyed the fun in this chapter and thanks for the great review - smoochies to you sweets.

Reviewer: SpikesGoddess Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 11:54 pm Title: The English Patient

What a good nurse Buffy is! hehehe!

Bold Spike, thinking of Buffy whilst she was in the shower *slaps his perfect arse!* lmao

MMMMMmmm, hot tubs are always of the good!

"Wee-Willy-Winky" What a great name for it! tehehehehe

Oh no, a drunk Buffy may not always be a good Buffy! Poor thing will regret this thats for sure!

I would love to be sore in all the wrong places for Spike anyday of the week!

Great update! am loving it all to pieces, can't wait for the next update tho!



Author's Response: Hahhahahah, leave it to SPike to have a moment of weakness and a quick wank. And of course drunk Buffy is always hilarious - the truth just spilling from her lips witout a second thought, lol. I'm so theilled you enjoyed this update darling, I truly am - thank you so much for the wonderful review. More to follow soon - hugs.

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 11:33 pm Title: The English Patient

Brilliant, simply brilliant as always! I enjoyed Buffy taking care of her English patient. *lol* It was too funny to read how Spike milked the situation for all it was worth and how Buffy keeps denying anything he makes her feel. *giggles* She's so much in denial... almost as much as he is, that he still sees her only as shaggable.

And the time they spent in the hot tub? Pure genius, really. Buffy is too funny when she's drunk. *giggles* Don't they say children and drunk tell the truth, she certainly did, even if it sort of hurt Spike. ;)

Double guh over Spike's very hot intermission with himself. *wipes drool* And I absolutely adored the way they fell asleep in the couch and Buffy's reaction to waking in his arms and I'm so looking forward to those little tidbits you promised for the next chapter. If you can't tell, this is my favorite chapter, so far. ;) Love you, sweets. *smooches*

Author's Response: Oh yes, and you know SPike's personality - he'd milk it to the very last drop, hee hee. ANd drunk Buffy is always hilarious to write, giggles. Lots of truth rolling out of her mouth without even thinking.
Oh yes, I had to have a little 'self gratification' scene with Spike - he wants her after all, giggles.
Squeeee - glad you liked this chappy the most - it really was the most fun to write thus far - and thank you for all your help carino - it wouldn't be the same without it - luv u boo.

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